Unit14书面表达10篇
1．即将毕业，请以“My favorite teacher”为题，写一篇英语短文，短文包括以下内容：
(1). 老师的外貌、性格、所教科目等；
(2). 以事例描述喜爱的原因；
(3). 表达对这位老师的感激和祝福。
要求：
1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名；
3. 卷面整洁，书写美观，课适当加2-3分；
4. 词数：80词左右，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
My favorite teacher
It’s time to graduate from junior high school. I’d like to write something about my favorite teacher. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My favorite teacher
It’s time to graduate from junior high school. I’d like to write something about my favorite teacher. Of all the teachers, I like my English teacher best. She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and reading. She is of medium height and has long straight hair.
When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in the English competition. She encouraged me not to give up any chance to show myself to others. Thanks to her, I changed my attitude and won the first prize.
I will never forget the wonderful time we were together. Best wishes to her!
【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如graduate from，of all the teachers，of medium height，so that，be afraid to do，take part in，give up，encourage sb. to do，at the weekends，thanks to sb.，the first prize等。而并列结构She is of medium height and has long straight hair./ I changed my attitude and won the first prize.和She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and reading./ When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in the English competition./ I will never forget the wonderful time we were together.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【分析】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
2．书面表达。
假设你是一名初三毕业生，考上了理想的学校。今天是开学第一天，请你根据下面的内容要点，用英语写一篇90词左右的日记，写下这一天的感受。(日记的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数)
(1)．去学校前感到兴奋和担忧(原因自拟)；
(2)．到学校后发现老师、同学都很友好，忘了紧张，感觉自在；
(3)．离开学校时，感到不会再担心，并相信会快乐。
Monday，Sept．3
Today was the first day of my new life．I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year．I was excited as well as worried．
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【答案】例文
Monday, Sept. 3 Fine
Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year, I was excited as well as worried.
I was excited because I am a student of senior middle school now. I was worried because I didn’t quite know about the teachers, students in this school. I was afraid that I couldn’t fit in well.
When I got to school, I found everyone was really sweet to me. Teachers were kind and ready to help us. I soon forgot my nervousness. I felt at home.
At the end of today, I felt no more fear and I believe I will have lots of fun at this new school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，要求写一篇日记，写下开学第一天的感受，应采用第一人称。并根据要求补充一点自己的观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明开学第一天，我既兴奋又担心；
第二步，阐述自己既兴奋又担心的原因；
第三步，说明到校后的真实情况及自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①as well as而且，还
②fit in well融入得好
③be ready to do乐于做某事
[高分句型]
①I was excited because I am a student of senior middle school now. (原因状语从句）
②When I got to school, I found everyone was really sweet to me.（时间状语从句）
3．书面表达（共1题）
初中三年的学习生活让人难忘，毕业之际，你校将举行"感恩"为主题的英文演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文演讲稿．
要点提示：
(1)．感谢父母，教我如何生活，……
(2)．感谢老师，教我许多知识，……
(3)．感谢同学，给我美好回忆，……
写作要求：
1．词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）；
2．可适当增减词汇，使语句流畅、完整；
3．文中不能透露个人真实信息．
Good morning， everyone． I'm glad to be here to speak in front of you． Here I'd like to thank everyone of you．
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That' s all． Thank you．
【答案】Good morning，everyone．I'm glad to be here to speak in front of you． Here I'd like to thank everyone of you．How time flies! We 'll graduate soon． I have so many words from my heart to say．At this moment，I want to say thanks to my parents，my teachers and my classmates．
Dear dad and mom， you've taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．You taught me how to get on well with my classmates．
Dear teachers，thank you for teaching me so well．I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are．I still remember when I failed in an exam， you encouraged me to keep trying． When I had trouble in life， you told me to be brave． Because of your help，I have made much progress．
Dear classmates， you've helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school． When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and give me some advice．I never forget the days when we studied together．
Words can't show my thanks to you!I'll remember all of you．
That' s all． Thank you．
【详解】这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【分析】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少. At this moment，I want to say thanks to my parents，my teachers and my classmates．；Dear dad and mom， you've taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
4．假如你是李华，你的高中生活即将开始，你的英国笔友Sam询问你高中的计划，请你用英语根据以下内容和要求写一封电子邮件回复他。
内容：
1.与新老师和新同学友好相处；
2.参加各种活动，如：体育活动，强健身体；
3.多读书，开阔视野，提高阅读能力；
4.努力学习，提高成绩，尽力做到最好；
5.使高中生活丰富多彩有意义。
要求：
1.必须包括以上所有内容，并可适当发挥；
2.词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3.不能出现真实的人名、校名及地名；
4.将邮件写在答题线指定的位置上。
Dear Sam,
I am glad to tell you my senior high school plan.
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Sam,
I am glad to tell you my senior high school plan. First, I am going to get on well with my new teachers and classmates. Second, I will take an active part in different kinds of activities. For example, I can do more sports to make my body stronger and keep healthy. Third, I will study hard to get better grades and try to be the best in my class. Fourth, I plan to do more reading to open my eyes and improve my reading skills. Though everything is new to me, I will try to make my school life colorful and meaningful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件，以Li Hua的名义给Sam写一封邮件，介绍自己的高中计划；注意题干中要点提示，保证内容完整。
2.写作指导：文章介绍高中的计划，故时态是一般将来时，人称以第一人称为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意使用First、Second等词汇增强文章条理性；保证文章要点齐全、语句通顺。
5．“建设美丽新疆，共圆祖国梦想”，所有新疆人正以此为目标全力以赴建设大美新疆。作为生于新疆、长于新疆的中学生，我们又能为此做些什么呢？请从以下提示中选择至少2点，写一篇题为“What can we do to help build Xinjiang ”的英语短文，可适当发挥。
1. 出行方式；2. 环境保护；3. 节约意识；4. 与人相处。
要求：
1. 80 词左右；
2.文章中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.语法正确，语义连贯；字迹工整，书写规范。
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【答案】One possible version:
What can we do to help build Xinjiang
As is known to us all, people are doing their best to make Xinjiang stronger and more beautiful. As students born and grown up in Xinjiang, what can we do to help build it
Firstly, we can avoid the traffic jams and reduce air pollution by riding bikes or walking if we don’t live far from our school. Secondly, we shouldn’t spit or litter here and there. In order to protect the environment, we can also plant trees around our city. Thirdly, we are supposed to stop wasting resources. In our daily life, we should save water, electricity and paper and so on. For example, remember to turn off the tap and reuse water. Last but not least, it’s important and necessary to get along well with others. When people are in trouble, we had better give them a hand and try to help them out.
In short, if everyone, including us students, makes contributions, our hometown will be better and better.
Let’s take action now to do what we can to help build Xinjiang.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，从不同的方面描述如何让新疆变得更美，包括出行方式、环境保护、节约意识以及与人之间的相处等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时，提出建议可以多用情态动词；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
6．每个人在学校期间，都有自己难忘的老师。假如你叫李雷。毕业在即，请你根据以下提示给你的英语老师(Miss Zhao)写一封信。
内容包括：
1．表达感激之情；
2．回忆印象最深的一件事(一次帮助，或一次鼓励，或一次批评……)；
3．你的感想或建议。
作文要求：
1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；
2．语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Zhao，
As you know, I've made great progress in English with your help. At this moment, I want to say “Thank you”．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Lei
【答案】例文：
Dear Miss White
As you know, I’ve made great progress in study with your help. At this moment, I was to say “Thank you”I will graduate in this summer. It is memorable three years we spend together. All the things in this classroom will bring me back to the little things we enjoy together. I very appreciate the help and guide you give to me when I don't know how to do.
Perhaps, you have already forgotten, since it was only one of the millions you have done to us. But I will remember it forever. During that period, I was absorbed into computer game. I always fell asleep during class and my grade was decreasing. You always use your own time to help me, to study together with me. You never blame for anything. But I learned that I need to study hard for your help.
It is a good time in my life and I will cherish it forever. There is only one thing I want you to know before I finish. Take care of your health and I will always miss you.
Yours
Lilei
【详解】试题分析：这篇作文叫小作者介绍自己印象最深的一件事。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。
写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如During that period, I was absorbed into computer game. I always fell asleep during class and my grade was decreasing. You always use your own time to help me, to study together with me.等等。
7．亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，学生会要组织一次毕业演讲征文活动。请你准备一篇演讲稿。
内容包括：
1. 自入学以来你的两个不同方面的改变；
2. 父母或老师给予你的帮助或建议（至少两条）；
3. 毕业后，你打算做什么？为什么？（至少给出两个理由）
要求：
1. 必须包括以上所有内容，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 不得出现真实的校名和姓名；
3. 100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Ladies and gentlemen,
How time flies! It’s time for us to say goodbye. Looking back at the three years, I ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
How time flies! It’s time for us to say goodbye. Looking back at the three years, I have changed a lot. I used to be very weak in English. But now I’m good at English. I was too shy to talk with others in Grade 7. But now I am much more outgoing and I have made many friends.
No matter when I had trouble, my teachers and parents were always patient with me. They not only encouraged me not to give up but also tried their best to help me solve the problems myself.
After I leave school, I’m going to be a volunteer. Because I want to spend my spare time helping more people. At the same time I look forward to knowing better about the society.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文为一篇演讲稿，写作时应承接文章开头，分三部分，第一段主要是自己的改变，第二段是老师和家长给与自己的帮助和建议，第三段是自己以后的规划，以及这样做的原因。
2.例文分析：例文采用了三段式，主要采用第一人称叙事。第一段描述变化，一般过去时和一般现在时进行对比。第二段，描述老师和家长给的帮助，主要采用一般过去时。第三段描述自己对未来的规划，主要采用了一般将来时。文章条理清晰，逻辑严密。
3.高分亮点：
短语：used to；be good at；too……to；be patient with；not only……but also；give up；try one’s best；spend time doing sth；look forward to doing。
句型：it is time for；no matter引导让步状语从句；because引导原因状语从句。
8．书面表达
毕业之际，学校要举办一场毕业生告别晚会。假如你是九年级一班的李明，将代表班级在会上发言。请结合内容提示写一篇80~100词的发言稿。
提示：1. How are you feeling while giving the speech？
2. Who do you want to say thanks to？
3. Why do you want to thank them？
4. Your wishes for the future.
要求：1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3.文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and classmates，
I'm Li Ming from Class 1，Grade 9.__________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That's all. Thank you.
【答案】Dear teachers and classmates，
I'm Li Ming from Class 1，Grade 9.I'm a bit nervous but very proud to speak at the school leavers' party.
First，I'd like to thank our teachers. We have learned a lot from you. You've developed our interests，skills and made us grow up happily. You'll always be our role models.
Next，I should thank my classmates. We've studied together，helped each other and had a lot of fun. Soon we will go to new schools and we may not see each other so often in the future. But I believe our friendship will last forever.
Wish you all success and good luck in the future.
That's all. Thank you.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇应用文，写一篇发言稿。通过审题了解写作的主要内容：假如你是九年级一班的李明，将代表班级在学校举办的毕业生告别晚会上发言，题目是“My speech at the school leavers’party”，根据提示可知本发言稿包括四个方面的内容，缺一不可，同时要注意发言稿的格式；文章侧重于老师等人对于学生现在造成的影响，要感谢他们，所以主要的时态应该用现在完成时，可以夹杂少量的其他时态如一般现在时，对于未来的愿望可以用一般将来时等；人称为第一人称。注意文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
2. 例文分析：例文采用四段式，第1段自我介绍，第2和3段表示感谢老师和同学，第4段表达祝愿。本文格式正确，时态使用准确，表达清楚连贯，特别使用了表达顺序的词（First，Next，）使文章具有条理性。
高分亮点：
本文使用的短语：learn a lot from/make sb. do sth. / grow up /help each other /have a lot of fun/ Wish sb. success and good luck/ in the future/would like等。
多种时态是正确使用：1.一般现在时，例如，I'm a bit nervous but very proud to speak at the school leavers' party.；2.现在完成时，例如，We have learned a lot from you.；3. 一般将来时，例如，You'll always be our role models.
表达建议和祝愿的句型：I should thank my classmates./ Wish you all success and good luck in the future.。
【分析】书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
9．临近毕业之际，学校要举办一场毕业生告别晚会。假如你是九年级一班的李明，将代表班级在会上发言，请结合内容提示，以“My speech at the school leavers' party”为题写一篇不少于80词的发言稿。
内容提示：1. How are you feeling while giving the speech？
2. Who do you want to say thanks to？
3. Why do you want to thank them？
4. Your wishes for the future.
要求：1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My speech at the school leavers party
Teachers and classmates，
I`m Li Ming from Class 1，Grade 9. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
That's all. Thank you.
【答案】例文
My speech at the school leavers party
Teachers and classmates,
I'm Li Ming from Class 1, Grade 9. I'm a bit nervous but very proud to speak at the school leavers' party.
First, I'd like to thank all our teachers. We have learned a lot from you. You showed us your kindness, your patience and rich knowledge. You've developed our interest, skills and made us grow up happily. You'll always be our role models.
Next, I should thank my classmates. We have become good friends. We've studied together, helped each other and had a lot of fun. Soon we will go to new schools and we may not see each other so often in the future. But I believe our friendship will last forever.
Wish you all success and good luck in the future.
That's all. Thank you.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是一篇演讲稿，演讲的主题是毕业告别，演讲内容围绕演讲的感受、想要感谢的人、感谢他们的原因和对未来的祝愿。
2.例文分析：例文包含题目要求的所有信息；人称为第一人称，时态以现在完成时为主，描述初中三年以来发生的事情；文中适当使用序数词、连词，使上下文联系紧密，条理清晰，语言流畅。
3.高分亮点：
高分短语：would like；earn…from；each other；have fun；in the future。
高分句型：
高分句型一：But I believe our friendship will last forever.
高分句型二：Wish you all success and good luck in the future.
10．书面表达。
三年忙碌而精彩的初中生活即将过去,回顾这三年的初中生活,你最大的进步是什么 哪些人做了什么事帮助你取得了这些进步 毕业前的这段时间你有什么打算或计划 内容包括:
1. 进步要涉及两个不同的方面;
2. 帮助你取得进步的人和事;
3. 能提高自己的计划和打算。
要求:
1. 必须包括以上所有内容,语句通顺,意思连贯，可适当发挥;
2. 不得出现真实的校名和姓名;
3. 100词左右（开头已给出,不计入总词数）。
How time files! My busy and wonderful junior high school days will ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How time flies! My busy and wonderful junior high school days will be over. I have made progress in my study and I have also changed a lot in my appearance. I used to fail the English tests. But now I can get good grades. Two years ago, I was quite heavy , but now I look thin and handsome.
Why can I get such progress I want to thank my teacher and my mother. My teacher was patient with me and she usually helped me with my English. My mother was busy and tired every day. But she still ran with me every evening to make me thinner and healthier.
Before I leave my school, I plan to study harder so that I can go to a better senior high school. And I'll stick to exercising to keep healthy.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。要求介绍自己的三年的初中生活。回顾这三年的初中生活，你最大的进步是什么？哪些人做了什么事帮助你取得了这些进步？毕业前的这段时间你有什么打算或计划？内容包括：1. 进步要涉及两个不同的方面：2. 帮助你取得进步的人和事：3. 能提高自己的计划和打算。
2.例文分析：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般过去时为主，用过去时来描述自己的变化。
3.高分亮点：
短语：made progress；changed a lot；used to do sth.；help sb. with sth.；depend on；come from。
句型：1. Before I leave my school, I plan to study harder so that I can go to a better senior high school. 在我离开学校之前，我打算更加努力学习，以便能上一所更好的高中。
so that引导的目的状语从句。
2. But she still ran with me every evening to make me thinner and healthier. 但她还是每天晚上和我一起跑步，让我更瘦更健康。
动词不定式to make me thinner and healthier做目的状语。
