Unit9 Have you ever been to a museum?
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
旅游地点
描述某人曾经去过的地方
本单元的话题是“有趣的地方”,该话题主要涉及人们曾经游览过的旅游胜地、城市或国家等。写作时多从它们的地理位置、人口、气候、景观和美食等方面入手。写作时,可以用have ever been to…描述某人曾经去过的地方,可以用have ever done sth.描述曾经经历过某事,可以用一般将来时表达对将来的期望。
写作指导
1. 描写某地的景色或景观时,一般要遵循的原则是:从总体到局部,从外到内。
2. 这类文章一般包括三段:开头是总体介绍,引出主题;中间是正文,具体介绍此地的特色,如著名的建筑、风景名胜等;第三部分是结尾。
3. 描写某地的短文属于说明文体,要弄清时间的立足点是"过去"、"现在",还是"将来"。
4. 表达方式要有所变化,景物描写用词容易重复、单调,因此写作时应选用不同的句式和表达方式来描述事物,使表达方式多样化。
真题感知
(2023·山东东营·统考中考真题)
旅游是我们看世界的重要方式,它可以让我们开阔视野,增长见识,丰富阅历,陶冶情操。如果你有机会出去旅游,你最想去的地方是哪里?为什么想去那个地方?你想在那个地方干些什么?请以“The place I want to visit”为题,写一篇100 词左右的短文。
要求:
1. 文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息。
2. 照抄试卷内容不得分。
The place I want to visit
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【单元写作素材】
◆开头句
①The most beautiful city I’ve ever been to is Xiamen.
②National Day is coming. It is a good idea to go on a trip to Disneyland in Shanghai.
③Have you ever been to Xi’an?It’s a beautiful city.
◆中间句
①It’s neither hot nor cold here all year round.
②The Disneyland is in the east of Shanghai. You can get there by underground.It’s made up of seven theme parks.
③You can join in different kinds of activities there,such as enjoying wonderful music or plays.
④Also,there are lots of nice presents in the shopping area for you to choose.
⑤With a long history,there are many places of interest in Xi’an,such as the famous Terracotta Army and the amazing Bell Tower.
⑥If you go to Xi’an,you will have a chance to try the delicious noodles and dumplings there.
◆结尾句
①I fell in love with it when I first visited it.
②The park is worth your visit. I hope you will have fun.
③I believe you’ll have a great time in Xi’an because it’s such a great place.
◆谚语积累
All roads lead to Rome.
条条大路通罗马。/殊途同归。
Reading ten thousand books is like traveling ten thousand miles.
读万卷书,行万里路。
Sentence Accumulation(句子积累)
你曾经去过太空博物馆吗?
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这是一个度过周六下午的好办法。
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观看茶的准备过程同喝茶一样令人享受。
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对于数以千计的中国游客来说,这个东南亚小岛是一个美妙而安全的度假地
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Model(范文借鉴)
【写作任务】请写一篇英语短文介绍你游览过的一个地方。
体裁:说明文 时态:以一般现在时为主 人称:第二人称和第三人称
每年假期都会有许多孩子前往上海迪斯尼乐园游玩。假如你是该乐园的一名志愿者,请你根据下面的提示内容,用英语向孩子们介绍这个乐园。
内容包括:
1.在上海东部,乘地铁可到达;
2.由7个主题公园(theme park)构成;
3.参加活动,欣赏表演;
4.购买礼物,观看烟火(firework)。要求:
1.词数:80左右;
2.书写工整,句式规范,条理清楚,标点符号使用正确。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 思路点拨
◆◆范文欣赏
Good morning,children!
National Day is coming.It is a good idea to go on a trip to Disneyland in Shanghai.
The Disneyland is in the east of Shanghai.You can get there by underground.It's made up of seven theme parks.You can join in different kinds of activities there,such as enjoying wonderful music or plays.Also,there are lots of nice presents in the shopping area for you to choose.At night,you can watch fireworks.
The park is worth your visit.I hope you will have fun.
常用句型
1. 位置(location)
be located/situated in/on/at/to; lie in/on/at/to
in the center of; in/to/on the east of
2. 面积(area)
cover/have an area of…; with an area of …
It is …long/wide (from east to west).
3. 气候(climate)
The climate varies/is different from place to place
neither too hot nor too cold
4. 交通(transportation)
It is very convenient for…
The best /nearest way to … is…
It takes…to take a taxi/bus/walk from … to …
5. 人口(population)
have/with a (large) population (of…)
The population of…is…
…percent of the population are…
6. 历史(history)
have/with a history of…years
date from/ date back to
7. 资源(resources)
be rich/wealthy in; with abundant resources
be famous/well-known for/as…
mainly produce…
The main agricultural products are…
8. 景色(scenery)
is known as/ is famous for/is home to
places of interest
scenic spots
7. 特色(character)
The place is famous for…
The special character of the place is…
Something special in the place is…
典例:
请结合自己的经历,描述你去过的最有趣的一所公园(游乐场)。
要点提示:
1. 公园的名称、地理位置和基本设施;
2. 介绍公园的特色或最吸引你的地方;
3. 邀请大家多到这个地方玩。
作文要求:
1. 不能照抄原文,不得出现真实的人名和学校名字。
2. 语句连贯,词数80左右。
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【写作指导】
一、写什么——细审题,列要点
1. 介绍公园的名称、地理位置和基本设施。
2. 描述公园的特色。
3. 邀请大家到此游玩。
二、怎么写——遣词句,重结构
第一部分:开门见山 (介绍公园的位置和基本设施。用一般现在时。)
我去过的最有趣的公园是长隆海洋王国。
The most interesting park I have been to is _____________.
它坐落在珠海的横琴岛上。
It lies in _________________________________________.
公园里有各种各样的动物和表演。
There are _____________________________________.
我们还可以找到购物中心、餐厅和酒店。
We can also find _______________________________.
(根据实际情况描述,挑有代表的性的建筑来讲。)
第二部分:突出特色(描述具体的特色,以公园的常规活动为例时,动词用一般现在时。)
海洋王国最吸引我的是大游行。
The most attractive thing of the park is ________.
大游行每天三次。
We can see the cruise ___________________.
游行开始时,游客站在路的两旁。
When it begins, visitors will stand on _________.
游行人员沿路又唱又跳,还会和游客玩游戏。
The people _________, they also _______ with the visitors.
这让游客们很高兴。
It makes the visitors ______________________.
第三部分:邀请出游(提建议时可以选用各种提建议的句型。)
快到海洋王国玩一玩吧!
So, __________ to Chimelong and ____________________.
【佳作展示】
The Most Interesting Park I Have Been to
The most interesting park that I have ever been to is the Chimelong Ocean Kingdom. It lies in Hengqin island in Zhuhai, Guangdong Province. There are many animals and shows in the park. We can find public toilets, shopping centers, restaurants and hotels inside.
The most attractive thing of the park to me is the cruise. We can see the cruise three times in the park. every day When it begins, visitors will stand on both sides of the road. The people in the cruise dance and sing along the way. They also play games with visitors when they walk. It makes the visitors happy.
So, come to Chime long! Have fun in the Ocean Kingdom!
(一)
1.河南是中华民族和华夏文明的重要发祥地。中华文明的起源、文字的发明、城市的形成和统一国家的建立,都与河南有着密不可分的关系。假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Danny发邮件告诉你他想今年暑假到河南旅游,但他对河南不是很了解,想向你寻求建议。请你用英语写一封回信,为他推荐一个城市,帮助他度过一个愉快的假期。
写作要点:
1. 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Danny,
I’m glad to hear you will visit Henan this summer vacation.
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Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
2.今年暑假 7月28日至 8月8日第31届世界大学生运动会( FISU)将在成都举行,来自世界各地的大学生运动员将齐聚一堂。假如你是李华,应邀参加四川电视台成都宣传CHENGDU 2021篇的拍摄,请你根据以下图示用英文给外国朋友简要介绍家乡成都。
注意:
(1)请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格(一空一词);
(2)须包含图示中所有信息;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
(4)词数80-100,开头已给出,且不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua from Chengdu.
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(三)
3.某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜爱的中国城市”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍你最喜爱的一座中国城市的概况(如:地理位置、人口、气候等)、你喜欢它的原因、最佳游览时间以及注意事项等。
提示:1. What is your favourite city like
2. Why do you like it
3. When is the best time to visit it
4. ...
注意:1.包括所给提示内容,并适当增加细节;
2.语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯;
3.词数 100 左右。
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(四)
4.学校英语文化节将举办“秀秀我的家乡”的Vlog(短视频)比赛。假如你是Zhang Lei,请根据以下思维导图中的内容要点提示,用英语写一篇Vlog解说词介绍你的家乡。
注意:
(1)包含所有内容要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)文中不得透露个人信息;
(3)词数80左右(短文首尾句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:places of interest(名胜),delicious food(美食),the best time to(……的最佳时间)
Hello, I’m Zhang Lei. I’d like to say something about my hometown.
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Welcome to my hometown. I’m sure you will like it.
(五)
5.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tony想了解你的家乡——宁河,请根据下面的提示,写一篇英文短文,向他介绍家乡的情况。
提示:
(1)位于天津东北部。
(2)人们勤劳善良,待人友好。
(3)物产丰富,盛产大米、鱼等。
(4)风景优美,七里海风景如画。
(5)历史悠久,天尊阁有几百年历史。
(6)……
参考词汇:东北的 northeast; 天尊阁Tianzunge
要求:
(1)词数:80词左右;
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
(六)
6.假如你是李明,你的美国笔友Charles计划今年要来中国旅游。请你根据下面的提示,给Charles写一封信,向他推荐一个旅行目的地,并给出你的建议。
内容提示:
(1)Which is the best place to visit
(2)What is the place special for
(3)What is your advice
要求:
(1)中心突出,语义连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名;
(3)词数:80词左右。
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(七)
7.假如你是李华。你的朋友Tom今年寒假将来中国参观,他想向你了解一些有关北京的名胜、美食、文化、气候等情况。请给他回复邮件。
要求:
1. 词数100左右,(开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 须包含所有要点提示,并可适当补充,语句通顺,行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to learn that you’re going to visit China this winter holiday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
(八)
8.假设你是李华,你的朋友Mike想来广安游玩。请你根据下面思维导图中的提示给他写一封英文邮件,简要介绍一下广安。
1. 70词左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 邮件应包含思维导图中的所有信息,可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear Mike,
I’m so glad to hear that you will pay a visit to Guang’an. Let me tell you something about Guang’an.
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Yours,
Li Hua
(2023·湖北襄阳·统考中考真题)
今年五一,襄阳凭借丰富的旅游资源和优质的服务,吸引了各地的游客前来“打卡”。在校园英语文化周,你将代表班级做关于“旅行”的英语演讲。请根据以下要点提示,结合你的旅游或出行经历,写一篇英语演讲稿。
1.要点提示:
(1)简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法;
(2)详述你的一次旅游或出行经历;
(3)根据你的旅行感受,为襄阳的旅游发展提出一条合理的建议或希望。
2.注意事项:
(1)词数90左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
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(2023·湖北·统考中考真题)
尊老敬老是中华民族的传统美德。东东的爸爸妈妈把乡下的爷爷接到了城里一起生活。假如你是东东,请结合图片提示,发挥你的想象,用英文写一篇80词左右的日记。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
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(2023·湖北荆州·统考中考真题)
假如你是荆州旅游形象大使,你将怎样用英语向外国朋友推介荆州呢?请根据以下要点,来试一试吧!
要点:1.位置:湖北境内,长江之滨;
2.历史:悠久的历史,楚文化(Chu Culture)……
3.景点:荆州博物馆,古城墙……
4.美食:荆州鱼糕(fish cake)……
5.补充一两点与荆州有关的信息。
要求:1.文章必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥使行文连贯;
2.不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
3.不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Ladies and gentlemen! I’m very honored to introduce Jingzhou Ancient City here.
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Thanks for listening!
(2023·湖南衡阳·统考中考真题)
假如你是李强,你校即将举办的“活动周”有四个项目。请你根据下面表格的信息,写一篇英语短文,介绍你想参加的活动内容并说明其理由。
Project A Sports Day A Volunteer Day A School Trip Day A Talent Show Day
Activities ·play basketball ·run ·…… ·visit the old people’s home ·clean up Nanhu Park ·…… ·visit Hengyang Museum ·go to the countryside ·…… ·sing a song ·draw ·……
Reasons ·keep healthy ·feel relaxed ·…… ·care for the old ·protect the environment ·…… ·learn a lot ·be close to nature ·…… ·improve myself ·take up a hobby ·……
要求:
(1)根据上面表格中的信息,选择至少两个方面的内容行文,需适当发挥;
(2)文中不出现真实的校名和人名等;
(3)字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,条理清楚;(4)词数不少于80。
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(2023·四川宜宾·统考中考真题)
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Moore来信希望了解你的家乡宜宾的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信必须包括下面的内容。
注意:
1. 词数:100词左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
2. 参考词汇:places of interest 名胜古迹;hot pot 火锅;economy 经济
Dear Moore,
I’m glad to receive your letter. You wanted to know something about my hometown Yibin. Now let me tell you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(2023·江苏连云港·统考中考真题)
走进江苏,游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加“Go Jiangsu”旅游活动。假如你是李华,请你根据以下图片及文字提示,以“Welcome to Lianyungang”为题写一篇英语短文,邀请他们走进家乡连云港,品山海文化,游大圣故里。
注意:
(1)词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Welcome to Lianyungang
I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you.
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(2022·江苏南通·统考中考真题)
华夏大地,人杰地灵;中华文明,源远流长。假如你是李华,你国外的朋友Andy想了解中国,请根据下图提示,选择或自拟至少两个要点进行介绍。
注意:1.词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Learning that you are interested in China, I feel honored to introduce my country to you.
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Unit9 Have you ever been to a museum?
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
旅游地点
描述某人曾经去过的地方
本单元的话题是“有趣的地方”,该话题主要涉及人们曾经游览过的旅游胜地、城市或国家等。写作时多从它们的地理位置、人口、气候、景观和美食等方面入手。写作时,可以用have ever been to…描述某人曾经去过的地方,可以用have ever done sth.描述曾经经历过某事,可以用一般将来时表达对将来的期望。
写作指导
1. 描写某地的景色或景观时,一般要遵循的原则是:从总体到局部,从外到内。
2. 这类文章一般包括三段:开头是总体介绍,引出主题;中间是正文,具体介绍此地的特色,如著名的建筑、风景名胜等;第三部分是结尾。
3. 描写某地的短文属于说明文体,要弄清时间的立足点是"过去"、"现在",还是"将来"。
4. 表达方式要有所变化,景物描写用词容易重复、单调,因此写作时应选用不同的句式和表达方式来描述事物,使表达方式多样化。
真题感知
(2023·山东东营·统考中考真题)
旅游是我们看世界的重要方式,它可以让我们开阔视野,增长见识,丰富阅历,陶冶情操。如果你有机会出去旅游,你最想去的地方是哪里?为什么想去那个地方?你想在那个地方干些什么?请以“The place I want to visit”为题,写一篇100 词左右的短文。
要求:
1. 文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息。
2. 照抄试卷内容不得分。
The place I want to visit
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【答案】例文:
The place I want to visit
Beijing, the second largest city in our country, is the place I want to visit.
There are several reasons why I would like to visit Beijing. First, Beijing is the capital of China, and has a history of more than 3,000 years. It has been the capital for many dynasties. Second, there are many historical buildings, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. There are also some new stadiums, including the Bird Nest and the Water Cube, which were built for the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.
I am really looking forward to going there and visiting all the wonderful places. At the same time, I hope Beijing will be more and more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:题目要求以“The place I want to visit”为题写短文介绍自己想要参观的地方。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍想要去参观哪里;
第二步,谈谈想去这个地方的原因;
第三步,介绍想要在那里干些什么。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth. 想要做某事
②such as 例如
③look forward to doing sth. 期待做某事
④at the same time 与此同时
[高分句型]
①There are several reasons why I would like to visit Beijing.(why引导定语从句)
②Second, there are many historical buildings, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace.(there be句型)
【单元写作素材】
◆开头句
①The most beautiful city I’ve ever been to is Xiamen.
②National Day is coming. It is a good idea to go on a trip to Disneyland in Shanghai.
③Have you ever been to Xi’an?It’s a beautiful city.
◆中间句
①It’s neither hot nor cold here all year round.
②The Disneyland is in the east of Shanghai. You can get there by underground.It’s made up of seven theme parks.
③You can join in different kinds of activities there,such as enjoying wonderful music or plays.
④Also,there are lots of nice presents in the shopping area for you to choose.
⑤With a long history,there are many places of interest in Xi’an,such as the famous Terracotta Army and the amazing Bell Tower.
⑥If you go to Xi’an,you will have a chance to try the delicious noodles and dumplings there.
◆结尾句
①I fell in love with it when I first visited it.
②The park is worth your visit. I hope you will have fun.
③I believe you’ll have a great time in Xi’an because it’s such a great place.
◆谚语积累
All roads lead to Rome.
条条大路通罗马。/殊途同归。
Reading ten thousand books is like traveling ten thousand miles.
读万卷书,行万里路。
Sentence Accumulation(句子积累)
你曾经去过太空博物馆吗?
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这是一个度过周六下午的好办法。
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观看茶的准备过程同喝茶一样令人享受。
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对于数以千计的中国游客来说,这个东南亚小岛是一个美妙而安全的度假地
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Model(范文借鉴)
【写作任务】请写一篇英语短文介绍你游览过的一个地方。
体裁:说明文 时态:以一般现在时为主 人称:第二人称和第三人称
每年假期都会有许多孩子前往上海迪斯尼乐园游玩。假如你是该乐园的一名志愿者,请你根据下面的提示内容,用英语向孩子们介绍这个乐园。
内容包括:
1.在上海东部,乘地铁可到达;
2.由7个主题公园(theme park)构成;
3.参加活动,欣赏表演;
4.购买礼物,观看烟火(firework)。要求:
1.词数:80左右;
2.书写工整,句式规范,条理清楚,标点符号使用正确。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 思路点拨
◆◆范文欣赏
Good morning,children!
National Day is coming.It is a good idea to go on a trip to Disneyland in Shanghai.
The Disneyland is in the east of Shanghai.You can get there by underground.It's made up of seven theme parks.You can join in different kinds of activities there,such as enjoying wonderful music or plays.Also,there are lots of nice presents in the shopping area for you to choose.At night,you can watch fireworks.
The park is worth your visit.I hope you will have fun.
常用句型
1. 位置(location)
be located/situated in/on/at/to; lie in/on/at/to
in the center of; in/to/on the east of
2. 面积(area)
cover/have an area of…; with an area of …
It is …long/wide (from east to west).
3. 气候(climate)
The climate varies/is different from place to place
neither too hot nor too cold
4. 交通(transportation)
It is very convenient for…
The best /nearest way to … is…
It takes…to take a taxi/bus/walk from … to …
5. 人口(population)
have/with a (large) population (of…)
The population of…is…
…percent of the population are…
6. 历史(history)
have/with a history of…years
date from/ date back to
7. 资源(resources)
be rich/wealthy in; with abundant resources
be famous/well-known for/as…
mainly produce…
The main agricultural products are…
8. 景色(scenery)
is known as/ is famous for/is home to
places of interest
scenic spots
7. 特色(character)
The place is famous for…
The special character of the place is…
Something special in the place is…
典例:
请结合自己的经历,描述你去过的最有趣的一所公园(游乐场)。
要点提示:
1. 公园的名称、地理位置和基本设施;
2. 介绍公园的特色或最吸引你的地方;
3. 邀请大家多到这个地方玩。
作文要求:
1. 不能照抄原文,不得出现真实的人名和学校名字。
2. 语句连贯,词数80左右。
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【写作指导】
一、写什么——细审题,列要点
1. 介绍公园的名称、地理位置和基本设施。
2. 描述公园的特色。
3. 邀请大家到此游玩。
二、怎么写——遣词句,重结构
第一部分:开门见山 (介绍公园的位置和基本设施。用一般现在时。)
我去过的最有趣的公园是长隆海洋王国。
The most interesting park I have been to is _____________.
它坐落在珠海的横琴岛上。
It lies in _________________________________________.
公园里有各种各样的动物和表演。
There are _____________________________________.
我们还可以找到购物中心、餐厅和酒店。
We can also find _______________________________.
(根据实际情况描述,挑有代表的性的建筑来讲。)
第二部分:突出特色(描述具体的特色,以公园的常规活动为例时,动词用一般现在时。)
海洋王国最吸引我的是大游行。
The most attractive thing of the park is ________.
大游行每天三次。
We can see the cruise ___________________.
游行开始时,游客站在路的两旁。
When it begins, visitors will stand on _________.
游行人员沿路又唱又跳,还会和游客玩游戏。
The people _________, they also _______ with the visitors.
这让游客们很高兴。
It makes the visitors ______________________.
第三部分:邀请出游(提建议时可以选用各种提建议的句型。)
快到海洋王国玩一玩吧!
So, __________ to Chimelong and ____________________.
【佳作展示】
The Most Interesting Park I Have Been to
The most interesting park that I have ever been to is the Chimelong Ocean Kingdom. It lies in Hengqin island in Zhuhai, Guangdong Province. There are many animals and shows in the park. We can find public toilets, shopping centers, restaurants and hotels inside.
The most attractive thing of the park to me is the cruise. We can see the cruise three times in the park. every day When it begins, visitors will stand on both sides of the road. The people in the cruise dance and sing along the way. They also play games with visitors when they walk. It makes the visitors happy.
So, come to Chime long! Have fun in the Ocean Kingdom!
(一)
1.河南是中华民族和华夏文明的重要发祥地。中华文明的起源、文字的发明、城市的形成和统一国家的建立,都与河南有着密不可分的关系。假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Danny发邮件告诉你他想今年暑假到河南旅游,但他对河南不是很了解,想向你寻求建议。请你用英语写一封回信,为他推荐一个城市,帮助他度过一个愉快的假期。
写作要点:
1. 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Danny,
I’m glad to hear you will visit Henan this summer vacation.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Danny,
I’m glad to hear you will visit Henan this summer vacation. It’s indeed a great place to explore the roots of Chinese civilization. I highly recommend you visit the city of Luoyang.
Luoyang is famous for its historical and cultural sites. One must-visit attraction is the Longmen Grottoes, which is a UNESCO World Heritage site. When it comes to food, Luoyang offers a wide variety of delicious dishes. Don’t miss out on the famous Luoyang Water Banquet, which consists of 24 courses of various dishes cooked in different ways using water. Besides, Luoyang is known for its traditional peony culture. The city holds an annual Peony Festival, where you can admire the beautiful peony flowers in full bloom. Lastly, Luoyang has a rich history. It was once the capital of multiple dynasties, including the Eastern Zhou and Tang Dynasty.
I hope this recommendation helps you have a fantastic vacation in Henan. Enjoy your trip!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍自己想推荐的城市——洛阳;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从景点、美食、风俗、历史等角度介绍洛阳。
第三步,书写结语,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①indeed确实
②traditional传统的
③annual一年一次的
[高分句型]
①One must-visit attraction is the Longmen Grottoes, which is a UNESCO World Heritage site. (定语从句)
②Don’t miss out on the famous Luoyang Water Banquet, which consists of 24 courses of various dishes cooked in different ways using water. (祈使句)
(二)
2.今年暑假 7月28日至 8月8日第31届世界大学生运动会( FISU)将在成都举行,来自世界各地的大学生运动员将齐聚一堂。假如你是李华,应邀参加四川电视台成都宣传CHENGDU 2021篇的拍摄,请你根据以下图示用英文给外国朋友简要介绍家乡成都。
注意:
(1)请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格(一空一词);
(2)须包含图示中所有信息;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
(4)词数80-100,开头已给出,且不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua from Chengdu.
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua from Chengdu. Chengdu is a beautiful city and enjoys the reputation of being a “Heaven Land of Plenty”.
It’s the capital city of Sichuan Province in the southwest of China. It covers an area of 14.335 square kilometers with a population of around 20.93 million. It’s about 4,500 years old. Known as the home of pandas, Chengdu also has lots of interesting places like Jin-li Old Street and Du Fu’s Thatched Cottage. The transportation here is very convenient. There are many subways. If you come here to visit, the Panda Research Base is a must go. There are many lovely pandas here.
Chengdu is also called the world of food, and it’s especially famous for hot pot. There are also many famous attractions and entertainment places for you to visit and play. The weather is fine in September, tourists can come here at this time.
Welcome to Chengdu.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要求已给出,学生不要遗漏题目中的要点,适当添加细节,写作时保持主谓一致,注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍成都的地理位置;
第二步,介绍成都的历史、景点等;
第三步,介绍成都的美食及天气等。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of许多
②the home of………的家
③be famous for因……而出名
[高分句型]
①If you come here to visit, the Panda Research Base is a must go.(条件状语从句)
②There are also many famous attractions and entertainment places for you to visit and play. (There be句型)
(三)
3.某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜爱的中国城市”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍你最喜爱的一座中国城市的概况(如:地理位置、人口、气候等)、你喜欢它的原因、最佳游览时间以及注意事项等。
提示:1. What is your favourite city like
2. Why do you like it
3. When is the best time to visit it
4. ...
注意:1.包括所给提示内容,并适当增加细节;
2.语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯;
3.词数 100 左右。
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【答案】One possible version:
My favourite city is Haikou. It is in the south of China with a population of about 2.9 million. It’s a small but very beautiful city.
The best thing to do in Haikou is to visit Qilou. You can know a lot about history and culture of Haikou and at the same time, you can enjoy delicious local food there. Haikou is a good place for foods, so you must try seafood and different kinds of snacks such as, Qingbuliang, Hainan noodles and so on. Not far away from Qilou, you can see Zhonglou which is the landmark building in Haikou. If you walk along the seaside near Zhonglou, you can see modern buildings: Century Bridge and Yundong Library.
The weather in Haikou is fine all year round. Take your swimming clothes because you can go swimming in the sea, even in December. So you can come to Haikou any time you like. Welcome to Haikou.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己最喜欢的城市是海口;
第二步,具体介绍该城市是什么样的,为什么喜欢它;
第三步,介绍最佳参观时间。
[亮点词汇]
①in the south of在……的南部
②at the same time同时
③different kinds of不同种类的
[高分句型]
①You can know a lot about history and culture of Haikou and at the same time, you can enjoy delicious local food there.(并列句)
②If you walk along the seaside near Zhonglou, you can see modern buildings: Century Bridge and Yundong Library.(条件状语从句)
(四)
4.学校英语文化节将举办“秀秀我的家乡”的Vlog(短视频)比赛。假如你是Zhang Lei,请根据以下思维导图中的内容要点提示,用英语写一篇Vlog解说词介绍你的家乡。
注意:
(1)包含所有内容要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)文中不得透露个人信息;
(3)词数80左右(短文首尾句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:places of interest(名胜),delicious food(美食),the best time to(……的最佳时间)
Hello, I’m Zhang Lei. I’d like to say something about my hometown.
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Welcome to my hometown. I’m sure you will like it.
【答案】例文
Hello, I’m Zhang Lei. I’d like to say something about my hometown.
We are located in the picturesque city of Hangzhou, which is the capital of Zhejiang Province in Eastern China. One of the must-visit places in Hangzhou is the famous West Lake.The lake is surrounded by gardens, pagodas, and temples, creating a serene and tranquil environment. Another highlight is the Lingyin Temple, one of the largest and oldest Buddhist temples in China. When it comes to delicious food, Hangzhou cuisine is famous for its delicate flavors and unique preparation methods. One dish you shouldn’t miss is “Beggar’s Chicken,” a whole chicken wrapped in lotus leaves and cooked over coals. Another local favorite is “Longjing Tea,” which is not just a drink but an experience. The best time to visit Hangzhou is during the spring, from April to May. The weather is pleasant, and the flowers are in full bloom. So, if you’re looking for a place that offers both tranquility and excitement, Hangzhou is the place to be.
Welcome to my hometown. I’m sure you will like it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍家乡的位置和名胜。
第二步,接着介绍家乡的美食和最佳旅游时间。
[亮点词汇]
①one of the must-visit places 必游之地之一
②during the spring 在春季
③look for 寻找
[高分句型]
①When it comes to delicious food, Hangzhou cuisine is famous for its delicate flavors and unique preparation methods.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②So, if you’re looking for a place that offers both tranquility and excitement, Hangzhou is the place to be.(if引导的条件状语从句)
(五)
5.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tony想了解你的家乡——宁河,请根据下面的提示,写一篇英文短文,向他介绍家乡的情况。
提示:
(1)位于天津东北部。
(2)人们勤劳善良,待人友好。
(3)物产丰富,盛产大米、鱼等。
(4)风景优美,七里海风景如画。
(5)历史悠久,天尊阁有几百年历史。
(6)……
参考词汇:东北的 northeast; 天尊阁Tianzunge
要求:
(1)词数:80词左右;
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear from you. I heard that you want to know something about my hometown. Now let me tell you.
My hometown Ninghe is located in the northeast of Tianjin. The people here are hardworking, kind and friendly. Ninghe is rich in products, rich in rice, fish and so on. The scenery here is beautiful, and the Seven Caspian Seas are picturesque. Ninghe has a long history and Tianzunge has a history of hundreds of years.
Welcome to Ninghe.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍自己的家乡;
第二步,具体介绍家乡和家乡的人等;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be located in位于
②be rich in盛产
③has a long history有着悠久的历史
[高分句型]
①I heard that you want to know something about my hometown.(宾语从句)
②The scenery here is beautiful, and the Seven Caspian Seas are picturesque.(并列句)
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6.假如你是李明,你的美国笔友Charles计划今年要来中国旅游。请你根据下面的提示,给Charles写一封信,向他推荐一个旅行目的地,并给出你的建议。
内容提示:
(1)Which is the best place to visit
(2)What is the place special for
(3)What is your advice
要求:
(1)中心突出,语义连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名;
(3)词数:80词左右。
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【答案】例文
Dear Charles,
I’m glad to learn that you are coming to China. I think Jinan is a good place to visit.
Jinan is in the central and western part of Shandong Province. It’s a beautiful and clean city. The weather here is perfect. There are many places of interest here. You can enjoy the beautiful scenery of different lakes. Among them, Baotu Spring is the most famous. You can also go to Mount Qianfo. It’s very beautiful and the air is very fresh. There are many plants and flowers. If you come in summer, you’d better wear cool clothes because Jinan is very hot in summer.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据内容提示,向对方推荐一个旅行目的地,并给出建议,注意要点齐全,并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达很高兴对方要来中国旅游,并引出推荐的目的地;
第二步,介绍这个地方的特别之处及自己的建议;
第三步,书写结语,期待对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest名胜古迹
②be glad to do sth高兴做某事
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I think Jinan is a good place to visit. (宾语从句)
②If you come in summer, you’d better wear cool clothes because Jinan is very hot in summer. (if引导的条件状语从句;because引导的原因状语从句)
(七)
7.假如你是李华。你的朋友Tom今年寒假将来中国参观,他想向你了解一些有关北京的名胜、美食、文化、气候等情况。请给他回复邮件。
要求:
1. 词数100左右,(开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 须包含所有要点提示,并可适当补充,语句通顺,行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to learn that you’re going to visit China this winter holiday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to learn that you’re going to visit China this winter holiday. Now I’ll tell you something about Beijing.
It’s a bit cold here in winter. Beijing is the capital city of China. There are so many amazing places you can’t miss. First, you can visit the Great Wall. It is one of the seven wonders in the world. Second, the Palace Museum is also a good place for you to visit. It is the Imperial Palace of the Qing Dynasty. Many people visit it every day. Third, you can’t miss Yuanmingyuan. It is a world-famous imperial garden. You can taste a lot of delicious food here, especially Beijing roast duck.
I think you will have a good time in Beijing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍北京的天气和名胜;
第二步,介绍有关北京的文化和美食 ;
第三步,最后希望对方玩得开心。
[亮点词汇]
①a bit有点
②world-famous imperial garden举世闻名的皇家园林
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①There are so many amazing places you can’t miss.(定语从句)
②I think you will have a good time in Beijing.(宾语从句)
(八)
8.假设你是李华,你的朋友Mike想来广安游玩。请你根据下面思维导图中的提示给他写一封英文邮件,简要介绍一下广安。
1. 70词左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 邮件应包含思维导图中的所有信息,可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear Mike,
I’m so glad to hear that you will pay a visit to Guang’an. Let me tell you something about Guang’an.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Mike,
I’m so glad to hear that you will pay a visit to Guang’an. Let me tell you something about Guang’an.
Guang’an is in the northeast of Sichuan Province. Guang’an is a beautiful city with a population of about 3 million. And Guang’an has a long history. There’s a lot of delicious food here, such as rice noodles, beef, and salt eggs. Besides, there are many interesting places in Guang’an. You can go to Deng Xiaoping’s Home Town, Huaying Mountain and so on. I am sure you will have a great time here.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题,题干中已给出。
第二步,介绍广安的一些情况。
第三步,书写结语,祝愿对方玩得愉快。
[亮点词汇]
①in the northeast of在……的东北部
②with a population of 有……人口
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①I am sure you will have a great time here. (省略that的宾语从句)
(2023·湖北襄阳·统考中考真题)
今年五一,襄阳凭借丰富的旅游资源和优质的服务,吸引了各地的游客前来“打卡”。在校园英语文化周,你将代表班级做关于“旅行”的英语演讲。请根据以下要点提示,结合你的旅游或出行经历,写一篇英语演讲稿。
1.要点提示:
(1)简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法;
(2)详述你的一次旅游或出行经历;
(3)根据你的旅行感受,为襄阳的旅游发展提出一条合理的建议或希望。
2.注意事项:
(1)词数90左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
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【答案】例文
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
Now more and more people are interested in travelling. I think trip is an opportunity for us to experience life and increase knowledge. At the same time, it can also broaden our horizon.
Last Wednesday, we went on a trip to Yixing. Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest. It was a fine warm day. In the morning, we climbed the hill in the Bamboo Park. On the way, we met an Australian. He was kind and patient. We had fun practising speaking English. In the afternoon, we rowed boats along the underground river in the Shanjuan Cave. It was a great day.
I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据内容提示,介绍自己的旅游经历和感受,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法;
第二步,详述你的一次旅游或出行经历;
第三步,提出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②at the same time同时
③places of interest名胜古迹
[高分句型]
①Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest.(非限制性定语从句)
②I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.(宾语从句;if引导的条件状语从句)
(2023·湖北·统考中考真题)
尊老敬老是中华民族的传统美德。东东的爸爸妈妈把乡下的爷爷接到了城里一起生活。假如你是东东,请结合图片提示,发挥你的想象,用英文写一篇80词左右的日记。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
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【答案】例文:
Today, Grandpa came to my house. We had a big dinner together.
After dinner, Grandpa told interesting stories to my brother and me. We drank tea and played chess together. We had a good time.
At about 9:00 in the evening, my mother told us it was time for bed. In order to help Grandpa sleep well, Mom decided to let him sleep in my room, and made me sleep with my brother.
Looking after Grandpa is our duty. The better Grandpa lives, the happier we are.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇日记;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍介绍爷爷到我家来了;
第二步,具体介绍爷爷在我家的饮食起居等安排;
第三步,最后总结照顾爷爷是我们的责任。
[亮点词汇]
① a big dinner大餐
② play chess下象棋
③ look after照顾
[高分句型]
① The better Grandpa lives, the happier we are.(the+比较级……,the+比较级……)
② Mom decided to let him sleep in my room, and made me sleep with my brother.(and连接的并列句)
(2023·湖北荆州·统考中考真题)
假如你是荆州旅游形象大使,你将怎样用英语向外国朋友推介荆州呢?请根据以下要点,来试一试吧!
要点:1.位置:湖北境内,长江之滨;
2.历史:悠久的历史,楚文化(Chu Culture)……
3.景点:荆州博物馆,古城墙……
4.美食:荆州鱼糕(fish cake)……
5.补充一两点与荆州有关的信息。
要求:1.文章必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥使行文连贯;
2.不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
3.不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Ladies and gentlemen! I’m very honored to introduce Jingzhou Ancient City here.
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Thanks for listening!
【答案】例文
Ladies and gentlemen! I’m very honored to introduce Jingzhou Ancient City here.
Jingzhou lies in the central part of Hubei Province, by the side of the Yangtze River. It has a large population and the people here are very friendly. The sky is blue and the air is fresh. Jingzhou is an ancient city with a long history. The Chu Culture is famous all over the world. There are many places of interest. You can walk along the ancient wall and visit Jingzhou Museum. There are also many kinds of delicious food, such as Jingzhou fish cake and rice balls. Today, the old city has become young. The transportation is becoming quicker and easier. A beautiful Yangtze River Bridge, like a dragon, is over the Yangtze River. That’s a good chance for Jingzhou to develop better and better.
In a word, welcome to my beautiful hometown—Jingzhou!
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,文章开头已给;
第二步,具体介绍荆州古城的基本信息,包括位置、历史、景点、美食和现在的发展情况;
第三步,结尾呼吁大家来荆州古城游玩。
[亮点词汇]
①by the side of在……的旁边
②places of interest名胜古迹
③all over the world全世界
[高分句型]
①The transportation is becoming quicker and easier.(形容词作表语;形容词比较级)
②That’s a good chance for Jingzhou to develop better and better.(动词不定式作定语)
(2023·湖南衡阳·统考中考真题)
假如你是李强,你校即将举办的“活动周”有四个项目。请你根据下面表格的信息,写一篇英语短文,介绍你想参加的活动内容并说明其理由。
Project A Sports Day A Volunteer Day A School Trip Day A Talent Show Day
Activities ·play basketball ·run ·…… ·visit the old people’s home ·clean up Nanhu Park ·…… ·visit Hengyang Museum ·go to the countryside ·…… ·sing a song ·draw ·……
Reasons ·keep healthy ·feel relaxed ·…… ·care for the old ·protect the environment ·…… ·learn a lot ·be close to nature ·…… ·improve myself ·take up a hobby ·……
要求:
(1)根据上面表格中的信息,选择至少两个方面的内容行文,需适当发挥;
(2)文中不出现真实的校名和人名等;
(3)字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,条理清楚;(4)词数不少于80。
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【答案】例文
Our school is going to hold an “activity week”. I want to join “A Sports Day” and “A Volunteer Day”. In the first project, there are many activities, such as playing basketball, running, jumping and so on. I think these sports can help me keep healthy and at the same time can make me feel relaxed. In the second project, I will visit the old people’s home, because I want to care for the old and bring them joy. What’s more, I will also clean Nanhu Park. It will help protect the environment and make our life more pleasant.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,从所给的四个项目中至少选择两个活动;
第二步,具体介绍想参加的活动和原因。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③at the same time同时
④what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①I think these sports can help me keep healthy and at the same time can make me feel relaxed. (省略that的宾语从句)
②I will visit the old people’s home, because I want to care for the old and bring them joy.(because引导的原因状语从句)
(2023·四川宜宾·统考中考真题)
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Moore来信希望了解你的家乡宜宾的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信必须包括下面的内容。
注意:
1. 词数:100词左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
2. 参考词汇:places of interest 名胜古迹;hot pot 火锅;economy 经济
Dear Moore,
I’m glad to receive your letter. You wanted to know something about my hometown Yibin. Now let me tell you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Moore,
I’m glad to receive your letter. You wanted to know something about my hometown Yibin. Now let me tell you.
Yibin, located in the south of Sichuan Province, is the first city of the Yangtze River. There are many places of interest in Yibin, such as Lizhuang Ancient Town, Bamboo Sea and so on. There are plenty of foods such as hot noodles and hot pot. Yibin’s economy is developing rapidly. People’s lives are getting better and better. I love Yibin very much.
Would you like to visit Yibin this summer I’ll be your guide. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图中所包含的要点,写回信介绍自己的家乡宜宾。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出信件的主题;
第二步,具体介绍家乡宜宾并表达自己的感受;
第三步,收尾,邀请对方来宜宾玩。
[亮点词汇]
①located in位于
②such as例如
③look forward to期待,盼望
[高分句型]
①There are many places of interest in Yibin, such as Lizhuang Ancient Town, Bamboo Sea and so on.(There be句型)
②Would you like to visit Yibin this summer (表示邀请的常用句型)
(2023·江苏连云港·统考中考真题)
走进江苏,游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加“Go Jiangsu”旅游活动。假如你是李华,请你根据以下图片及文字提示,以“Welcome to Lianyungang”为题写一篇英语短文,邀请他们走进家乡连云港,品山海文化,游大圣故里。
注意:
(1)词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Welcome to Lianyungang
I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you.
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【答案】例文
Welcome to Lianyungang
I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you.
Lianyungang lies in the north-east of Jiangsu. It’s famous for many places of interest. Here you can visit Huaguo Mountain, the home of the Monkey King. You can also go to the Suma Bay to enjoy the beautiful sea. It’s cool in summer.
Moreover, Lianyungang is a city with rich culture. Local people are friendly enough to help you. Remember to try our local food. I’m sure you will enjoy it.
Don’t miss Lianyungang when you attend “Go Jiangsu”. Welcome to our hometown. We’re looking forward to meeting you soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,可适当发挥,使文章连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体说明连云港的地理位置以及著名的景点;
第二步,介绍连云港丰富的文化和当地的人们以及食物;
第三步,最后邀请大家来连云港做客。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而著名
②moreover而且
③look forward to doing期待做
[高分句型]
Don’t miss Lianyungang when you attend “Go Jiangsu”.(when引导的时间状语从句)
(2022·江苏南通·统考中考真题)
华夏大地,人杰地灵;中华文明,源远流长。假如你是李华,你国外的朋友Andy想了解中国,请根据下图提示,选择或自拟至少两个要点进行介绍。
注意:1.词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Learning that you are interested in China, I feel honored to introduce my country to you.
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【答案】例文
Learning that you are interested in China, I feel honored to introduce my country to you.
First, there are many great men in our country, such as Yuan Longping. Yuan Longping is known as the “father of hybrid rice”. He made a great contribution to the world food supply. Second, there are many famous places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall. It is known as one of the seven Wonders of the World. Third, China also has many traditional festivals, such as Spring Festival, Dragon Boat Festival, Mid-Auturmn Festival and so on. Chinese people attach the most importance to the Spring Festival.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给图示提示,选择至少两个要点,向Andy介绍中国的人物、名胜、节日等。
2.写作指导:本文时态采用一般现在时;人称以第三人称为主。本文介绍时可以根据所给的人物、景点、节日描述,也可以自拟要点介绍。行文确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
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