【2024年中考英语真题满分作文精选】
专题06 旅游，环保与科技类
（一）
（2024·广东深圳·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的作品在“the Beauty of Nature”主题摄影展上获得了一等奖。你的英语老师邀请你在“英语一分钟演讲”上给同学们做分享。要点如下：
1. 拍摄的时间，地点，内容；
2. 选择这张照片的原因；
3. 参赛感受。
Dear________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all! Thank You!
【答案】例文：
Dear classmates,
My name is Li Hua, who is interested in photography. Here I would like to share my picture with you.
The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass. If you are careful enough, you will also find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture. How cute they are!
It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest. Actually, it also shows us the harmony between the animals and nature. Taking part in this competition makes me realize the beauty of nature and let us protect our Earth together!
That’s all! Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍演讲的主题，即介绍自己在摄影展上获得一等奖的照片；
第二步，介绍照片拍摄的时间、地点以及内容；
第三步，阐述选择这张照片的原因；
最后，表达自己的参赛感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②would like to do sth.想要做某事
③harmony和谐
④take part in参加
⑤realize意识到
[高分句型]
①The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass.（which引导定语从句）
②If you are careful enough, you will also find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture.（If引导条件状语从句）
③It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest.（such a/an adj.+名词+that从句）
（二）
（2024·甘肃兰州·中考真题）2024兰州马拉松于5月26日在金城兰州圆满落幕，来自国内外的四万名选手共跑 “百里黄河风情线”，感受 “交响丝路·如意甘肃”的独特魅力。此次赛事的成功举办，不仅提升了兰州的知名度和美誉度，更激发了市民的自豪感和归属感。
请你以“Marathon in My Eyes”为题写一篇英文短文，在班级英语沙龙活动中分享对此项赛事的看法。
内容要求：
1. 短文应包括以上思维导图中所有提示内容；
2. 提出个人看法及观点。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等个人信息；
4. 文章标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数，不用抄写在答题卡上。
Marathon in My Eyes
This year, 2024 Lanzhou Marathon was successfully held. I feel proud of my hometown. I’d like to share my ideas with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Marathon in My Eyes
This year, 2024 Lanzhou Marathon was successfully held. I feel proud of my hometown. I’d like to share my ideas with you.
First, the government organized the event well. It provided excellent services to make sure that all runners could have a perfect and unforgettable experience. Then, the runners were welcome. They tried their best to finish the marathon. After the event, they tasted some delicious foods. Their spirit encouraged more people. Next, the volunteers also played an important role in the event. They worked hard to support the runners. What they did showed the true meaning of selflessness.
In my opinion, the event was a great success. We should hold it every year. It is not only good for our health, but also a wonderful way to bring people closer together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上、下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，仔细阅读所给内容；
第二步，具体介绍这项赛事的参与者；
第三步，提出个人看法及观点。
[亮点词汇]
①make sure 确保
②play an important role 发挥重要作用
③support 支持
④not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①What they did showed the true meaning of selflessness.（what引导的主语从句）
（三）
（2024·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·中考真题）(注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、教师真实姓名和校名，否则不给分）
2024年哈尔滨冰雪旅游火遍全国。相信你的家乡也极具特色。作为青少年，请为你的家乡代言。写一篇短文，宣传你的家乡。内容包括：地理位置、天气状况、特色美食、人文景观等方面。
要求：
1. 字迹工整，表达清楚，语法正确；
2. 词数：30—50词。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
My hometown is Qiqihar. It lies in the west of Heilongjiang Province. The weather in my hometown is enjoyable. There are many places to visit, such as Heping Square, Zhalong Nature Reserve, Mingyue Island and so on. The most famous food is BBQ. The people here are friendly. Welcome to our hometown!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：文章主题是介绍自己的家乡，写作要点已给出，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍自己的家乡是什么地方；
第二步，具体介绍自己的家乡，可从地理位置、天气状况、特色美食、人文景观等方面介绍；
最后，欢迎大家来自己的家乡。
[亮点词汇]
①lie in位于
②such as例如
③friendly友好的
[高分句型]
There are many places to visit, such as Heping Square, Zhalong Nature Reserve, Mingyue Island and so on.（there be句型）
（五）
（2024·陕西·中考真题）假如你是李斌，开学初老师在劳动实践课(labor class)上布置了一项作业，内容是栽培一种植物(绿植、花、水果、蔬菜等)，观察并记录它(们)的生长变化。你完成了这项作业并且觉得很有趣，打算写一封邮件和你的笔友Tom分享此次经历和感受。
参考词汇：
grow, look after, watch, record (v.记录), a feeling of satisfaction, fun, learn, …
要求：
1.邮件应包含题目要求所给的关键信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.邮件中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Hi Tom,
How’s it going I’d like to share the interesting experience of my labor homework with you.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Can you share your interesting experience with me Looking forward to your reply.
Li Bin
【答案】例文
Hi Tom,
How’s it going I’d like to share the interesting experience of my labor homework with you.
This term, my teacher assigned me a project to grow a plant and record its changes. I chose a sunflower and named it Sunny. I put the seed to a nice container and carefully recorded its changes. Each day, I watered and looked after Sunny with care. It was fascinating to see how it slowly grew taller and stronger. When I saw the sunflower grow well, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. And the funny shape of the sunflower made me deeply interested in it.
The interesting experience taught me patience and the beauty of nature. I hope you try this too! Can you share your interesting experience with me Looking forward to your reply.
Li Bin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：主要记录栽培一种植物(绿植、花、水果、蔬菜等)，观察并记录它(们)的生长变化。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，说明栽种的种子和种子的变化；
第二步，分享感受。
[亮点词汇]
①looked after照顾
②interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
When I saw the sunflower grow well, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction.（时间状语从句）
（五）
（2024·四川眉山·中考真题）假定你是李华，打算在即将到来的暑假中前往北京旅行，请根据下图提示给你的英国笔友 David写一封邮件，分享你的旅行计划。
注意：
1. 词数 100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear David,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version
Dear David,
How’s it going
With the summer vacation coming soon, I feel so excited that my parents have promised to take my sister and me to Beijing. Now I’d like to share my travel plan with you.
We’ll go there by plane in July and stay for 5 days. During that period, we’re going to visit the Palace Museum to know about stories of the past. Besides, another place we must go is the Great Wall, which is the longest wall in the world. We’re going to take a walk there and admire how great we Chinese are!
I believe we’ll enjoy ourselves in Beijing. What about your summer plan
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍文章的主题，即暑假去北京的旅行计划；
第二步，介绍什么时间出发、旅行的方式、和谁一起去以及计划待几天；
第三步，具体介绍计划在北京做什么活动以及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①promise to do sth.承诺做某事
②share sth. with sb.和某人分享某事
③admire钦佩
[高分句型]
①With the summer vacation coming soon, I feel so excited that my parents have promised to take my sister and me to Beijing.（that引导宾语从句）
②Besides, another place we must go is the Great Wall, which is the longest wall in the world.（which引导定语从句）
（六）
（2024·四川凉山·中考真题）“读万卷书，行万里路”。暑假将至，成都某中学计划组织学生来大美凉山开展研学之旅。假如你是李华，请根据以下内容提示，以“Welcome to Liangshan”为标题，写一篇英语短文，向即将到来的成都同学介绍一下你的家乡凉山。
要求：1．语言表达准确，文章连贯、通顺；
2．文章应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
4．词数：80左右。文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Welcome to Liangshan, a place that you will never want to leave once you come...
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope all of you can enjoy yourselves in Liangshan.
【答案】例文：
Welcome to Liangshan, a place that you will never want to leave once you come. Let me tell you something about it.
It is in the southwest of China. The weather here is warm. You can wear T-shirts or skirts. People are friendly and kind. They are hospitable. There are many places of interest, such as Lushan Mountain, Lugu Lake and so on. You can taste a lot of delicious local food like tuotuo meat and barbecue.
One of the most popular festivals is The Torch Festival. You can roast a whole lamb. Also, you can sing and dance happily around the torch.
I hope it will be an unforgettable experience. I hope all of you can enjoy yourselves in Liangshan.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍那里的人文地理；
第三步，相信这一定会是一个难忘的经历。
[亮点词汇]
①in the southwest of在……东南部
②places of Interest名胜古迹
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①Let me tell you something about it.（祈使句）
②I hope it will be an unforgettable experience.（宾语从句）
（七）
（2024·江苏连云港·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的交换生朋友Kevin很喜欢你亲手做的小礼物，他来信询问制作过程，请你给他回信，内容包括：
（1）你送的礼物是什么；
（2）你送此礼物的原因；
（3）制作的方法或过程。
注意:
（1）词数90左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文一：
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself.
As the Dragon Boat Festival was coming, I decided to make a Xiang Bao for you. People in China, especially children wear it at the festival. We believe it can bring us good luck.
To make it, I prepared some string and a small bag that looks like a rice dumping. I also collected some leaves of a special plant called Ai Cao. Then, I put Ai Cao into the bag and tied it with the string.
Next time you come to China, I’ll show you how to make it.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文二：
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself.
It’s an unusual picture of us. I hope it can remind you of the happy time we were together.
Here is how to make it. First, choose a picture you like. It should be large and clear. Second, cover the picture with a piece of paper and draw along the lines. Then stick colorful beans and rice on the paper according to the drawing. Make sure you choose the proper color for each part so that your picture may look natural.
Hope you enjoy it. Looking forward to your work.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息。可以适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍自己送的礼物是什么；
第二步，介绍自己为什么送这件礼物，阐明原因；
第三步，着重介绍制作这份礼物的方法或过程。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth.决定做某事
②remind sb. of sth.提醒某人某事
③so that以便
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①We believe it can bring us good luck.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Make sure you choose the proper color for each part so that your picture may look natural.（so that引导目的状语从句）
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【2024年中考英语真题满分作文精选】
专题06 旅游，环保与科技类
（一）
（2024·广东深圳·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的作品在“the Beauty of Nature”主题摄影展上获得了一等奖。你的英语老师邀请你在“英语一分钟演讲”上给同学们做分享。要点如下：
1. 拍摄的时间，地点，内容；
2. 选择这张照片的原因；
3. 参赛感受。
Dear________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all! Thank You!
（二）
（2024·甘肃兰州·中考真题）2024兰州马拉松于5月26日在金城兰州圆满落幕，来自国内外的四万名选手共跑 “百里黄河风情线”，感受 “交响丝路·如意甘肃”的独特魅力。此次赛事的成功举办，不仅提升了兰州的知名度和美誉度，更激发了市民的自豪感和归属感。
请你以“Marathon in My Eyes”为题写一篇英文短文，在班级英语沙龙活动中分享对此项赛事的看法。
内容要求：
1. 短文应包括以上思维导图中所有提示内容；
2. 提出个人看法及观点。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等个人信息；
4. 文章标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数，不用抄写在答题卡上。
Marathon in My Eyes
This year, 2024 Lanzhou Marathon was successfully held. I feel proud of my hometown. I’d like to share my ideas with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（三）
（2024·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·中考真题）(注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、教师真实姓名和校名，否则不给分）
2024年哈尔滨冰雪旅游火遍全国。相信你的家乡也极具特色。作为青少年，请为你的家乡代言。写一篇短文，宣传你的家乡。内容包括：地理位置、天气状况、特色美食、人文景观等方面。
要求：
1. 字迹工整，表达清楚，语法正确；
2. 词数：30—50词。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（五）
（2024·陕西·中考真题）假如你是李斌，开学初老师在劳动实践课(labor class)上布置了一项作业，内容是栽培一种植物(绿植、花、水果、蔬菜等)，观察并记录它(们)的生长变化。你完成了这项作业并且觉得很有趣，打算写一封邮件和你的笔友Tom分享此次经历和感受。
参考词汇：
grow, look after, watch, record (v.记录), a feeling of satisfaction, fun, learn, …
要求：
1.邮件应包含题目要求所给的关键信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.邮件中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Hi Tom,
How’s it going I’d like to share the interesting experience of my labor homework with you.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Can you share your interesting experience with me Looking forward to your reply.
Li Bin
（五）
（2024·四川眉山·中考真题）假定你是李华，打算在即将到来的暑假中前往北京旅行，请根据下图提示给你的英国笔友 David写一封邮件，分享你的旅行计划。
注意：
1. 词数 100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear David,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
（六）
（2024·四川凉山·中考真题）“读万卷书，行万里路”。暑假将至，成都某中学计划组织学生来大美凉山开展研学之旅。假如你是李华，请根据以下内容提示，以“Welcome to Liangshan”为标题，写一篇英语短文，向即将到来的成都同学介绍一下你的家乡凉山。
要求：1．语言表达准确，文章连贯、通顺；
2．文章应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
4．词数：80左右。文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Welcome to Liangshan, a place that you will never want to leave once you come...
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope all of you can enjoy yourselves in Liangshan.
（七）
（2024·江苏连云港·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的交换生朋友Kevin很喜欢你亲手做的小礼物，他来信询问制作过程，请你给他回信，内容包括：
（1）你送的礼物是什么；
（2）你送此礼物的原因；
（3）制作的方法或过程。
注意:
（1）词数90左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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