期末专题 书面表达（含解析） 外研版 七年级下册 英语题型专项集训
1．假如你是李华，上周刚结束了“中国侨都” 江门之旅。请你根据以下表格，给你的美国好友David发一封邮件，与他分享你的旅行经历。
交通工具 飞机 时 间 三天 同 伴 家人
活动内容 1. 参观古镇、公园、博物馆等并拍照留念; 2. 品尝当地美食，最喜欢的食物是肠粉； 3. 游玩小鸟天堂……
感 受 ……
要求：(1) 70词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
(2) 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
(3) 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
参考词语：museum 博物馆；Rice Noodle Roll 肠粉；Bird Paradise 小鸟天堂
Dear David,
How are you doing
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Do you know the city I’m looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
2．假定你是李华，请根据图片提示，向你的笔友Lisa介绍你刚刚度过的繁忙的周末。
要求：
1. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
2. 词数70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lisa,
I’d like to tell you something about my weekend.
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．暑假是旅游的最好时节。期盼已久的暑假即将来临，你准备到哪里旅游？请你根据下列提示信息，写一篇短文，谈谈你的旅游计划。
要求：1）语言表达准确，短文通顺连贯，书写规范整洁；
2）根据要点适当发挥，不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3）词数80左右。
My Travel Plan
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4．初一的学习生活即将结束，我们要学会对自己这一年的学习生活进行总结与反思。请根据下面表格所提示的内容，写一篇英语短文，对自己初一的学习生活进行回顾总结并计划未来。
表现出色的方面 1. 积极锻炼，爱好广泛； 2. 善良勇敢，乐于助人； 3. ……
需要改进的方面 1. 粗心，作业错误多 2. ……
初二学习的打算 1. 更努力 2. ……
要求：
（1）词数 100左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
（2）所写内容必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
Time flies! I spend a whole year studying in Grade 7. At the end of this term, I want to summarize my school life.
I am very happy that I do well in Grade 7._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．旅行是一种享受，江河湖海，名胜古迹，让人领略到祖国山河的美好。暑假就要到了，假如你计划去北京旅游，请根据表格提示，制定你的旅游计划。
My Trip Plan to Beijing
Whom will you go with Go with my…
How will you go By car/high-speed train…
What will you do Visit places of interest; watch animals…
How do you feel …
要求：
（1）短文须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；
（3）词数70词左右。
My Trip Plan to Beijing
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6．假如你是李华，今年五一节你和你的父母一起去岳阳游玩了。请你根据下面表格中的提示内容，用英语写一篇日记，可适当发挥。
日期 5月1日
天气 晴朗
行程 上午：游览洞庭湖 (Dongting Lake)、参观君山公园 中午：在一家餐馆吃牛肉面 下午：参观名胜古迹岳阳楼 (Yueyang Tower)
感受 虽然有点累，但是很开心。
要求：1. 意思连贯，表达准确，可适当拓展；2. 词数：不少于60词。
May 1st
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7．上个星期六，你约你的好朋友Mike一起去了西山公园（the West Hill Park）游玩。请根据表格信息，描述一下当天的情形。
交通方式 公交车， 二十分钟的车程
天气状况 晴朗、温暖
活动 看动物、骑马……
午餐 一大碗面, 一些蔬菜和水果
心情 ……
要求：
1.表达正确，语句通顺, 书写规范；
2.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3.词数60个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Saturday
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8．同学们，守株待兔是我们非常熟悉的古代寓言故事。请你试着用英语写下来，寄给《21世纪英语》杂志社，传播中国故事，让世界上更多的人了解中国文化。
do farm work ran out... bump a stump pick up wait
要求：1.根据提示写句子，可适当发挥，使故事流畅；
2.不要出现考生本人信息；
3.不少于70词。
参考词汇：树桩 stump，农作物 crops
Once upon a time there was a farmer. Every day
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9．你一定去过一些有趣的地方，遇到过不同的人。请以“My amazing trip”为题，记录你的一次神奇之旅。内容包括：
1.旅行时间、地点和主要活动；
2.最令你印象深刻的事情；
3.对这次旅行的感受和收获。
注意： 1.词数 90左右；
2.内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺，可适当发挥；
3.请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
My amazing trip
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10．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jimmy最近身体不适， 情绪低落， 他来信向你征求保持身心健康的建议。同时询问你的暑假计划。请根据以下提示，给他回信。
健康建议 合理运动、良好心态……
暑假计划 志愿活动、研学活动……
参考词汇： 研学 study trip
注意：
1. 字数 80 左右；
2. 包括以上要点，可适当发挥， 使短文连贯， 通顺；
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Jimmy,
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Yours,
Li Hua
11．下周六将是你爸爸的生日，你和妈妈准备给他举办一个生日派对。请以“A Birthday Party for My Father”为题，并根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍一下你们的计划吧。
提示：1.When and where will the party be
2.What will we do for the party
3.Are there any presents
4.What will we do at the party
要求：1.文章应包含图示的所有内容，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级、姓名等信息；3.词数100左右。
A Birthday Party for My Father
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12．假定你是学生李华，你校正在举办题为“我来介绍美”（景之美、物之美、人之美等）的英文演讲比赛。作为参赛选手，请你根据以下要点，完成一篇演讲稿。
要点：1、介绍外观（貌）或特征：
2、说明原因：特殊记忆或美好品质等：
3、表达情感：祝福、希望或感恩等。
参考词汇：介绍 introduce：风景 scenery；地标 landmark
注意：
1、词数 80 左右 (开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数) ；
2、要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3、条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范：
4、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear fellows,
Good morning, I am Li Hua. I’m glad to give a speech today. The beauty in my eyes is
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That’s all, thank you for your listening.
13．上周末你参加了学校组织的研学活动。请根据下面图表内的提示及要点，用英语写一篇关于研学的短文投稿到你校的School Time栏目。
A School Trip
Time last weekend
Place Shangzhang, Xianju
Transportation by bus
Activities visit the museum wear the Red Army (红军) clothes and make Red Army bags climb mountains have a party in the evening ...
Feelings (感受) meaningful有意义的 ……
注意：
①所写内容必须包括所有信息，并作适当发挥；
②词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
③文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
Last weekend, we had a school trip in Shangzhang, Xianju. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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参考答案：
1．例文:
Dear David,
How are you doing
Last week, I flew to Jiangmen with my family. We stayed there for three days and we did a lot of interesting things. We visited some old towns, parks and museums and took many nice photos there. We tried the food, too. My favorite food was Rice Noodle Roll because it tasted so delicious that I ate a lot. I had a lot of fun. We also visited the Bird Paradise and people there were very friendly to us. We all had a good time in Jiangmen. We want to go there again for our next holiday.
Do you know the city I'm looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为 “一般过去时”；
③提示：结合表格所给的提示要点，介绍你的江门之旅，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯，注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：问候好友David；
第二步：介绍你旅行的活动内容和游玩的感受；
第三步：期待David的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①flew to... 乘飞机去……
②took many nice photos 拍了许多漂亮的照片
③be friendly to 对……友好
[高分句型]
①We stayed there for three days and we did a lot of interesting things. (含and的并列句)
②My favorite food was Rice Noodle Roll because it tasted so delicious that I ate a lot. (because原因状语从句，so...that...结果状语从句)
2．例文
Dear Lisa,
I’d like to tell you something about my weekend. On Saturday morning, I cleaned my room. In the afternoon, I flew kites with my friends in the park. We had great fun. After dinner, I had to finish my homework. On Sunday morning, I helped my mother do the dishes. In the afternoon, I played soccer with my cousins. I watched TV with my parents after dinner.
Though I was quite busy, I had a great weekend.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信，属于看图作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：信件开头以及要点已经给出，按照图片提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接信件开头，引出话题；
第二步，按照图片提示介绍周六和周日两天是如何度过的，要列举具体的事例；
第三步，表达感想并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have great fun玩得很愉快
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③do the dishes洗碗
[高分句型]
①Though I was quite busy, I had a great weekend.（though引导让步状语从句）
3．例文：
My Travel Plan
The summer holiday is coming. I’m going to Beijing, the capital of China with my parents this summer holiday. We’ll go there by train. In the summer, the weather is sunny and hot in Beijing. So I want to take an umbrella and a sun hat. We’ll visit the Great Wall first because it’s a symbol of our country. After that, we’ll go to Tian’anmen Square, the Palace Museum and so on. During the trip, I will take lots of photos. I believe we’ll have a wonderful trip.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：一般将来时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的旅行计划，包括时间、和谁一起、地点；
第二步，介绍当地的天气、自己打算做的事情等；
第三步，表达个人心情或感想。
[亮点词汇]
①by train乘火车
②want to do sth.想要做某事
③a symbol of……的象征
[高分句型]
①We’ll visit the Great Wall first because it’s a symbol of our country.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I believe we’ll have a wonderful trip.（省略that的宾语从句）
4．范文
Time flies! I spend a whole year studying in Grade 7. At the end of this term, I want to summarize my school life.
I am very happy that I do well in Grade 7. I am kind and brave. I am helpful. I have many hobbies, such as playing the guitar and collecting stamps. I join different kinds of clubs. Also, I make some friends. In addition, I exercise a lot to keep healthy. But I am so careless that I can’t make my parents happy. I don’t work very hard in class.
Next year I am going to be serious about what I do. I will study harder and try to get better grades when I am in Grade 8. I want my parents to be proud of me.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己表现出色的方面；
第二步，介绍自己需要改进的方面；
第三步，最后说明初二学习的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②different kinds of不同种类的
③be proud of以……自豪
[高分句型]
①In addition, I exercise a lot to keep healthy.（动词不定式表示目的）
②But I am so careless that I can’t make my parents happy.（so...that引导结果状语从句）
③I will study harder and try to get better grades when I am in Grade 8.（when引导时间状语从句）
5．例文
My Trip Plan to Beijing
The summer holiday is coming. I want to go on a trip to Beijing with my parents. Beijing is a beautiful city with a long history. It’s the capital of China. We will go there by high-speed train. We will stay there for 3 days. We are going to visit some places of interests, such as Tian’anmen Square and the Great Wall. We will go to Tian’anmen Square to watch the raising of the national flag and we will take a lot of photos on the Great Wall. We will see the animals in the zoo. I am longing to see the lovely pandas there. I hope we’ll have a great time and I think our trip will be very meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章标题及写作要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇引出话题，说明要去北京旅游；
第二步，根据要点介绍旅游计划，包括同行的人、交通方式、打算做的事情等，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发感受并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①with a long history有着悠长的历史
②such as比如
③long to do sth渴望做某事
[高分句型]
I hope we’ll have a great time and I think our trip will be very meaningful.（and连接两个并列分句，两个并列分句中都含有省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
6．
May 1st sunny
Today is May Day. I went on a school trip to Yueyang with my parents today. Yueyang is a good place to have fun. In the morning we visited Dongting Lake first, then we went to Junshan. We had a good time there. At noon, we had beef noodles at a restaurant. In the afternoon we visited the historic Yueyang Tower. There we saw many visitors around the country. We took a lot of great photos. We went back to our hotel at 8:30 p.m. Although I felt a little tired, I was very happy. All in all it was an exciting day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中我（李华）今年五一节和和我的父母一起去岳阳游玩的介绍。包括一天的行程和游玩岳阳后的感受。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍今天是五一劳动节，我和父母一起去岳阳游玩；
第二步，具体描述一天的行程；
第三步，总结游玩岳阳后的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a good place to have fun一个好玩的地方
②had a good time玩得很开心
③the historic Yueyang Tower历史悠久的岳阳楼
④All in all总而言之
[高分句型]
①I went on a school trip to Yueyang with my parents today.（go on a school trip to+地点句型）
②Although I felt a little tired, I was very happy.（although引导让步状语从句）
7．例文
Last Saturday, my friend Mike and I went to the West Hill Park and we had a really great time there.
It was a sunny and warm day. We went there by bus. It took us twenty minutes to get to the park. The park was very beautiful. First, we went to watch some animals. The monkeys were so interesting that we forgot the time. After that, we rode horses. We took a lot of cool photos. At noon, we ate a big bowl of noodles, some vegetables and fruit for lunch in the park.
It was an excellent trip and we both had fun!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中去西山公园游玩的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“上个星期六，你约你的好朋友Mike一起去了西山公园（the West Hill Park）游玩”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“交通方式、活动、午餐等”几个方面重点介绍去西山公园游玩的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“这是一次很棒的旅行，我们都玩得很开心”的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have a great time玩得高兴；
②get to到达；
③a lot of很多；
④take photos拍照。
[高分句型]
①It took us twenty minutes to get to the park. (“It takes sb some time to do sth”句型)
②The monkeys were so interesting that we forgot the time. (so…that…结果状语从句)
8．例文：
Once upon a time there was a farmer. Every day they could only have enough food to eat and enough clothing to wear.
One day, when he was doing farm work in the field, a scared hare ran out. It bumped a stump and died. He picked it up. That day, he ate his fill.
From that day on, he no longer went in for farming again. From morning till night, he stayed by that stump, waiting for miracles to take place again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕题图和“信息提示”写出“守株待兔”这个寓言故事。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍故事的主人公；
第二步，讲述故事发生的经过；
第三步，讲述故事的结果。
[亮点词汇]
① pick up 拾起
② no longer 不再
③ take place 发生
[高分句型]
① From morning till night, he stayed by that stump, waiting for miracles to take place again.（使用非谓语动词）
② One day in late autumn, when he was doing farm work in the field, a scared hare ran out.（使用when引导时间状语从句）
9．例文
My amazing trip
I had an unforgettable trip to the Tianchi of Changbai Mountain. I have experienced many firsts, but the most unforgettable one is that I saw the Tianchi of Changbai Mountain for the first time.
Last July, my family and I took a tour to Changbai Mountain. We climbed up from the west slope, where the scenery basically remains the most primitive state. After climbing 1440 steps, we finally reached the top of the mountain. Although we were very tired, the temperature on the top of the mountain was very suitable, making us feel extremely comfortable. What’s more, we were lucky enough to see the Tianchi, which is like a huge mirror inlaid among the peaks. It’s said that 70% of the people who came to Changbai Mountain for the first time can’t see the Tianchi because the weather on the top of the mountain is unpredictable. And the first time I came to Changbai Mountain, I saw Tianchi of Changbai Mountain, which is really amazing.
Although we were tired, we were happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开篇点出自己难以忘记的一次旅行；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体阐述旅行时间、地点、主要活动及印象深刻的事情；
第三步，书写结语。表达对这次旅行的感受和收获。
[亮点词汇]
①reached the top of the mountain到达山顶
②on the top of在……顶部
③like a huge mirror像一面巨大的镜子
[高分句型]
①but the most unforgettable one is that I saw the Tianchi of Changbai Mountain for the first time.（that引导的表语从句）
②What’s more, we were lucky enough to see the Tianchi, which is like a huge mirror inlaid among the peaks.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
10．例文
Dear Jimmy,
I am happy to have heard from you. I am sorry that you been feeling unwell and down lately. Now I will give you some tips to keep fit.
First of all, you need a healthy and balanced diet. Don’t eat too much junk food. Eat more vegetable. You can drink a cup of milk every day. Don’t stay up late. It is important for you to have enough rest. You should get into the habit of going to bed early and getting up early. You’d better exercise for half an hour in the morning and evening. When you feel down, you can also listen to light music or take a trip with friends. As for my summer vacation plan, I plan to volunteer at an animal hospital to help small animals. I also plan to go on a study trip to Qufu.
If you follow my advice, I am sure your condition will get better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇书信作文，给英国笔友Jimmy一些保持身心健康的建议；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接写我很高兴收到你的来信，我将给你一些建议。引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从健康建议和暑假计划两方面来叙述。
第三步，书写总结。表达假如您能听从我的劝告，我相信您一定会很快好起来的。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all首先
②It’s very important for sb. to do sth.做某事对某人很重要
③had better do sth.最好做某事
④As for至于，就……方面说来
⑤go on a study trip to去……研学
[高分句型]
①I am sorry that you been feeling unwell and down lately.（宾语从句）
②Don’t eat too much junk food. Eat more vegetable.（祈使句）
③When you feel down, you can also listen to light music or take a trip with friends.（时间状语从句）
④If you follow my advice, I am sure your condition will get better soon.（条件状语从句）
11．例文
A Birthday Party for My Father
My father’s birthday is coming. It is this Friday. Here is my plan for his birthday.
First of all, I decide to help my father do some housework so that he can have a good rest. My father loves reading books, so my mother will buy a book for him. What’s more, I’m going to make a card in the shape of heart with my best wishes. I’m sure my father will be moved when he opens the card. Finally, there will be an evening birthday party at home. We’ll sing the Happy Birthady song, eat the delicious cake together and have a heart to heart talk with each other. We’ll enjoy ourselves a lot.
That’s my plan and I’ll realize it on my father’s birthday.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”。
③提示：文章为第一人称，介绍自己怎样为父亲过生日的计划，回答完整题目中所提的问题，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍父亲的生日时间；
第二步，具体介绍自己怎样为父亲过生日的计划；
第三步，表达希望计划圆满完成。
[亮点词汇]
① First of all首先
② decide to决定
③ What’s more另外
④ Finally最后
⑤ enjoy ourselves玩得高兴
⑥ realize实现
⑦ talk with谈话
[高分句型]
①First of all, I decide to help my father do some housework so that he can have a good rest.（目的状语从句）
②I’m sure my father will be moved when he opens the card.（宾语从句+时间状语从句）
③Finally, there will be an evening birthday party at home.（there be句型）
④We’ll sing the Happy Birthady song, eat the delicious cake together and have a heart to heart talk with each other.（并列句）
12．例文：
Dear fellows,
Good morning, I am Li Hua. I’m glad to give a speech today. The beauty in my eyes is my hometown Hangzhou. Spring, summer, autumn and winter have different changes and scenery here.
Spring is a magician. She uses magic to make the whole world colorful and full of trees and flowers. In summer, the West Lake is very charming. The water is green and clear. When the sun shines, the lake surface is sparkling. At weekends, I often take a walk with my grandparents along the lake.
Autumn is also beautiful. The osmanthus trees can be seen everywhere. The leaves of ginkgo will also dance with the wind, just like a beautiful butterfly. In winter, the whole city is covered with white snow. I can make snowmen with my friends, which is interesting and unforgettable.
I’m really proud of my hometown. I hope that more and more people can come here to enjoy the beautiful scenery.
That’s all, thank you for your listening.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中关于“美”的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图。介绍家乡杭州的美，概述一年四季风景各异；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述春夏秋冬四季不同的景色，以及自己的美好片段回忆；
第三步，书写结语。 为家乡感到自豪，同时希望更多的人来家乡感受美景。
【亮点词汇】①use sth. to do sth.使用某物做某事
②(be) full of充满
③be covered with被……覆盖
④be proud of为……自豪
【高分句型】①I can make snowmen with my friends, which is interesting and unforgettable.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
②I hope that more and more people can come here to enjoy the beautiful scenery.（that引导宾语从句）
13．例文：
Last weekend, we had a school trip in Shangzhang, Xianju.
We went there by bus in the early morning. When we got there, we visited the museum first. We saw many pictures and things about the history of Red Army. Then we wore the Red Army clothes and also learned to make Red Army bags. It was kind of difficult but interesting for us. After lunch, we climbed mountains. The weather was quite hot but we all felt very excited. In the evening, we had a party and enjoyed ourselves.
I think the school trip is really meaningful for us. We can not only relax ourselves but also learn a lot from it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：这是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：主要采用“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，包括研学活动的时间、地点、交通方式、具体内容和感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍研学活动的时间和地点（已经给出）；
第二步，介绍研学活动的交通方式和具体活动；
第三步，介绍研学活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① about the history of Red Army 关于红军的历史
② kind of 有点儿
③ enjoy ourselves 玩得开心
④ learn a lot from it 从中学到很多
⑤ relax ourselves 放松自己
[高分句型]
① I think the school trip is really meaningful for us.（宾语从句）
② We can not only relax ourselves but also learn a lot from it.（“not only...but also...”结构）
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