Unit 3 Online tours 书面表达（含解析）牛津译林版 八年级下册英语题型专项集训
1．请根据提示，写一篇有关中国的旅游指南，可以适当发挥。要求语言通顺，条理清晰，词数不少于80词。
要点：
1、地处亚洲，由34个省份（province）和地区（district）组成。首都北京是现代化的大城市；
2、和英国一样，有悠久的历史；
3、有很多名胜。可以参观长城。苏州、杭州因为园林而出名。有很多自然风光，如黄山；
4、不同地区的天气情况不同。去之前做好准备；
5、使用人民币。
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2．学校英语角本周的主题是“My favourite country”。Andy最喜欢的国家是法国，请你根据下面的提示，写一篇70词左右的短文介绍法国。
Location: western Europe
History: many centuries
Paris: the capital, cultural centre
Tourism: attract 83 million foreigners a year, gardens and beaches, The Eiffel Tower, Disneyland Paris Money: EURO
My favourite country is France. I hope I could visit it some day.______________________________________________
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现在，上网已经变得越来越流行了，很多学生都迷上了网络。你是怎么看待上网的？请谈谈你的观点。提示如下：1. 因特网使得交流更加简单，它已成为人们日常生活最重要的部分之一；
2. 很多同学每天上网学习，发电子邮件……
3. 但是还有很多同学沉迷于上网聊天，打电脑游戏，这对他们的健康很不利。
4. 作为学生，我们应该以学习为先……
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4．在日常生活中，国际互联网起着越来越重要的作用。请根据以下提示，以“On the Internet”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
国际互联网的主要用途
信息 看国内外新闻，也可获取其他信息
通讯 发邮件、打电话
学习 上网上学校、阅览各种书籍、自学外语
娱乐 欣赏音乐、观看体育比赛、玩棋牌游戏
生活 购物
On the Internet
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5．学校英语角即将开展一次以“朋友”为主题的演讲活动，你写一篇演讲稿参加活动，包括以下内容：
1.介绍他/她成为你最好朋友的原因。
2.分享你们的相同点和不同点。
词数80左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；文中不能透露考生身份的任何信息。
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6．现在学生进网吧（get online）成风，某班主任下周开班会时将讨论有关问题。假如你是班主任，请根据内容写一篇演讲稿。
益处 （advantage） 学会使用现代设备（modern machine）——电脑，学习更多的知识（knowledge）。
弊端 （disadvantage） 过于沉迷游戏（spend too much time in playing games），学习越来越差。
建议 周末或寒假时在父母指导下适当上网。
注意：
1. 词数90左右。短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
2. 参考词汇：properly恰当地，正确地
Boys and girls, let’s begin our class meeting. As you know, some students in our class get online very often. So today_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．请你根据内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，词数80左右。
内容提示：
1.我昨天在书店买了一张叫Online Tour的光盘；
2.我以前曾梦想去不同的国家旅游。这张光盘可以帮助我实现这个梦想；
3.课程包含许多，比如：问路、预订房间、看医生等；
4.我相信我能从这个课程中学到许多关于日常英语的知识；
5.长大后，我希望……（请展开合理想象，发挥1—2句）
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8．请用英语写一篇短文，记录八年级（3）班的同学们就中学生上网这个问题举行的一次讨论。
内容要点：
1.一部分同学认为上网有助于……
2.其他同学认为大多数同学上网是为了聊天和玩游戏，而不是为了学习；
3.有的同学甚至在网上迷失了自己，与家长的交流少了，这对健康、学习都不利。
注意事项：
1.短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2.第一个要点须用2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥;
3.80词左右，短文首句已给出，但不计入总词数。
Recently the students of Class Three, Grade Eight have had a discussion about_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．书面表达
请根据下列内容提示，以My travel plan为题，写一篇80—100词的英语短文。
内容提示：
1. 今年暑假我打算和家人去大连旅行。大连很美，天气也很好，适合旅游；
2. 我们可以在海里游泳，品尝可口的海鲜。回来之前，我们打算给朋友们带一些纪念品；
3. 我们将会在那里度过一个轻松愉快的假期。
My travel plan
10．书面表达
科技以人为本。随着时代的发展和科技的进步，机器人开始走入我们的生活。作为一名学生，你觉得自己需要一个机器人吗？下面是阳光中学九年级1班学生做的一份调查报告，请用英语介绍调查的结果，并说说自己的看法。
要求：1.要点全覆盖，内容充实，结构合理，语言流畅，书写工整；
2.100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
支持方 反对方
人数 30（2/3） 15（1/3）
理由 机器人能做大量的工作(繁重的，危险的，艰巨的)，使得我们的生活更加轻松； 补充……（至少一点） 1.价格不菲； 2.使人变得懒惰； 3.容易感染病毒出问题。 补充……（至少一点）
Our class made a survey on whether we need robots in our everyday life.Here is the result.
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参考答案：
1．例文：
China is located in Asia and consists of 34 provinces and districts. Beijing, its capital city, is modern and big. China has a long history as well as Britain. There are many places to visit. You can see the Great Wall in Beijing. Suzhou and Hangzhou are famous for their gardens. China also has a lot of natural beauty, such as Huangshan.
The weather in China is very different around the country. It’s very cold in winter in the north while it’s very warm in the south. Be prepared before you visit a place. Moreover, remember that people use RMB there, not dollars or pounds.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点了，写一篇关于中国的旅游指南，介绍中国的概况、名胜及自然风光、气候及所使用的货币等。保证要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。可采用两段式，第一段介绍中国的地理信息、有悠久的历史、名胜及自然风光；第二段介绍其天气情况及中国的通用货币。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
2．My favourite country is France. I hope I could visit it some day.
France is in western Europe. It is an old country with a history of many centuries. Its capital city is Paris. Paris is also the cultural centre of France and even Europe.
France attracts 83 million foreigners every year. There are many places of interest in the country. It is famous for its gardens and beaches. And every day，thousands of people visit the Eiffel Tower and Disneyland Paris.
People in France don’t use dollars. They use EURO like people in other European countries.
【详解】本文属于材料作文，介绍一下法国。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如there be, places of interest, be famous for, thousands of以及with a history of many centuries等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
3． Internet has made communication much easier. It has become one of the most important parts in people’s daily life. Many students use the Internet to study, send emails and search for information. But many others are crazy about chatting online or playing computer games. It is bad for their health. As students, we should know study comes first. And we should spend more time doing sports instead of playing computer games.
【详解】本文叙述了现在上网已经变得越来越流行了，很多学生都迷上了网络。叙述的是现在的情况，所以句子的时态应该用现在时，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，用一些高级词汇。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：in people’s daily life在人们的日常生活中； search for information寻找信息；be bad for 对某物或某人有害；sb spend some time doing 某人花费时间做某事； instead of代替。用了连词but，and等，增加了文章的亮点。
4．例文
On the Internet
The Internet is very important in our daily life. On the Internet, we can learn news both at home and abroad. And we can also learn all kinds of information. We can send emails to our friends by Internet. We can even make phone calls, go to net schools, read many books and learn foreign languages alone. If we are free, we can enjoy music, watch sports matches and play chess and cards on the Internet. We can do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them, too.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，写短文介绍国际互联网的主要用途。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总写互联网的重要性；
第二步，介绍互联网的主要用途。
[亮点词汇]
①at home and abroad 在国内外
②all kinds of 各种各样的
③do shopping 去购物
[高分句型]
If we are free, we can enjoy music, watch sports matches and play chess and cards on the Internet.（if引导条件状语从句）
5．例文
Hello, everyone. I’m happy to be here to tell you something about my best friend Lisa.
She’s taller and more outgoing than me. She likes watching movies, but I like playing computer games. She exercises every day, while I hardly do exercise. Besides the differences, we also have the same interests. For example, both of us like sports and music. We enjoy reading. We usually go to the library on weekends. We are both good at our subjects. In addition,we became good friends because she usually help with my study, and I also help her deal with some difficulties in the life. For me, it’s not important to be the same or different.We get on well.
All in all, I spent lots of happy time with my best friend Lisa although we have many differences. And I hope that our friendship will last forever. That’s all. Thanks!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿。
时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中介绍朋友成为你最好的原因和分享你们的相同点和不同点。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。注意书写的逻辑性和完整性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。简单介绍朋友，引出话题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“介绍朋友成为你最好的原因”和“分享你们的相同点和不同点”两个方面来写朋友的性格，爱好和与你的异同。
第三步，书写结语。表达你对朋友的喜爱之前和希望友谊长存的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at 擅长于……
②deal with 处理，解决
③spend time with sb与某人度过时光
[高分句型]
①I’m happy to be here to tell you something about my best friend Lisa.(不定式作原因状语)
②She’s taller and more outgoing than me.（比较级句型）
③I hope that our friendship will last foroever.（that引导的宾语从句）
6．例文：
Boys and girls, let’s begin our class meeting. As you know, some students in our class get online very often. So today we will talk about computers and Internet.
I think computers and Internet change the world a lot. They have advantages and disadvantages. If we learn to use the modern machine and surf the Internet, we can learn more and more knowledge. But if we spend too much time in playing computer games, we will be worse and worse in our study.
So I think you can surf the Internet with your parents on weekends and holidays. If you can use computers and Internet properly, they will help you with your study.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点在表格中已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述益处；
第二步，描述弊端；
第三步，提出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①advantages优势
②modern machine现代机器
[高分句型]
①If we learn to use the modern machine and surf the Internet, we can learn more and more knowledge.（“more and more”表示“越来越”）
②If you can use computers and Internet properly, they will help you with your study.（“if”表示假设）
7．例文
Yesterday, I bought a CD called Online Tour in a bookshop. I have ever dreamt of travelling to different countries. This CD can help me realize my dream. This course covers many things, such as asking the way, booking rooms and seeing the doctor. I believe I can learn a lot of daily English from it.
I hope I can travel to many different countries in the future.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍光盘的情况以及包含的课程的情况等，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时与一般过去时相结合时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
8．例文：
Recently the students of Class Three, Grade Eight have had a discussion about surfing the Internet. Some students think the Internet is a great help to them. It can help them learn how to use computers and get information about school subjects. And they can learn more about the world. However, other students disagree. They think many students just enjoy chatting online and playing computer games instead of studying. Some students even lose themselves in the world of the Internet. They spend less time communicating with their parents. It’s bad for their health and study.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求记录同学们对上网问题的讨论。提示内容给出了部分同学的观点，写作时，需补充的部分要适当发挥想象，补充完整，注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时表达同学们的观点，以第三人称进行写作，先承接开头，引出主题，再分别描述同学的观点，不同的观点之间用过渡词衔接，使文章结构清晰。注意主谓一致等语法问题，做到无拼写和标点错误。
9．My travel plan
I’m going to travel to Dalian with my family this summer holiday. We plan to stay there for a week. Dalian is a very beautiful city. It’s near the sea. The weather is fine and it is suitable for travelling. In Dalian, we can go swimming in the sea and eat delicious seafood and some other local food. We are going to buy some souvenirs for our friends before we come back. I’m sure we will have a happy holiday there.
【详解】这是一篇话题作文。话题是My travel plan，根据所给中文提示写一篇80—100词的英语短文。本文主要书写旅行计划，可知主要时态是一般将来时和一般现在时。认真阅读汉语提示，审清主题，根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写作中可适当使用连词，注意表达顺序，表达要有条理性，语句通顺，意思连贯，要符合逻辑关系。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
我的旅行计划
今年暑假我要和家人去大连旅游。我们计划在那里呆一个星期。大连是一个非常美丽的城市。它在海边。天气很好，适合旅行。在大连，我们可以去海里游泳，吃美味的海鲜和其他一些当地食物。我们回来之前要给朋友们买些纪念品。我相信我们会在那里度过一个愉快的假期。
【点睛】这篇文章包含了提示的所有的内容，条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范，时态运用正确，语句通顺，意思连贯。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。 （5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
10．Our class made a survey on whether we need robots in our everyday life. Here is the result.30% of the students need robots.They think robots can do a lot of housework and do many dangerous things.They can also help students do homework.But 15% of students don’t need robots.They think the price of robots is high,they can’t afford it.And robots can make people lazier.The robots sometimes go wrong but they can stop working.I think with the help of computers, robots and other high-tech, people will need to do less work.They will be relaxing.
【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我们班学生做的一份关于我们是否需要机器人的调查报告的结果，并说说自己的看法。
【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Our class made a survey on……，Here is……，They think……，They can also help……，And robots can……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我们班关于在日常生活中是否需要机器人做了一个调查，接下来介绍这个调查的结果，最后表达我的观点：在电脑，机器人和其他高科技的帮助下，人们将会做更少的工作，会很放松。此处help sb do sth, make sb+形容词，go wrong, stop doing sth, with the help of, need to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
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