Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry.
单元话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1． 书面表达:
某中学生英文杂志社正在举办以"An unforgettable experience"为题的征文比赛，请你用英语写一篇短文记叙一次令你难忘的经历(包括时间、地点、过程、你的感受或体会),然后给该杂志社投稿。
要求: 1. 内容要全面，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯;2. 词数80-100，短文的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
An unforgettable experience
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2．假如你是任慧，你校校报Speak Out 栏目面向全校征集以"Something that made you happy or sad"为话题的稿件，请你根据以下要点写一篇短文投稿。
要点：1）What's the thing 2）When，where and how did it happen 3）How did it make you feel 4. What did you learn from the thing
要求：不少于100词，可适当发挥。
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3．人非圣贤，孰能无过？作为一名学生，在学习或生活中你是否也曾犯过错误、做过傻事？在认识到自己所犯错误或明白所做的傻事后，你又是如何改正的呢？请根据写作要点提示，以"The Mistake Made Me Grow Up"为题，用英语写一篇短文。
写作要点提示：
1）简述你犯过的一次错误或做过的一件傻事；
2）谈谈你是如何在他人的帮助下或在自己的努力下改正的；
3）你从中吸取了哪些教训或收获了哪些成长的经验。
注意事项：
1）词数：80左右；
2）短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；
3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4）已给标题不计入总词数。
The Mistake Made Me Grow Up
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4．生活态度决定着人的生活状态和行为习惯，快乐的生活会使你的人生更美好。你是怎样让自己保持快乐的呢？请你以“How to Make Yourself Happy”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示内容：⑴要自信（confident）；
⑵即使不高兴的时候，也不要忘记微笑；
⑶学会快乐地学习。
How to Make Yourself Happy
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5．B)书面表达
最近，你们班就“幸福是什么”进行了一次热烈的讨论，同学们都发表了自己的看法，他们认为：
1） 认真学习是幸福，父母总是关心他们的生活与健康，这也是幸福。
2） 有时候，当他们做错了事，周围的人会帮助他们改正，他们会感到幸福。
3）谈谈你的看法。你认为当你……时，你也会感到幸福。
请根据以上内容写一篇约80个词的英文短文，短文必须包含上面所提供的所有信息,可适当发挥。开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数。
Happiness is for everyone.
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6．用英语以Learn to Smile为题写一篇短文。
1、学会对自己微笑
①生活中、学习中会有不愉快的事，如考试不及格等(请再举个例子)；
②使你自信；
③击败你的人有时是你自己。
2、学会对他人微笑
人人都应该懂得，微笑是一种语言，使人与人更友好。
注意：①词数：80左右。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
②参考词汇：自信confidence打败beat
③短文包括所有内容要点，不可逐句翻译，可适当发挥。文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等。
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7．研究表明，音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情。请根据下表提示的内容，写一篇英语短文。
注意：1）词数80左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数；
2）内容必须包括上表中的要点；
3）条理清楚，语句连贯；
4）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息。
参考词汇：摇滚音乐rock music
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one's moods.
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答案解析部分
1．An unforgettable experience
Everyone has some experiences they can't forget. For me, doing badly in an interview is an unforgettable experience. It took place about one year ago. In order to work as a volunteer in our city's museum, I went for an interview.
I felt very nervous when they asked me why I wanted to be a volunteer. I made a lot of mistakes. The interview took about ten minutes, but it seemed like ages to me. When it was over, my T-shirt was wet.
The experience made me realize nervousness makes me feel stupid. From then on, I stopped being nervous during the interviews by fully preparing for them and breathing deeply to relax. Now I don't feel nervous anymore when I speak in front of people.
这是一篇命题作文，要求以"An unforgettable experience"为题写一篇作文，注意把握文章中心，明确写作要点。首先要描述最难忘的事情是什么；其次要简述事情经过，地点，时间和原因。最后描述个人感受。根据所给提示内容来写作，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。时态为一般过去时，以第一人称为主。写作过程中注意一些句式和短语的使用，并注意一些连接词和过渡句，使上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用熟悉的单词句式，同时注意使用高级词汇和句型为文章增色。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如：after a while一会儿；give up放弃；stand up站起来 等以及句型结构，如：In order to work as a volunteer in our city's museum, I went for an interview.(目的状语从句)；The experience made me realize nervousness makes me feel stupid. (宾语从句)。
2． Something that made me happy was winning the piano competition. It was held on September 20th in City Music Hall. On that day I saw many people there. I was so nervous. I was worried if I would make mistakes during my performance. Then I remembered what my father told me-always believe in yourself, and you are the best.
His words made me feel much better. When it was my turn to play, I walked up to the piano with confidence
and performed well. You wouldn't believe how much I wanted to know the result. When I learned I won first prize, I hugged my parents in excitement.
This experience taught me that it's very important to have confidence in yourself.
这是一篇提示性的话题作文，要求介绍使你快乐的或者难过的事。在写作时，首先要介绍这件事是什么，什么时候发生的，在哪里发生的等等都应交代清楚。之后要写这件事给你带来的感受是什么，你从中又学到了什么。这样一篇文章才算结构完整，在写作时注意时态应使用一般过去时，人称使用第一人称。同时要注意词汇的运用，做到句式正确。不要出现低级的错误。
本文介绍了一件使自己高兴的事——赢得了钢琴比赛的胜利。然后介绍了事情发生的时间地点和发生过程。最后介绍了自己的感受以及从中学到了什么。文章从内容上符合短文的要求，结构也比较完整。除此之外词汇应用和句式使用也很到位。在词汇上使用了如下短语：make sb.+形容词使某人……；make mistakes出错；believe in相信等等。句式上： Something that made me happy was winning thepiano competition. （定语从句）； I was worried if I would make mistakes during my performance. （宾语从句）； When it was my turn to play, I walked up to the piano with confidence and performed well.（时间状语从句）；You wouldn't believe how much I wanted to know the result. （宾语从句）。总体上看，本文结构完整，句式丰富，是一篇不错的习作。
3．The Mistake Made Me Grow Up
One day, I sat in the classroom alone. Suddenly I saw Lisa's new pen on her desk. What a beautiful pen! I really wanted to own it. Then I took the pen and put it in my schoolbag. While Lisa was looking for her pen, I was afraid and didn't have the courage to tell her the truth. When I got home, I told my mother about the pen. She said I made a mistake and told me I should be honest and make up for it. Then I realized how wrong I was and felt very sorry, so I decided to give the pen back to Lisa and say sorry to her. The next day, I did so and Lisa forgave me.
That's the mistake I once made. It made me grow up and I learned the importance of honesty.
这是一篇命题性英文写作。文章在书写时要根据题目给出的提纲进行书写。文章是讲述故事，可知句子时态用一般过去时，主语是第一人称。文章的语言要简练，易懂。文章的条理要清楚，不要出现语法和拼写错误。
这篇文章讲了作者拿了同学的新钢笔，不敢承认。然后意识到错误，最后把钢笔还给同学，给同学道歉，使自己意识到诚实的重要性。文章使用了常用的句式结构和短语。例如 What a beautiful pen! ；look for；have the courage to do sth; make up for; decide to do sth; say sorry to sb.; grow up等。文章结构完整，逻辑关系合理，是一篇不错的文章。
4．How to Make Yourself Happy
As we know, life is not all roses. Then how to make yourself happy when you have troubles We must try our best to be excellent enough. First, we should be good at cooperation. We should be always ready to listen to others patiently. Also, we are supposed be good at communicating with others. Second, we should always think in different ways. We must be brave enough to try different things. We should often come up with new ideas. Finally, I think we must learn to value our life and make ourselves safe and happy. We shouldn't swim alone. We should never be beaten by failure. We should be friendly to the people around us and respect other's kindness. We must be thankful to our parents, teachers and our classmates.
I believe, if everyone of us can do these with a sunshine heart, we will become more and more excellent.
这是一篇命题作文，主要介绍怎样让自己保持快乐的。同时这又是一篇提纲作文；在写作时,要把提纲中的三个要点写出来。因材料可知要用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。另外，在写作时句意要表达清楚,，信息完整,语言通顺，语意连贯。充分利用好提示语言，使作文结构完整。
本文叙述的生活态度决定着人的生活状态和行为习惯。紧扣材料，要点完整，表达清晰流畅。文中用到了很多短语，如：try one's best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事；be friendly to sb对某人非常友好；come up with相出。经典句型 if everyone of us can do these with a sunshine heart, we will become more and more excellent.还运用了first，second，finally等副词，增加了文章的亮点。
5．Happiness is for everyone. Some students think happiness comes from studying hard at their lessons. Their parents are always taking good care of their life and their health. They feel happy. Some students say when they do something wrong, people around them will help them to correct it. They believe this is happiness.
I agree with them. I love my friends congratulating me when I enjoy success. When I do something kind to others, like congratulating them, I feel happy, too.
When we think of these things, we realize that happiness is all around us.
这篇作文要求我们根据所给的提纲，就幸福是什么发表自己的看法。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，人称应该用第一和第三人称。作者首先告诉幸福就在我们身边，然后在第二段总作者告诉我们幸福是属于没每一个人的，并给我们举了两个事例。最后总结当我们想到这些事情时，我们就会意识到幸福就在我们身边。文章语句通顺，意思连贯，表达流畅。
提纲作文。题目中给出了具体的写作提纲，我们可以根据这一提纲，组织语言，并且丰富一些内容，串联成完整的短文。写作时，应注意英语表达和汉语的不同，使用正确的词汇和句型，还需要注意语法规范。
6．Learn to Smile
Smiling is an attitude to life. In our life, there may be something unpleasant. For example, you fail in an examination; or another time, you are misunderstood by your friends. These unpleasant things may make you feel bad. Then what will you do Why not learn to smile Smiling at yourself can regain confidence. Sometimes, the greatest enemy is yourself. That's to say, sometimes, you are beaten by yourself. We should also learn to smile at others. It will help us to get closer to others. So smiling is the most widely understandable language.
这是一篇命题作文。要求以"Learn to Smile"为题写一篇短文。按照所给的提示内容，写作中要包含所给的两个方面：学会对自己微笑以及学会对他人微笑。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称主要是第一人称单数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如：make sb. do；learn to do；smile at；by oneself 等以及句型结构，如：That's to say, sometimes, you are beaten by yourself. 等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
7． So people use different kinds of music to change moods. If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music. After you listen to it，you will feel relaxed. If you are crazy about computer games and feel overexcited, you can listen to country music. After listening to it, you will feel calm and peaceful. If you
feel tired and sleepy, you can listen to rock music. After listening to it, you can cheer yourself up. Sometimes when I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to disco music. After I listen to it, I feel happy again.
Music is so wonderful. I like it very much.
要求介绍音乐对人们的情绪的影响，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。通过分析可知，这篇作文我们应该用一般现在时态，第二人称来叙述。写作时，我们应注意语句之间的连接，可以使用一些简单的连词。也可以用一些我们平时积累的好的句型和短语，使短文的表达具有连贯性。
本篇条理清楚，语句简练，结构连贯。全文单词拼写正确，语法运用得当，结合了实际情况，简述了自己的经验和学习方法，符合题目要求，同时文章运用了许多好词好句，如 different kinds of …， crazy about ，cheer sb up 等，使文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭词汇的能力。
