2024年中考英语书面表达优秀生拔高特训解析版（全国通用）
书面表达
A
2024年3月，河北邯郸一名初中生被同学残忍杀害，此消息震惊全国，为杜绝校园欺凌 (say no to school bully)，打造和谐安定校园 (build a harmonious and stable campus)，作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？请根据以下提示，写一篇英语作文。
提示：
1.尊敬老师，努力学习，锻炼身体，培养一个兴趣爱好。
2.与同学融洽相处，互相帮助。
3.不要与他人吵架，不偷盗他人物品。
4.遵守学校的规章制度，不携带管制刀具 (restricted knives)。
5.不要私自会见陌生人，遇险应报警。
要求：
1.语句通顺，语意连贯。
2.运用以上提示词，内容可适当发挥。
3.词数100词左右，作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
It’s important for us students to build a harmonious and stable campus. ________________
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【答案】
It’s important for us students to build a harmonious and stable campus. Recently, school-bullying is a hot topic again. Students showed their fear and parents and teachers also expressed their great concern about it. Our class had a heated discussion and we have reached some agreements on how to solve the problem.
First of all, we should respect the teachers, study hard and do some exercise to keep healthy. Then we can develop some hobbies, like playing basketball. Next, we should get on well with other students and help each other. What’s more, don’t argue with others and do not steal their belongings. More importantly, follow the school rules and don’t carry restricted knives. Last but not least, don’t meet strangers privately, and if you are in danger, you should call the police in time.
All in all, every student should behave himself and keep away from school-bullying.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点信息，可适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头，引出话题：我们应该怎么做；
第二步，根据提示，具体介绍我们应该做的事情；
第三步，书写结语：规范自己的行为，远离校园欺凌。
[亮点词汇]
①reach some agreements 达成协议
②get on well with 与……相处融洽
③argue with 与……争吵
④in danger 处于危险
⑤all in all 总之
[高分句型]
Last but not least, don’t meet strangers privately, and if you are in danger, you should call the police in time.（否定祈使句，if引导的条件状语从句）
B
成长路上，你曾经遇见过很多人，如一位师长，一个朋友等；你也曾经历过很多事，如一次比赛，一项活动等；你也有自己喜欢的东西，如一首歌，一本书；这些人、事物或多或少的对你产生影响，让你发生一些变化，这些变化往往会有助于你的成长。
请以 “_________ made me a difference”为题写一篇英语短文。
以下问题供你参考：
According to an experience of your own, talk about:
1. Which person or thing touched you
2. How did you feel and what did you gain
3. ……
注意事项：
1. 必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥。语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名；
3. 词数在100个左右，首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
_________ Made Me a Difference
In our life, our family or friends, even some strangers, as well as what we’ve gone through in our study or daily life, may make us a difference. _____________________________________
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【答案】
A Friend Made Me a Difference
In our life, our family or friends, even some strangers, as well as what we’ve gone through in our study or daily life, may make us a difference. A friend of mine really made me a difference.
I used to be a quite shy girl. I only liked playing computer games. I hated English, so my English mark was low in the exam. Luckily, a friend of mine changed my life. She asked me to play outside with others. She helped me with my English by encouraging me to read English aloud and talk to her in English. I also practiced English after school. Gradually, my English has improved. I am good at English now.
Thanks to my friend, I am a confident and outgoing girl now. I’ve changed so much that many people like to make friends with me.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所列问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开门见山，一个朋友真的改变了我，从而引出话题；
第二步，陈述过去的事情，自己在朋友的帮助之下改变的过程；
第三步，表达自己的感受与收获。
［亮点词汇］
① thanks to 多亏了
② be good at 擅长
［高分句型］
① I hated English, so my English mark was low in the exam. (so引导并列句)
② I’ve changed so much that many people like to make friends with me. (so…that…引导结果状语从句)
C
在初中三年的学习生活中，你迎难而上，勇于担当，逐渐成长为“眼中有光，心中有爱”的新时代中国青少年。作为初三年级的学生代表，请你根据以下中文提示写一篇发言稿，与同学们分享你身上的优秀品质和心路历程。
优秀品质 乐于助人， 积极参加志愿者服务（举一例说明）
心路历程 勤学好问，克服困难（举一例说明）
展望未来 1. 自拟一点对自我的要求；2. 做一位健康阳光、感恩的少年。
要求：
1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：90词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
During the past three years, I have developed a number of good personal qualities. _______
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【答案】
During the past three years, I have developed a number of good personal qualities.
Firstly, I am always ready to help others and do voluntary work actively. I usually spend my weekends helping old people clean their flats at our community center. I feel happy if they are happy. Secondly, when facing the problems that I can’t solve, I will turn to my classmates or teachers for help. Last term, I had problems in understanding Physics, I asked Mr. Zhao for advice. I would not improve so much without his help.
In the future, I will keep studying to go towards a wider world. As a teenager in the new times, I will exercise more to keep healthy since health is the most important wealth. I will also learn to be more thankful to people around me and try to help more people.
I hope we can grow together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中作为新时代青少年的感受，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的优秀品质和经历；
第二步，简要介绍心路历程及体会；
第三步，表达未来期望。
[亮点词汇]
①spend... doing sth.花费……做某事
②a wider world更广阔的世界
③grow together一起成长
[高分句型]
①Secondly, when facing the problems that I can’t solve, I will turn to my classmates or teachers for help.（that引导定语从句）
②As a teenager in the new times, I will exercise more to keep healthy since health is the most important wealth.（since引导原因状语从句）
D
为帮助学生更好地了解中国红的历史及其蕴含的文化内涵，上周你校开展了跨学科融合教学活动，包括语文、历史、艺术、劳动(labor)等学科，请你以“Lessons Themed on Chinese Red”为题，根据表格内容提示完成一篇英语报道、向学校英文报投稿，介绍你们在融合课堂上的实践内容及学习收获。
Background(What you know about Chinese red) ●A traditional Chinese color ●Happiness... ●...
Lesson(What do you do in class) History & Chinese ●Tell revolutionary (革命) stories ●…
Art & Labor ●Draw the Chinese national flag ●Design red Chinese things like red packets,... ●Make red Chinese things such as...
Feeling(What you’ve got in class) ●Stand for national spirits ●... ●...
要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2.必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
3.词数在100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Lessons Themed on Chinese Red
Last week our school held a series of cross-subject activities themed on “Chinese Red”.
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【答案】
Lessons Themed on Chinese Red
Last week our school held a series of cross-subject activities themed on “Chinese Red”.
Chinese red is a traditional Chinese color. It is a symbol of happiness, wealth and good luck. That’s why Chinese red is widely used in traditional festivals and weddings.
We had many lessons about Chinese red, ranging from history to labor. Our history teacher told us some inspiring revolutionary stories. We also read aloud some revolutionary poems in the Chinese lesson. Then came my favourite part—art and labor. We drew the Chinese national flag and designed red Chinese things like red packets and red lanterns. We had fun making red Chinese things such as Chinese knots.
We have learnt that Chinese red stands for national spirits from these lessons. It is meaningful for Chinese people.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写你的学习收获，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍“中国红”；
第二步，具体阐述在融合课堂上的实践内容；
第三步，说明你的学习收获。
[亮点词汇]
①symbol象征
②inspiring鼓舞人心的
③meaningful有意义的
[高分句型]
①That’s why Chinese red is widely used in traditional festivals and weddings.（why引导的表语从句）
②We have learnt that Chinese red stands for national spirits from these lessons.（that引导的宾语从句）
E
中国自古以来就是礼仪之邦，文明礼仪是中华民族的优良传统，是做人的美德，更是一个现代文明人必备的素养。作为新一代的青少年，在学习和生活中，如何提升自身的文明素养？请以“I Am a Student with Good Manners”为题，根据提示内容，用英语写一篇短文。
提示：(1) To be polite, what do you usually do at school
(2) What do you usually do at home
(3) In public, how do you behave politely
要求：(1) 短文须包括提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3) 词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计人总词数)。
I Am a Student with Good Manners
It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
At school, __________________________________________________________________
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I Am a Student with Good Manners
It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
At school, we should always greet our teachers and classmates with a smile and a hello. I respect my teachers. I am friendly to my classmates and we often help each other.
At home, I respect my parents and our grandparents. Also, I love my family members and do things by myself. Then, I usually say “please” and “thank you” all the time. As for table manners, I never talk with food in my mouth.
Besides, I follow the traffic rules when walking or riding. In public, I don’t speak loudly. What’s more, to keep the environment clean, I don’t drop litter everywhere.
As a middle school student, I believe I should do more for our country. So I will work harder to build a bright future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍作为一名中学生，在学习和生活中，如何提升自身的文明素养，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己在学校、在家以及在公共场合是如何做的；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to对某人友好
②all the time总是
③in public在公共场合
[高分句型]
①I am friendly to my classmates and we often help each other. (and连接的并列句)
②What’s more, to keep the environment clean, I don’t drop litter everywhere. (动词不定式作目的状语)
③I believe I should do more for our country. (宾语从句)
F
人工智能与5G时代已悄然来临，科技逐渐融入人类生活。随处可见的人工智能，让生活越来越便利的同时也带来许多的问题。假设你是李华，用英文给你的笔友Mike写一封信，谈谈人工智能的现状、发展以及你对人工智能的看法。词数80左右。
Situations of artificial intelligence: ①The future of computer science ②Make a machine think like a human ③...
Studies of its development: ①Resolve scientific problems ②Develop other science ③...
My attitude about it: ...
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Mike,
Long time no see. I want to share with you some ideas about artificial intelligence._________
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Do you agree with me
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
Long time no see. I want to share with you some ideas about artificial intelligence.
With the development of advanced technology, artificial intelligence will make a big difference to the future of computer science. Scientists will make a machine think like a human. These artificial intelligence machines can help people do a lot of difficult jobs.
There will be more room for the studies of its development. Scientists will use artificial intelligence to resolve scientific problems. Besides, it can be used for developing other science.
In my opinion, we should develop artificial intelligence reasonably and legally so that they can serve us better.
Do you agree with me
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：这是一篇给材料的书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：必须包含提示中的内容，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
［写作步骤］
第一步，引出主题，表达想分享自己对人工智能的看法；
第二步，谈谈人工智能对人类生活的影响；
第三步，总述自己的观点。
［亮点词汇］
①make a difference 影响；有作用
②in one’s opinion 依……看
［高分句型］
①Besides, it can be used for developing other science.（be used for doing sth.句型）
②In my opinion, we should develop artificial intelligence reasonably and legally so that they can serve us better.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
G
受到表扬，你会感到高兴，感到自信，信心倍增。从小到大，你一定受到过无数次的表扬，请以“Once I was praised”为题，根据下面的图示信息和写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，讲述一次你受表扬的经历，并谈谈你的体会。
写作要求：（1）文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）词数100左右。
Once I was praised
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【答案】
I still remembered the day when I was praised. That day, my grandmother was ill in hospital. She is a kind woman and always ready to help others in need. I love her very much. I decided to do something meaningful for her.
In the shop, I chose some fresh pink flowers which smelt so sweet and paid with my pocket money. Then I held these beautiful flowers to visit my grandmother. As soon as she saw the nice gift I chose for her, tears rolled down her cheeks. She was surprised but moved. After hearing about this, my parents praised me, and I felt so happy.
We shouldn’t just accept love from others. We should also learn to express our love though we are still young.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己什么时候被表扬；
第二步，介绍自己被表扬的原因；
第三部，介绍从中学习到什么。
[亮点词汇]
①in need需要
②as soon as一……就
③be ready to do sth准备好做某事
[高分句型]
①I still remembered the day when I was praised.（when引导时间状语从句）
②Then I held these beautiful flowers to visit my grandmother.（动词不定式作目的状语）
H
文明，是一座城市的内在气息，赋予城市发展生生不息的力量。作为一名中学生, 我们既是美丽家乡的建设者，也是文明新风的守护者。不久前，重庆开展了创文创卫工作，目的在于号召大家守护家乡美好的物质环境和精神风貌。某网站正在发起以“Build a Beautiful Hometown”为题目的征文比赛。请结合自己的经历谈一谈自己的所为或所见，并提出你的宝贵建议。
参考信息：
1.叙述一次参与或见证建设美好家乡的经历；
2.结合当下现状，提出一条建设家乡的建议；
3.……
参考词汇：witness v.见证 behavior n.行为 civilized adj.文明的 responsibility n.责任
Build a Beautiful Hometown
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【答案】
Build a Beautiful Hometown
Our city is carrying out the work of creating culture and health care. Each of us has worked hard for it. We try to protect the environment and we obey the traffic rules. We also save water and electricity. And we’re also reducing food waste. When someone needs help, we all lend a helping hand. We help take care of the old. At the same time, we also use our spare time to be volunteers to help those who need help. But there are still some uncivilized phenomena, for example, some people litter or spit in public. So I hope we can all take care of our city. Finally, I hope we plant more trees.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：本文为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点介绍，可以结合自己的生活实际适当增加，注意保持主谓一致性，无语法和标点错误。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。以“我们的城市正在进行创文创卫工作。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。叙述一次参与或见证建设美好家乡的经历，结合当下现状，提出一条建设家乡的建议；
第三步，书写结语。提出希望。
［亮点词汇］
①carry out 执行；进行
②take care of 照顾
［高分句型］
①When someone needs help, we all lend a helping hand.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Finally, I hope we plant more trees.（hope+宾语从句）
I
成长就是一颗渺小的芽，经过风吹雨打和阳光滋润，变成一枝花，又从一枝花成为一颗果实。成长意味着我们逐渐学会更多的知识，掌握更多的技能。但这并不是全部，成长还包括什么呢？是关心帮助同学、体贴理解父母、感恩回报朋友、还请结合自身的一次经历写一篇短文，谈谈你对成长的认识。
要求：
1.80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称。
参考信息：
1.成长的经历：起因、经过……
2.成长的感受；认识、感悟……
As far as I’m concerned, growth is happening all the time in our life.
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【答案】
As far as I’m concerned, growth is happening all the time in our life.
In my opinion, growing up means learning to be thankful to the people around you, especially those who have helped and supported you. It also means sharing duties with your family. My mum is a nurse and she often has to be on duty at night. I was very worried about her health, so I began to learn how to make soup online. In order to save money to buy nutritious ingredients, I sold some old toys in the second-hand market. After failing twice, I finally made a bowl of delicious soup. My mother tasted the soup and said, “My son has grown up. You begin to take care of others. I’m very proud of you.”Although I felt a little tired these days, I was really happy to hear what she said.
It’s true that I have become such a boy that I do as much as possible to help my mom. I also started to realize something that I would carry with me in the rest of my life too. Don’t be afraid of growing up. Try to be a better person and enjoy your life.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“感受”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出成长的话题；
第二步，具体阐述自己的观点和经历；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion依我之见
②be thankful to感恩
③in order to为了
④take care of照顾
[高分句型]
①Although I felt a little tired these days, I was really happy to hear what she said. (although引导让步状语从句，what引导宾语从句)
②growing up means learning to be thankful to the people around you, especially those who have helped and supported you. (who引导定语从句)
J
仅仅十几岁的全红婵，实现了奥运会、世锦赛和世界杯的金牌大满贯。巾帼不让须眉的刘洋，经过层层选拔，最终成为我国首位女航天员。他们的故事深深激励着我们为梦想而奋斗。在你的成长过程中，一定有激励你不断前行的人，他们可能是像全红婵和刘洋这样的榜样人物，也可能是你的亲人、朋友、老师、同学……请以“The person that inspires me”为题写一篇短文，在班上与同学分享。
提示：
1. Who’s the person that inspires you
2. What did he/she do that inspired you
3. What have you learned from him/her
要求：
1. 内容须涵盖所有要点；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
4. 80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The person that inspires me
There are many successful people in society. Their stories encourage us to fight for our dreams. The person that inspires me is________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The person that inspires me
There are many successful people in society. Their stories encourage us to fight for our dreams. The person that inspires me is Dr. Zhong Nanshan.
When the COVID-19 broke out in Wuhan, it spread quickly and around tens of thousands of Chinese people were infected. Everyone was too afraid to go out. Dr. Zhong Nanshan led his team to Wuhan to fight the disease. They took many measures to save the patients. Although he was in his eighties, he still treated patients at the front.
I am moved by his spirit of selfless dedication. I also learn how to fight against the difficulties in life with a strong will.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，点明激励自己的人是谁；
第二步，介绍他做了什么激烈了自己；
第三步，表达自己从他身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①fight for为……而战
②break out爆发
③fight against抵抗
[高分句型]
①When the COVID-19 broke out in Wuhan, it spread quickly and around tens of thousands of Chinese people were infected.（when引导时间状语从句）
②Dr. Zhong Nanshan led his team to Wuhan to fight the disease.（动词不定式作目的状语）
K
我国的传统文化源远流长，博大精深 。我们随时都能感受到传统文化的气息，它绽放在异彩纷呈的民俗节日中 。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Jack来信说对“中国红”很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在我们日常生活中的体现，请你根据下面提示写一封回信。
写作要求：
( 1)内容包括提示信息，可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
( 2)字数不少于 80词。
(3)卷面整洁，条理清楚。
参考词汇：红包 red packets 剪纸 paper cutting
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it.________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it.
Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese people. It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck．
People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events. For instance, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. What’s more, the houses are also filled with red paper cuts, lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red packets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍红色所代表的意义；
第三步，介绍红色的应用；
第四步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②be popular with受欢迎
③what’s more并且
[高分句型]
①People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events.（such…that引导结果状语从句）
②I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.（宾语从句）
L
向世界传递中国文化，让世界倾听中国声音。近期，我市将面向全体中小学生举办“用英语讲好中国故事”的爱国主义主题展示活动。假如你是李华，你想参加此次活动，请根据下面的提示信息，向负责本次活动的英语老师Mr. Yang写一封90词左右的自荐信。
写作提示：
1. 个人信息：姓名、年龄、性格等；
2. 个人优势：
（1）读了很多关于中国历史的书，了解中国历史；
（2）知道很多历史故事，并且擅长用英语讲述它们；
（3）……
3. 个人感想：
（1）可以培养英语学习兴趣，提高口语表达能力；
（2）让更多的人了解中国历史和文化，并为之感到自豪。
写作要求：90词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入字数。行文连贯流畅，不得出现真实姓名校名。
Dear Mr. Yang,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Yang,
I am excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “telling Chinese stories in English”. I really want to take part in it.
My name is Li Hua. I am 15 years old. I am outgoing and helpful. I read a lot of books about Chinese history and learned about it. I know many historical stories and am good at telling them in English. My spoken English is very good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. Through this activity, I can cultivate my interest in learning English and improve my oral expression ability. Let more people know about Chinese history and culture and be proud of it.
I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I am looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为自荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个人信息；
第二步，介绍自己的优势；
第三步，发表个人感想。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②be good at擅长
③communicate with与……沟通
[高分句型]
①Let more people know about Chinese history and culture and be proud of it.（祈使句）
②I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I am looking forward to your reply.（宾语从句）
M
我们每天接触的网络信息纷繁复杂、真假难辨。请以Online rumors（网络流言）为题，解读图片信息，结合你的生活经验，说说你的看法并提出合理的建议，写一篇约100词的英语短文，向Teens英语报投稿。
要求：文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
提示：Pinocchio 匹诺曹
Online rumors
Fast changing online information makes it difficult for us to tell whether it’s true or not.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Online rumors
Fast changing online information makes it difficult for us to tell whether it’s true or not. Some people post online rumors to draw others’ attention. Sometimes they even tell lies to annoy others on purpose just for fun.
During the epidemic, an online rumor flew to every corner of streets—there won’t be enough rice in a short time. That made people so worried that they rushed to supermarkets and bought a lot more rice than they need. People who posted this rumor enjoyed spreading fear and panic. Therefore when we see some online rumors we need to keep calm. More importantly, we should never post them without thinking.
Pinocchio’s nose gets longer and longer because of telling lies and those people will certainly get punished for posting online rumors. What we should do is to keep a cool head.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：文章要求以“Online rumors”为题，结合生活经验以及图片所给信息，介绍自己对于网络流言的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍当今社会中存在的关于“网络流言”的现象问题；
第二步，结合具体的生活实际浅谈“网络流言”对生活造成的影响及危害；
最后一步，结合匹诺曹的鼻子，表达个人感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
②keep calm保持冷静
③draw others’ attention吸引别人的注意
[高分句型]
①That made people so worried that they rushed to supermarkets and bought a lot more rice than they need.（so…that…引导的结果状语从句）
②Therefore when we see some online rumors we need to keep calm.（when引导时间状语从句）2024年中考英语书面表达优秀生拔高特训原卷版（全国通用）
书面表达
A
2024年3月，河北邯郸一名初中生被同学残忍杀害，此消息震惊全国，为杜绝校园欺凌 (say no to school bully)，打造和谐安定校园 (build a harmonious and stable campus)，作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？请根据以下提示，写一篇英语作文。
提示：
1.尊敬老师，努力学习，锻炼身体，培养一个兴趣爱好。
2.与同学融洽相处，互相帮助。
3.不要与他人吵架，不偷盗他人物品。
4.遵守学校的规章制度，不携带管制刀具 (restricted knives)。
5.不要私自会见陌生人，遇险应报警。
要求：
1.语句通顺，语意连贯。
2.运用以上提示词，内容可适当发挥。
3.词数100词左右，作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
It’s important for us students to build a harmonious and stable campus. ________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
B
成长路上，你曾经遇见过很多人，如一位师长，一个朋友等；你也曾经历过很多事，如一次比赛，一项活动等；你也有自己喜欢的东西，如一首歌，一本书；这些人、事物或多或少的对你产生影响，让你发生一些变化，这些变化往往会有助于你的成长。
请以 “_________ made me a difference”为题写一篇英语短文。
以下问题供你参考：
According to an experience of your own, talk about:
1. Which person or thing touched you
2. How did you feel and what did you gain
3. ……
注意事项：
1. 必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥。语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名；
3. 词数在100个左右，首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
_________ Made Me a Difference
In our life, our family or friends, even some strangers, as well as what we’ve gone through in our study or daily life, may make us a difference. _____________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
C
在初中三年的学习生活中，你迎难而上，勇于担当，逐渐成长为“眼中有光，心中有爱”的新时代中国青少年。作为初三年级的学生代表，请你根据以下中文提示写一篇发言稿，与同学们分享你身上的优秀品质和心路历程。
优秀品质 乐于助人， 积极参加志愿者服务（举一例说明）
心路历程 勤学好问，克服困难（举一例说明）
展望未来 1. 自拟一点对自我的要求；2. 做一位健康阳光、感恩的少年。
要求：
1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：90词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
During the past three years, I have developed a number of good personal qualities. _______
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D
为帮助学生更好地了解中国红的历史及其蕴含的文化内涵，上周你校开展了跨学科融合教学活动，包括语文、历史、艺术、劳动(labor)等学科，请你以“Lessons Themed on Chinese Red”为题，根据表格内容提示完成一篇英语报道、向学校英文报投稿，介绍你们在融合课堂上的实践内容及学习收获。
Background(What you know about Chinese red) ●A traditional Chinese color ●Happiness... ●...
Lesson(What do you do in class) History & Chinese ●Tell revolutionary (革命) stories ●…
Art & Labor ●Draw the Chinese national flag ●Design red Chinese things like red packets,... ●Make red Chinese things such as...
Feeling(What you’ve got in class) ●Stand for national spirits ●... ●...
要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2.必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
3.词数在100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Lessons Themed on Chinese Red
Last week our school held a series of cross-subject activities themed on “Chinese Red”.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
E
中国自古以来就是礼仪之邦，文明礼仪是中华民族的优良传统，是做人的美德，更是一个现代文明人必备的素养。作为新一代的青少年，在学习和生活中，如何提升自身的文明素养？请以“I Am a Student with Good Manners”为题，根据提示内容，用英语写一篇短文。
提示：(1) To be polite, what do you usually do at school
(2) What do you usually do at home
(3) In public, how do you behave politely
要求：(1) 短文须包括提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3) 词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计人总词数)。
I Am a Student with Good Manners
It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
At school, __________________________________________________________________
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F
人工智能与5G时代已悄然来临，科技逐渐融入人类生活。随处可见的人工智能，让生活越来越便利的同时也带来许多的问题。假设你是李华，用英文给你的笔友Mike写一封信，谈谈人工智能的现状、发展以及你对人工智能的看法。词数80左右。
Situations of artificial intelligence: ①The future of computer science ②Make a machine think like a human ③...
Studies of its development: ①Resolve scientific problems ②Develop other science ③...
My attitude about it: ...
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Mike,
Long time no see. I want to share with you some ideas about artificial intelligence._________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you agree with me
Yours,
Li Hua
G
受到表扬，你会感到高兴，感到自信，信心倍增。从小到大，你一定受到过无数次的表扬，请以“Once I was praised”为题，根据下面的图示信息和写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，讲述一次你受表扬的经历，并谈谈你的体会。
写作要求：（1）文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）词数100左右。
Once I was praised
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H
文明，是一座城市的内在气息，赋予城市发展生生不息的力量。作为一名中学生, 我们既是美丽家乡的建设者，也是文明新风的守护者。不久前，重庆开展了创文创卫工作，目的在于号召大家守护家乡美好的物质环境和精神风貌。某网站正在发起以“Build a Beautiful Hometown”为题目的征文比赛。请结合自己的经历谈一谈自己的所为或所见，并提出你的宝贵建议。
参考信息：
1.叙述一次参与或见证建设美好家乡的经历；
2.结合当下现状，提出一条建设家乡的建议；
3.……
参考词汇：witness v.见证 behavior n.行为 civilized adj.文明的 responsibility n.责任
Build a Beautiful Hometown
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I
成长就是一颗渺小的芽，经过风吹雨打和阳光滋润，变成一枝花，又从一枝花成为一颗果实。成长意味着我们逐渐学会更多的知识，掌握更多的技能。但这并不是全部，成长还包括什么呢？是关心帮助同学、体贴理解父母、感恩回报朋友、还请结合自身的一次经历写一篇短文，谈谈你对成长的认识。
要求：
1.80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称。
参考信息：
1.成长的经历：起因、经过……
2.成长的感受；认识、感悟……
As far as I’m concerned, growth is happening all the time in our life.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
J
仅仅十几岁的全红婵，实现了奥运会、世锦赛和世界杯的金牌大满贯。巾帼不让须眉的刘洋，经过层层选拔，最终成为我国首位女航天员。他们的故事深深激励着我们为梦想而奋斗。在你的成长过程中，一定有激励你不断前行的人，他们可能是像全红婵和刘洋这样的榜样人物，也可能是你的亲人、朋友、老师、同学……请以“The person that inspires me”为题写一篇短文，在班上与同学分享。
提示：
1. Who’s the person that inspires you
2. What did he/she do that inspired you
3. What have you learned from him/her
要求：
1. 内容须涵盖所有要点；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
4. 80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The person that inspires me
There are many successful people in society. Their stories encourage us to fight for our dreams. The person that inspires me is________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
K
我国的传统文化源远流长，博大精深 。我们随时都能感受到传统文化的气息，它绽放在异彩纷呈的民俗节日中 。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Jack来信说对“中国红”很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在我们日常生活中的体现，请你根据下面提示写一封回信。
写作要求：
( 1)内容包括提示信息，可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
( 2)字数不少于 80词。
(3)卷面整洁，条理清楚。
参考词汇：红包 red packets 剪纸 paper cutting
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it.________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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向世界传递中国文化，让世界倾听中国声音。近期，我市将面向全体中小学生举办“用英语讲好中国故事”的爱国主义主题展示活动。假如你是李华，你想参加此次活动，请根据下面的提示信息，向负责本次活动的英语老师Mr. Yang写一封90词左右的自荐信。
写作提示：
1. 个人信息：姓名、年龄、性格等；
2. 个人优势：
（1）读了很多关于中国历史的书，了解中国历史；
（2）知道很多历史故事，并且擅长用英语讲述它们；
（3）……
3. 个人感想：
（1）可以培养英语学习兴趣，提高口语表达能力；
（2）让更多的人了解中国历史和文化，并为之感到自豪。
写作要求：90词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入字数。行文连贯流畅，不得出现真实姓名校名。
Dear Mr. Yang,
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Sincerely,
Li Hua
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我们每天接触的网络信息纷繁复杂、真假难辨。请以Online rumors（网络流言）为题，解读图片信息，结合你的生活经验，说说你的看法并提出合理的建议，写一篇约100词的英语短文，向Teens英语报投稿。
要求：文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
提示：Pinocchio 匹诺曹
Online rumors
Fast changing online information makes it difficult for us to tell whether it’s true or not.
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