Unit 10 You're supposed to shake hands.
单元话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1．假如你是李晨，你的美国笔友Linda打算来中国度假。请你根据下面所给的要点提示给她写一封不少于80词的电子邮件，简单介绍一下中国的风俗与餐桌礼仪。
要点：①赴宴要准时，见面要微笑、握手；
②每次不要吃太多；
③当你吃饱了，对主人的劝菜应礼貌回绝；
④告辞时，要对主人表示感谢。
要求：①内容包括所有提示要点，但不要逐词翻译；
②行文流畅、脉络清晰、字迹工整，可适当发挥；
③开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I'm glad to hear that you will come to my country for vacation. Different countries have different customs and table manners. In China ________________________________________________________________
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2．B ) 书面表达
假如你是“韩国通”赵明,你的好朋友李伟要去韩国留学,请你根据以下内容提示,以电子邮件的形式向他介绍一下韩国的风俗习惯。
1).韩国人见面时的传统礼节是鞠躬；
2).吃饭时,不要随便发出声响,也不准端着碗吃,应把饭碗放在左边,汤碗放在右边；
3).在朋友家做客时,不能穿鞋进屋。不穿袜子会被认为不懂礼貌；
4).应邀赴宴,带点小礼物比较好。
要求：1.要点齐全,语句通顺、连贯,不要逐字翻译； 2.词数不少于80。
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3．书面表达
假如你是王红，请用所学过的知识在班会课上向全班同学简单介绍中国、日本、瑞士、美国、墨西哥、韩国等世界各国不同的文化和习俗，如初次见面、时间概念和餐桌礼仪等。
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4．写作题
1）．你们的是如何成为朋友的？
2）．他/她如何帮助过你？
3）．你对友谊的看法。
写作要求：语句连贯，词数100个左右。
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5．俗话说“入乡随俗”，去另一个国家前,先了解其习俗和历史是很有必要的。请你根据初中阶段所学到的关于英国的习俗和历史,写一篇文章，投稿到某英文版的旅游杂志。
提示：
Manners shake hands; for the first time
say Mr. and Mrs. ; talk with older people
Eating habits drink tea at a tea party; not coffee or juice
Notices Don't talk loudly in public; stand in a line
(请再列举1~2点)
要求：1）词数90左右；
2）短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3）文中须包括所有写作要点,但不要逐字翻译，可适当加入过渡语句，使短文通顺、连贯。
Before we go to another country, it is necessary for us to learn something about its customs and history. Take Britain as an example
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The golden rule is: Watch the other people. Do as they do.
6．假如你叫李华，是某中学九年级的学生。你计划寒假去英格兰旅行。请根据下列提示给你英格兰的笔友Ben写一封信，告诉他你的安排，并就相关问题向他询问。
提示：1）寒假和父母一起去英格兰旅行；
2）计划在英格兰待十天；
3）向他询问英格兰的风俗习惯；
4）请他就去英格兰哪些地方旅行给出建议。
注意：60词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Ben,
How is everything
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I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
7．假如你是王洁，你的美国朋友Jenny发电子邮件想向你了解中国的就餐文化，请你根据电子邮件内容回复她。
Dear Wang Jie, I'm going to China. I will probably be invited to dinner. But I'm worried about what I should and shouldn't do as a guest during the dinner. Please give me some advice. I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours, Jenny
要求：100词左右; 电子邮件的格式、开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
I'm so glad you're coming to China! Before you come you should know about table manners in our country. Here is some advice.
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I hope this is helpful. E-mail me if you have any other question.
Yours,
Wang Jie
答案解析部分
1．Dear Linda,
I'm glad to hear that you will come to my country for vacation. Different countries have different customs and table manners. In China, if you're invited to dinner, you're supposed to be on time and shake hands with the host with a smile. While eating, you should not eat too much at a time. It's good manners to chew with your mouth closed and use a napkin to wipe your mouth sometimes. When you are full but the host still asks you to help yourself to some more food, you should say,
"Thank you. It's delicious, but I'm full." It's polite to say thanks while leaving.
Have a good trip!
Yours,
Li Chen
这是一篇材料作文，主要简单介绍一下中国的风俗与餐桌礼仪。在写作时,要把提纲中的四个要点写出来。因材料可知要用一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主。另外，在写作时句意要表达清楚,，信息完整,语言通顺，语意连贯。充分利用好提示语言，但不要逐词翻译；使作文结构完整。
本文主要介绍了中国的风俗与餐桌礼仪，紧扣材料，要点完整，表达清晰流畅。文中用到了很多短语，如：be glad to do sth；be supposed to do sth；shake hands with sb；help oneself to some food.等等。此外，还用了一些经典语句，比如, W Different countries have different customs and table manners. 与 It's good manners to chew with your mouth closed and use a napkin to wipe your mouth sometimes. 等。另外时态运用非常准确，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，没有任何语法错误。
2．Dear Li Wei
I am happy to hear that you are coming to Korea.Life in Korea is not difficult,but you should know some customs before you come in order to make your life easier.
In Korea,you are supposed to bow when you meet someone.The table manners there is a bit different from that in China.You are not supposed to make noise while eating or to pick up your bowl.You should put your rice bowl on your left and put your soup bowl on your right.If you are invited to a Korean house,you'd better take off your shoes,so it is rude if you don't wear your socks.By the way,if you are invited to a dinner party,remember to bring a small gift.
I hope you have a good trip.
Yours,
Zhao Ming
这篇作文要求以赵明的身份，按照提纲要求给好朋友李伟发电子邮件，介绍一些韩国的风俗。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，人称应该用第二人称。作者首先在第一段中说很高兴听说好朋友要来韩国。并介绍说在韩国生活并不难，但在来之前，应该了解一些习俗，以便让生活更轻松；然后在第二段中介绍了一些韩国的习俗；最后祝李伟玩得开心。作者使用了be happy to do sth ,in order to ,be supposed to do ,be different from ,had better 等固定短语，并用到了被动语态和一些从句。文章语句通顺，意思连贯，表达流畅。
提纲作文。题目中给出了具体的写作提纲，我们可以根据这一提纲，组织语言，并且丰富一些内容，串联成完整的短文。写作时，应注意英语表达和汉语的不同，使用正确的词汇和句型，还需要注意语法规范。
3．Good afternoon, everyone !
I'm glad to say something about different cultures in different countries. In China, people are supposed to shake hands when they meet for the first time. In Japan and Korea, people should bow to each other when they meet. In America and Mexico, people are supposed to shake hands when they meet for the first time. In
Switzerland, it's very important to be on time. We shouldn't visit a friend's house without calling first. In Japan, it's rude to eat or drink while walking down the street. It's very impolite to stick your chopsticks into your food. It's rude to point at anyone with chopsticks in China. Also it's impolite to ask personal questions like money, prices of clothes or marriage in western countries. Knowing different cultures is necessary for us to learn English better.
Thank you.
这是一篇提纲作文，本文要求按照所给提示介绍世界各国不同的文化和习俗，写作中要包含中国、日本、瑞士、美国、墨西哥、韩国等国的文化和习俗，如初次见面等文化，根据材料内容可知时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将各国的文化和风俗逐一进行了陈述，内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚，连贯，时态运用灵活准确，一些固定短语如be glad to do sth很高兴做某事，be supposed to do sth应该做某事，for the first time第一次，each other彼此，be on time准时，point at指向，等以及句型结构，如In Japan and Korea, people should bow to each other when they meet.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加自然流畅。
4．As the saying goes, “A true friend is the best possession.” And I do have such friends.
In the dubbing contest last semester, our group faced a big problem. The computer couldn't play our video, but one of my friends had the film we needed. So she went back home at once to bring it here. As a result, we got second prize.
I think a friend is someone who cares more for you than for himself. A friend is someone who gives you a hand when you're feeling down. So take good care of your friendships and cherish your best possession.
这篇短文要求我们根据所给材料的写一篇文章。材料中只给出了写作要点,需要自己围绕要点组织材料,确定具体写作内容。经过分析可知本文时态主要是一般过去时态及现在时态,注意时态与时间状语的搭配。人称用第一人称和第三人称。开头通过一句谚语表明了自己对朋友的看法，自然导入到朋友对自己的帮助。第二段对真正的朋友做进一步的阐述，和开头相呼应。其次这篇作文较好的注意了语句之间的链接，力求使文章表达流畅。文章句型的使用如：As the saying goes, As a result, we got second prize.，So take good care of your friendships and cherish your best possession.等。一些高级的复合句的使用也为文章添彩，如：a friend is someone who cares more for you than for himself. A friend is someone who gives you a hand when you're feeling down。
材料作文。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯,尽量利用有把握的句式。注意动词的正确形式，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
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Before we go to another country, it is necessary for us to learn something about its customs and history. Take Britain as an example. People usually shake hands when they meet for the first time. We should say Mr. and
Mrs. When we talk with older people. People can only drink tea at a tea party, but not coffee or juice. When we are in Britain, we can't talk loudly in public. And we should stand in a line when we wait for buses or trains.
The golden rule is: Watch the other people. Do as they do.
这是一篇提纲类作文， 介绍英国的习俗和历史，比如第一次见面要握手，在公共场所禁止大声喧哗等，所写内容已给出，不得逐词翻译，要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力，不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如go to another country，as an example，shake hands，the first time，等。而固定句型It is necessary for us to learn something about its customs and history和When we are in Britain, we can't talk loudly in public./ Before we go to another country, it is necessary for us to learn something about its customs and history.等多种时间状语从句的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
6．Dear Ben,
How is everything I am going to travel to England with my parents this winter vacation. We'd like to be there for ten days. But I don't know about England. I hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of England. I would like to travel to exciting places in England. Please introduce some
interesting places to me.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
这是一篇提纲性英文写作，文章的内容要根据题目中所给的提纲进行书写。文章要使用一般现在时，句子的主语是第一人称。文章的内容要条理清楚，文章的语言要流畅，语句要通顺，不要出现语法和拼写错误。
这篇文章是一封书信，文章使用了写信时常用的句式结构。例如How is everything ； I am going to do sth.; I would like to do sth.; Please do sth.; I'm looking forward to your reply. 文章还使用了常用的短语winter vacation; know about; provide sb. with sth等。文章简单，容易理解，是一篇很好的文章。
7．Dear Jenny,
I'm so glad you're coming to China! Before you come you should know about table manners in our country. Here is some advice. If you're invited to dinner, there will be a lot of different dishes, not just three courses. You may find it difficult to use chopsticks if you haven't tried before. It's a good idea to get some practice before you come. When the food is served, you should wait until you're invited to eat. The plates will be placed in the middle of the table for everyone to share. Take a little of everything and then have some more of the things you like. During the meal, you should say how much you like it because it takes the hosts much time to prepare it.
I hope this is helpful. E-mail me if you have any other question.
Yours,
Wang Jie
