2024年高考英语（书面表达）模拟真题 (上海专用)
1．（2024·上海长宁·二模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，准备参加《英文报》举办的主题为 “Changes in my community”的征文活动,要求用英文介绍身边发生的变化。你的征文必须包括：
1. 描述发生的变化；
2. 客观分析变化发生的原因。
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【答案】Changes in my community
It’s common phenomenon in my community that electric cars take up the most parking lot in the garage instead of gas vehicles. Also, when we commute between home and company, electric scooters play a critical role in time efficiency, convenience and expense spent on transportation. People travel everywhere with faster means of transports, and make full use of digital payment system such as WeChat, Alipay.
There are a few reasons contributing to this. Firstly, with the rapid development of technology, people tend to cater to mainstream lifestyle as technology aims to create a better and modern life and has achieved what it promises, which is beneficial to the public eventually. Secondly, our society has turned into a highly efficient one that people have to speed up to adapt to. So it comes as a trend that the faster, the more efficient, the better.
I do hope technology will do us good more economically and bring more comfort to our community.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求学生用英文介绍社区发生的变化，并客观分析变化发生的原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：critical→crucial
利用：make use of→take advantage of
倾向于：tend to→be likely to
加速：speed up→accelerate
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Secondly, our society has turned into a highly efficient one that people have to speed up to adapt to.
拓展句：Secondly, our society has turned into such a highly efficient one that people have to speed up to adapt to it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, with the rapid development of technology, people tend to cater to mainstream lifestyle as technology aims to create a better and modern life and has achieved what it promises, which is beneficial to the public eventually.（运用了what引导的宾语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句和as引导的状语从句）
【高分句型2】It’s common phenomenon in my community that electric cars take up the most parking lot in the garage instead of gas vehicles.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句）
2．（23-24高三下·上海浦东新·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
随着人工智能的快速发展，ChatGPT已进入我们的生活，正逐渐影响我们的学习方式和体验，有人认为它会带来诸多便利，也有人心存顾虑。假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，学校贴吧就此话题正在热议，你对此很感兴趣，决定回帖响应。回帖内容应包括：
1. 你是否支持使用ChatGPT；
2. 你的理由。
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【答案】 As a student, I am intrigued by the ongoing discussion surrounding ChatGPTs. Regarding the use of ChatGPT, I am cautiously supportive, recognizing both its potential benefits and concerns.
Firstly, I support the use of ChatGPT because of its convenience and accessibility. With ChatGPT, we have instant access to information and assistance, which can greatly enhance our learning experiences. Additionally, ChatGPT can foster creativity and exploration. By interacting with ChatGPT, students have the opportunity to
engage in stimulating conversations, explore new ideas. This interactive learning experience can inspire innovation, and encourage independent thinking.However, I also acknowledge the need for caution when using ChatGPT. As with any technology, there are concerns about privacy, accuracy, and overreliance. It’s essential to use ChatGPT responsibly and maintain a balance between technological assistance and independent learning.
In conclusion, while I support the use of ChatGPT as a valuable tool in education, it’s important to approach its integration thoughtfully and mindfully to maximize its benefits while addressing potential challenges.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生就学校贴吧热议的ChatGPT话题回帖，发表自己的观点并陈述理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感兴趣的：intrigued →interested
因为：because of→owing to
帮助：assistance→help
机会：opportunity→ chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, I support the use of ChatGPT because of its convenience and accessibility.
拓展句：Firstly, I support the use of ChatGPT because it is convenient and accessible
【点睛】【高分句型1】With ChatGPT, we have instant access to information and assistance, which can greatly enhance our learning experiences. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】However, I also acknowledge the need for caution when using ChatGPT.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略）
3．（2024·上海浦东新·二模）随着人工智能的快速发展，ChatGPT已进入我们的生活，正逐渐影响我们的学习方式和体验，有人认为它会带来诸多便利，也有人心存顾虑。假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，学校贴吧就此话题正在热议，你对此很感兴趣，决定回帖响应。回帖内容应包括：
1.你是否支持使用ChatGPT;
2.你的理由。
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【答案】As a student at Mingqi High School, I am intrigued by the ongoing discussion surrounding the integration of ChatGPT into our lives amidst the rapid development of artificial intelligence. Regarding the use of ChatGPT, I am cautiously supportive, recognizing both its potential benefits and concerns.
Firstly, I support the use of ChatGPT because of its convenience and accessibility. With ChatGPT, we have instant access to information and assistance, which can greatly enhance our learning experiences. Whether it’s clarifying concepts, practicing language skills, or receiving personalized feedback, ChatGPT offers valuable support that complements traditional learning methods.
Additionally, ChatGPT can foster creativity and exploration. By interacting with ChatGPT, students have the opportunity to engage in stimulating conversations, explore new ideas, and expand their knowledge in diverse subjects. This interactive learning experience can spark curiosity, inspire innovation, and encourage independent thinking among students.
However, I also acknowledge the need for caution when using ChatGPT. As with any technology, there are concerns about privacy, accuracy, and overreliance. It’s essential to use ChatGPT responsibly, critically evaluate the information it provides, and maintain a balance between technological assistance and independent learning.
In conclusion, while I support the use of ChatGPT as a valuable tool in education, it’s important to approach its integration thoughtfully and mindfully to maximize its benefits while addressing potential challenges. (word: 217)
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。随着人工智能的快速发展，ChatGPT已进入我们的生活，正逐渐影响我们的学习方式和体验，有人认为它会带来诸多便利，也有人心存顾虑。假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，学校贴吧就此话题正在热议，你对此很感兴趣，决定回帖响应。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提高，促进：enhance→prompt/facilitate
鼓励：inspire→motivate
重要的：essential→vital
总之：in conclusion→to conclude
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, I support the use of ChatGPT because of its convenience and accessibility.
拓展句：Firstly, I support the use of ChatGPT because it is convenient and accessible.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Whether it’s clarifying concepts, practicing language skills, or receiving personalized
feedback, ChatGPT offers valuable support that complements traditional learning methods.（运用了whether...or引导的让步状语从句）
【高分句型2】With ChatGPT, we have instant access to information and assistance, which can greatly enhance our learning experiences.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
4．（2024·上海静安·二模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学李华，你校艺术节即将举办主题为“最美瞬间”的摄影展，捕捉“热爱生活、积极向上、全面发展”等正能量的精彩瞬间。现邀请每位同学提供自己生活中的一张照片参展，并撰写摄影作品的介绍供参观者阅读。你打算提供什么样的照片？请写一篇短文作为参展摄影作品的介绍，内容包括：
1) 对该照片的简要描述；
2) 你选择该照片参展的理由。
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【答案】One possible version:
This is a photo depicting a sunrise over a misty mountain peak. In the image, the sun is just peeking over the horizon, casting a warm golden glow across the sky and illuminating the rolling clouds that cling to the mountain slopes.
I chose this photo for the exhibition because it captures a breathtaking moment of natural beauty and serenity. The vibrant colors of the sunrise symbolize hope and new beginnings, reflecting the theme that the art festival seeks to promote. Additionally, the tranquil atmosphere of the scene encourages viewers to pause and appreciate the wonders of nature, fostering a sense of mindfulness and gratitude. The photo invites viewers to connect with their surroundings and find inspiration in the simple joys of everyday life. It serves as a reminder to embrace each moment with enthusiasm and a positive outlook.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，参与学校艺术节即将举办的“最美瞬间”摄影展，为参展摄影作品写一篇介绍，需涵盖简要描述和选择的理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
描绘：depict→portrary
捕捉：capture→catch, seize
象征：symbolize→represent, signify
激励某人做某事：encourage sb. to do→motivate sb. to do, inspire sb. to do
培养：foster→cultivate, develop
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This is a photo depicting a sunrise over a misty mountain peak.
拓展句：This is a photo that depicts a sunrise over a misty mountain peak.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In the image, the sun is just peeking over the horizon, casting a warm golden glow across the sky and illuminating the rolling clouds that cling to the mountain slopes (运用了现在分词短语作状语、that引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I chose this photo for the exhibition because it captures a breathtaking moment of natural beauty and serenity. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
5．（23-24高三下·上海·阶段练习）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
简单描述图片内容，分析造成此现象的原因，并谈谈你的看法。
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【答案】One possible version:
Those days Chinese parents tend to spend a lot of money sending their children to study abroad in the hope of their children studying hard and being successful, while the children think of studying abroad as a way to get
rid of the pressure of study.
There’re two main reasons for this phenomenon. On the one hand, because of societal attitudes, parents often hold the belief that overseas education leads to better opportunities. Therefore, they would like to send their children abroad. On the other hand, Chinese students are under the great pressure of entrance examinations. Going abroad means that they can live an easier life.
In my opinion, some effective measures should be taken to solve this problem. First, parents should correct their outdated ideas. Second, the government should actively carry out educational reform to reduce the pressure on students.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文，要求考生根据图画表达的内容，分析产生该现象的原因，并谈谈自己的看法。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
倾向于：tend to do…→have a tendency to do…
希望：in the hope of→in the expectation of
把……看作……：think of…as…→regard…as…/see…as…
压力：pressure→stress
2. 句式拓展
合并句子
原句：On the other hand, Chinese students are under the great pressure of entrance examinations. Going abroad means that they can live an easier life.
拓展句：On the other hand, Chinese students are under the great pressure of entrance examinations. while going abroad means that they can live an easier life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Those days Chinese parents tend to spend a lot of money sending their children to study abroad in the hope of their children studying hard and being successful, while the children think of studying abroad as a way to get rid of the pressure of study.(使用了第一个不定式作tend的宾语、第二个不定式在send sb. to do…结构中作宾补、第三个不定式在way后边作后置定语，还使用了动名词作宾语，并且使用了while连接并列的句子)
【高分句型2】On the one hand, because of societal attitudes, parents often hold the belief that overseas education leads to better opportunities. (使用了that引导同位语从句)
6．（2024高三下·上海·专题练习）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的高三学生吴磊，你校英语节即将举行主题为“快乐童年”的展览，邀请每位同学提供一件生活中的物品参展，并撰写展品介绍供参观者阅读。你会提供什么物品 写一篇介绍，内容须包括：
1)对该物品的简要描述；
2)你选择该物品参展的原因。
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【答案】下水版：
I’m delighted to be invited to the English Festival at our school, which is organizing an exhibition entitled ‘Happy Childhood’.
For my contribution to the exhibits, I have elected to provide a photograph from my childhood. The image depicts a scene in which I am playing with my family in a park. The sun is shining brightly, and we are all visibly enjoying ourselves.
I selected this photograph for inclusion in the exhibition because it represents a joyful moment from my childhood. It serves as a reminder of the delightful times I spent with my family, engaging in playful activities and sharing laughter. On that particular sunny afternoon, we partook in a picnic on the grass and played games, resulting in an enjoyable weekend spent together.
Additionally, this photograph evokes feelings of warmth and happiness within me, and it is my hope that by sharing it with visitors to the exhibition, they too may experience a glimpse into my happy childhood. It serves as a reminder of life’s simple pleasures and the significance of spending time with those we hold dear.
In brief, my contribution to the ‘Happy Childhood’ exhibition is a photograph that captures a joyous moment from my past. It represents the happiness and love that characterized my childhood experiences, and it is my hope that it will elicit similar feelings of joy in those who view it. By sharing this photograph, I aim to convey the message that childhood is a time of happiness and wonder, and that such memories are to be cherished. (257)
学霸版：
I’m Senior Three student Wu Lei, and what I bring to this “Happy Childhood” exhibition is “Henry”, my giant fluffy teddy bear, who has been accompanying me for over a decade. He has brown skin, dark eyes, a red
nose, and soft pads that are most comfortable to rub.
I choose “Henry” simply because he serves as a constant reminder of how I have come into who I am today.
I got “Henry” when I turned seven years old. Being rather naughty back then, I wanted almost everything that came into my sight, and usually ditched them once I got tired. But Henry” was somehow different. During our time together I gradually developed a deep affection for him, alongside which a sense of responsibility came naturally. Instead of just leaving him around my home, I would place him properly either on my bed or by the window. Every time our family went for an outing I would take him along, and no matter how late we got home I always made sure Henry” was carefully cleaned. Though I don’t have as much time these days to keep him company, you can tell what excellent condition he is in even after all these years.
Above is the story of me and my dear “Henry”. I hope you have a good time and enjoy the festival! (224)
附：One Possible Version①
My name is Wu Lei, a senior high school student from Mingqi Middle School, and I will be participating in our school’s English exhibition themed on “Happy Childhood”. From my childhood collection, I have chosen a precious item — my much beloved teddy bear. This soft and cuddly bear has been my constant companion for more than a decade. It was gifted to me by my dear aunt when I was just five years old. The bear’s endearing features — its glossy black eyes, red nose and soft brown fur — have remained unaltered despite the wear and tear of years. The reason I have chosen this stuffed toy as my exhibit is that it evokes profound memories of my happy childhood and brings back a flood of delightful nostalgia. This cherished teddy has stood by me through all the ups and downs of growing up and has never let me down — always providing unconditional comfort and solace whenever I needed it. It was not only my playmate and comforter but a confidant who heard all of my childhood confessions and secrets. In conclusion, this seemingly simple plush bear is a treasure trove of emotions and memories for me. It represents an innocent and happy time in my life that I will cherish forever.
附：One Possible Version②
The exhibition showcases various items representing a happy childhood, and I have chosen my childhood diary as my exhibit. This diary holds cherished memories and is a window into my past. It is a small, weathered book with yellowed pages, filled with my handwritten thoughts, dreams, and experiences from my early years. I chose this diary as my exhibit because it is a tangible representation of my joyful and innocent childhood. Within its pages lie the stories of my adventures, dreams, and the daily moments that shaped me into who I am today. Each entry captures the essence of my emotions and the simple pleasures I experienced during those carefree years. Through my childhood diary, I hope to evoke nostalgia and encourage visitors to reflect on their own
cherished memories. It serves as a reminder of the importance of embracing the innocence and joy that childhood brings. Furthermore, it highlights the significance of preserving our personal histories and the power of reflection in shaping our present selves. As visitors read the exhibit, I hope they are inspired to cherish their own childhood memories and recognize the value of embracing happiness in their lives. May this exhibit serve as a joyful reminder of the precious moments that have shaped our identities and bring a smile to the faces of all who visit.
【导语】
这是一篇应用文。假如考生是明启中学的高三学生吴磊，你校英语节即将举行主题为“快乐童年”的展览，邀请每位同学提供一件生活中的物品参展，并撰写展品介绍供参观者阅读。写一篇你提供的物品的介绍和你选择它的原因。解析以第一篇为例。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
提供：provide→offer
选择：select→choose
代表：represent→stand for
导致：result in→lead to
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：On that particular sunny afternoon, we partook in a picnic on the grass and played games, resulting in an enjoyable weekend spent together.
拓展句：On that particular sunny afternoon, we partook in a picnic on the grass and played games, which resulted in an enjoyable weekend spent together.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I selected this photograph for inclusion in the exhibition because it represents a joyful moment from my childhood. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】The image depicts a scene in which I am playing with my family in a park. (运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的限制性定语从句)
7．（23-24高三上·上海浦东新·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
近期，“消失的课间十分钟”问题引发社会持续热议。有些学校规定，学生在课间除了上厕所、喝水之外，不允许离开教室。请对此现象发表你的看法。
你的作文须包括：
1. 简要分析该现象背后的原因；
2. 结合自身经历，谈谈如何“唤醒”课间十分钟。
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【答案】 The “disappearing ten minutes between classes” has sparked widespread debate in society. Some schools have implemented rules that prohibit students from leaving the classroom except using the restroom or drinking water. Behind this trend lies a focus on academic performance and a desire to keep students safe.
However, these measures can do harm to students’ physical and mental well-being. In my experience, the breaks were a cherished time for socializing, fresh air, and exercise. To “wake up” these “disappearing ten minutes between classes”, schools should promote a culture of wellness, provide opportunities for physical activity, and encourage students to take full advantage of their breaks. By giving back these precious minutes, we students can enjoy a more balanced learning environment where we can thrive both academically and personally.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生就“消失的课间十分钟”问题发表看法，简要分析该现象背后的原因，并结合自身经历谈谈如何“唤醒”课间十分钟。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
引发：spark→trigger/cause
实施：implement→conduct
对……有害：do harm to→be harmful to
推动：promote→encourage
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Some schools have implemented rules that prohibit students from leaving the classroom except using the restroom or drinking water.
拓展句：Some schools have implemented rules prohibiting students from leaving the classroom except using the restroom or drinking water.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Behind this trend lies a focus on academic performance and a desire to keep students safe.(使用了全部倒装结构、不定式作后置定语、“keep+宾语+宾补”结构)
【高分句型2】To “wake up” these “disappearing ten minutes between classes”, schools should promote a culture of wellness, provide opportunities for physical activity, and encourage students to take full advantage of their breaks.(使用了不定式作目的状语和宾补，还使用了and连接三个并列的谓语)
【高分句型3】By giving back these precious minutes, we students can enjoy a more balanced learning environment where we can thrive both academically and personally.(使用了动名词作宾语、where引导定语从句)
8．（2024·上海徐汇·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
随着中国传统文化越来越受到国人的重视，例如中国的各种传统节日，它们充满了中国的历史、理念、哲学思考和善良的中国人对人性的深刻认知和理解。假如你是中华中学的学生李敏，关于这个话题在知乎上写一篇文章，谈谈你的看法，题目自拟。你的文章必须包括：
1. 选择一项中国传统节日和一项西方节日进行对比；
2. 谈谈你对中国传统文化的理解。
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【答案】One possible version:
As a student at Zhonghua High School, I’ve witnessed the growing appreciation of traditional Chinese culture among my fellow countrymen. Traditional Chinese festivals, such as the Spring Festival and Mid-Autumn Festival, embody not only China’s history but also its philosophical reflections and the profound understanding and compassion of the Chinese people towards human nature. On this topic, I recently shared my thoughts on Zhihu, shedding light on my perspective.
Firstly, let’s compare a Chinese traditional festival with a Western one. Taking the Spring Festival and Christmas as examples, the Spring Festival is China’s paramount traditional celebration, symbolizing new beginnings, family reunions, and a profound emphasis on family values. In contrast, Christmas in the West places a greater emphasis on gift exchanges and a commercial atmosphere, highlighting personal enjoyment and festivities.
In my view, traditional Chinese culture is a vast and profound treasure trove. It encompasses not only rituals and customs but also profound contemplations on life, nature, and interpersonal relationships. Traditional Chinese values, centered around family, filial piety, and harmony, have instilled in me a moral compass. Through traditional festivals, I’ve learned the importance of respecting elders and cherishing family.
In today’s society, the comparison between Chinese and Western cultures has deepened my understanding of the uniqueness of traditional Chinese culture. It’s crucial to continue promoting the values embedded in our traditions, fostering a more harmonious and civilized society.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文。要求考生选择一项中国传统节日和一项西方节日进行对比；谈谈自己对中国传统文化的理解。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：firstly→to begin with
重要：importance→significance
相比之下：in contrast→in comparison
在我看来：in my view→as far as I’m concerned
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：On this topic, I recently shared my thoughts on Zhihu, shedding light on my perspective.
拓展句：On this topic, I recently shared my thoughts on Zhihu, which sheds light on my perspective.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
In contrast, Christmas in the West places a greater emphasis on gift exchanges and a commercial atmosphere, highlighting personal enjoyment and festivities. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]
It’s crucial to continue promoting the values embedded in our traditions, fostering a more harmonious and civilized society. (运用了it作形式主语，动词不定式作主语，动名词作宾语)
9．（23-24高三上·上海宝山·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你们英语老师每周都会让同学们轮流用英语做值日生报告，大家在给全班同学展示的时候，有些同学喜欢写好稿子朗读，有些同学偏向背诵，还有些同学倾向于直接口头表达。请给英语老师写一封邮件，告诉老师你喜欢哪种呈现方式，以及相关的理由。你的文章必须包括：
1.简单描述你喜欢的呈现方式(不仅限于上面三种方式)；
2.陈述你选择这种方式的理由或你所选择方式的优势。
(文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称)
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【答案】
Dear Mr. Li,
I am writing to express my preference for the presentation style of using short notes while doing the weekly classroom duty report. The reason for this is threefold.
Firstly, this method allows me to convey the important points clearly and succinctly. It helps me to focus on the essential information and deliver it to the class effectively. Secondly, it reduces the possibility of making mistakes or forgetting important details while presenting. Thirdly, short notes make me more confident and less nervous, as I can refer to them and maintain eye contact with the audience.
In contrast, I feel that reading from a prepared manuscript or memorizing the whole report can be stressful and may lead to stumbles or errors. Moreover, it may be difficult to maintain a natural flow of language.
In conclusion, I believe that using short notes is an effective and efficient way to present my weekly duty report. I hope you will consider my preference for the upcoming weeks.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是开放性作文。要求考生给英语老师写一封邮件，告诉老师你在用英语做值日生报告时，喜欢哪种呈现方式，以及相关的理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
表达：express→display
首先：firstly→first of all
集中注意：focus on→concentrate on
保持：maintain→keep
2. 句式拓展
简单句合并为复合句
原句：Firstly, this method allows me to convey the important points clearly and succinctly. It helps me to focus on the essential information and deliver it to the class effectively.
拓展句：Firstly, this method allows me to convey the important points clearly and succinctly, which helps me to focus on the essential information and deliver it to the class effectively.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Thirdly, short notes make me more confident and less nervous, as I can refer to them and maintain eye contact with the audience.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] In conclusion, I believe that using short notes is an effective and efficient way to present my weekly duty report.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及动名词作主语)
10．（2024·上海金山·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。学校将举办运动会，你班拟从以下三个方案中选其一参加开幕式的节目表演：中国传统乐器演奏（如古筝、二胡等等）；中国传统服饰秀（如汉服、旗袍等等）和中国传统才艺展示（如民族舞、武术等等）。现征求全班同学意见。给班主任写封邮件，内容须包括：
1. 你的选择；
2. 你的理由。
（文中不要出现真实姓名和学校名称）
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【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my opinion on the upcoming opening ceremony performance for our school's sports meet. I suggest that our class participate in the Chinese traditional instrument performance, such as playing guzheng or erhu.
Firstly, this choice will allow us to showcase our cultural heritage and appreciation for traditional Chinese music. Instruments like guzheng and erhu are emblematic of Chinese culture, and their unique sound and music have been popular around the world for generations. Secondly, the instrument performance will also provide a unique and exciting break from the usual sports-related activities.
In conclusion, I believe that our class participating in the Chinese traditional instrument performance will not
only enrich the cultural diversity of the opening ceremony but also present a unique opportunity for us to share our cultural identity with the rest of the school. Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。学校将举办运动会，你班拟从以下三个方案中选其一参加开幕式的节目表演：中国传统乐器演奏（如古筝、二胡等等）；中国传统服饰秀（如汉服、旗袍等等）和中国传统才艺展示（如民族舞、武术等等）。现征求全班同学意见。给班主任写封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→convey
建议：suggest→recommend
机会：opportunity→chance
总之：in conclusion→in short
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Instruments like guzheng and erhu are emblematic of Chinese culture, and their unique sound and music have been popular around the world for generations.
拓展句：Not only are instruments like guzheng and erhu emblematic of Chinese culture, but also their unique sound and music have been popular around the world for generations.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I suggest that our class participate in the Chinese traditional instrument performance, such as playing the guzheng or erhu. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] In conclusion, I believe that our class participating in the Chinese traditional instrument performance will not only enrich the cultural diversity of the opening ceremony but also present a unique opportunity for us to share our cultural identity with the rest of the school. (运用了not only…but also…句型)
11．（2024·上海杨浦·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是美国一所中学的学生Sam，最近你班要召开一次主题为“不让霸凌成为青春的一道疤”的班会。根据主题内容，写一篇发言稿（所给材料可供参考）。
Here are the national statistics about bullying in the USA About 20% of students aged 12-18
experienced bullying nationwide. Students aged 12-18 who reported bullied said they thought those who bullied them: -- had the ability to influence other students’ perception of them (56%). -- were physically stronger or larger (40%). -- had more money (31%).
Word box:bully v/n 恐吓；伤害；/ 恃强凌弱者
【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning. I am Sam, a student at a high school in the United States. Today, I would like to address the important issue of bullying in our school community. According to recent data, approximately 20% of students aged 12-18 have experienced bullying nationwide. This is a concerning statistic that affects many young individuals in our society.
The victims of bullying have shared their thoughts on why they believed they were targeted. Firstly, 56% of victims believed that the bullies had the ability to influence other students' perception of them. This highlights the power bullies hold in shaping how others view their peers.Secondly, 40% of victims mentioned that bullies were physically stronger or larger. This underscores the unfair advantage some bullies have in these situations. It is disheartening to see that physical strength is used as a means to intimidate and harm others.Lastly, 31% of victims felt that bullies had more money. This suggests that some bullies may use their financial status to exert power and control over their peers. It is crucial to remember that wealth should never be a justification for mistreating others.
We must stand united against bullying and create a supportive and inclusive environment where kindness, empathy, and respect prevail. If we witness any form of bullying, it is our responsibility to speak up and support the victim. We should also report the incident to a trusted adult who can take appropriate action.
Together, we can ensure that bullying does not leave scars on our youth. Let us work towards a future where every student feels safe, accepted, and valued.
Thank you for your attention.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于最近你班要召开一次主题为“不让霸凌成为青春的一道疤”的班会这一情况，根据主题内容，写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
影响：affect→ influence
强调：highlights→ emphasizes
让人沮丧的：disheartening→ frustrating
至关重要的：crucial→ vital
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am Sam, a student at a high school in the United States.
拓展句：I am Sam, who is a student at a high school in the United States.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This is a concerning statistic that affects many young individuals in our society.（运用了关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句。）
【高分句型2】If we witness any form of bullying, it is our responsibility to speak up and support the victim.（运用了连词if引导的条件状语从句。）
12．（2024·上海长宁·一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
AI技术日新月异，有些职业比如翻译可能将被人工智能翻译软件所替代。因此，你认为未来还有学习外语的需要吗？为什么？请写一篇短文说明你的观点。
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【答案】AI technology is advancing rapidly, and many people believe that manual translation may be replaced by artificial intelligence translation software. We should view this matter objectively.
Firstly, AI translation has both advantages and disadvantages. AI translation is popular and widely used due to its high efficiency, accuracy, and support for multilingual translation. However, the drawbacks of intelligent translation cannot be ignored. For example, it is difficult to understand language and cultural differences, and a lack of understanding of contextual information may lead to inaccurate or unsmooth translation.
On the contrary, manual translation still has irreplaceable advantages. Manual translation is more professional and accurate. Manual translation has a strong human touch. Manual translation can carefully understand cultural differences and language habits, making the translation create a human touch and emotional
effect.
Therefore, in the future, we must learn foreign languages well and continue to strengthen our cultivation in language, culture and industry to obtain more opportunities and development opportunities in various industries.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生就“AI技术日新月异，有些职业比如翻译可能将被人工智能翻译软件所替代，未来还有没有学习外语的需要”这一话题说明自己的观点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
进步：advance →improve
看待：view → treat
缺点：drawbacks → shortcomings
导致：lead to → result in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Manual translation can carefully understand cultural differences and language habits, making the translation create a human touch and emotional effect.
拓展句：Manual translation can carefully understand cultural differences and language habits, which makes the translation create a human touch and emotional effect.
【点睛】【高分句型1】AI technology is advancing rapidly, and many people believe that manual translation may be replaced by artificial intelligence translation software. (使用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Manual translation can carefully understand cultural differences and language habits, making the translation create a human touch and emotional effect. (使用了现在分词作结果状语)
