2024年 牛津深圳版八年级下册
Unit 1 --- Unit 2 写作训练
Unit 1
在节假日期间，深圳市义工联积极组织志愿者开展了形式多样的志愿服务活动。假如你是一名志愿者，上周六你跟同学去孤儿院看望孤儿。请你根据以下提示，以“My Voluntary Work Experience”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍活动经过以及你的活动感受。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
1．出发前你们为孩子们购买了一些礼物。
2．到达孤儿院后，你们与孩子们聊天并教他们唱歌、跳舞。
3．同时也教孩子们阅读好书的方法。
4．谈谈你的感受。
My Voluntary Work Experience
Last Saturday, I went to the orphanage with my classmates to be a volunteer.
★【写作指导】
◆审题：
我们在确定写作中心后，就开始寻找写作素材。既可以从课本Unit 1中找出相关的内容，也可以结合生活实际，谈谈关于自己参加义工活动的内容和感受；然后再根据所给的提示(相当于提纲)，形成短文。
1．我们要写的是一篇记叙文，可以发挥想象。
2．我们要写的是上周的义工经历。因此，我们的写作必须围绕着话题，并主要用一般过去时进行写作。
★写作方法指导
一、写什么——细审题，列要点
1．参加义工活动的时间、地点；
2．参加义工活动的方式及主要内容；
3．我对义工活动的看法和感受。
★写作操练
二、怎么写——遣词句，重结构
第一点：参加义工活动的时间、地点
1．上个星期六，我和同学们去孤儿院做义工。
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2．出发前我们为孩子们购买了一些礼物。
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第二点：参加义工活动的方式及主要内容
3．到达孤儿院后，我们与孩子们聊天并教他们唱歌、跳舞。
_______________________________________________________________________________________4．同时也教孩子们阅读好书的方法。
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第三点：我对义工活动的看法和感受
5．从这次的义工活动中，我意识到孤儿们是多么可怜，他们需要关爱。
_______________________________________________________________________________________6．我同时也学会了如何照顾他人。
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7．此外，我在那里还交了许多新朋友，我希望你也能参加义工活动。
【组句成文】
◆联想：写作本篇作文可以参考下列词汇
词汇：the orphanage孤儿院；leave for 动身前往；have a talk with sb.与某人谈话；help sb.do sth.帮助某人做某事；take part in参加
★【完整作品】
My Voluntary Work Experience
Last Saturday, I went to the orphanage with my classmates to be a volunteer.
Unit 2
根据下面所提供的信息，写一封信。其中内容提示如下：
假定你是王海，写信给在武汉工作的父亲，告诉他你的近况。
1．首先告诉爸爸家里的情况。
2．然后告诉他你期中考试有些学科比较好， 但个别学科还有困难。
3．表示在老师和同学们的帮助下，你在短时间内可以赶上其他同学。
4．表达对父亲的思念和祝福。
写作要求：80词以上；条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；文中不能出现真实的校名与姓名。
Dear Dad，
Do write to me if you have time.
Yours，
Wang Hai
★【写作指导】
◆审题：
我们在确定写作中心后，就开始寻找写作素材。既可以从课本Unit 2中找出相关的内容，也可以结合生活实际，找出书信的格式和写关于自己近况的内容；然后再根据所给的英文提示(相当于提纲)，形成短文。
1．我们要写的是一篇书信的书面表达，可以发挥想象。
2．我们所要写的对象涉及自己和父亲，是第一人称和第二人称。因此，我们必须围绕着相关的信息进行写作。
3．题中已经给了写作内容的提示。
★写作方法指导
一、写什么——细审题，列要点
1.家里的情况；2.期中考试的情况；3.你的信心和期望；4.对父亲的思念和祝福。
★写作操练
二、怎么写——遣词句，重结构
第一点：家里的情况
1．家里一切安好。
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2．请父亲不用担心。
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第二点：期中考试的情况
3．期中考试有些学科比较好，例如数学和物理。
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但个别学科还有困难，尤其是语文和英语。
第三点：我的信心和期望
5．在老师和同学们的帮助下，在短时间内可以赶上其他同学。
_______________________________________________________________________________________第四点：对父亲的思念和祝福
6.我非常想念您，希望您一切安好。
【组句成文】
◆联想：写作本篇作文可以参考的单词、短语
单词：worry, exam, problem, subject, Maths, Physics
短语：go on well, be good at, with the help of, catch up with
★【完整作品】
Dear Dad，
Do write to me if you have time.
Yours，
Wang Hai
参考答案
Unit1
【写作操练】
1．Last Saturday, I went to the orphanage with my classmates to be a volunteer.
2．Before we left for the orphanage, we bought some gifts for the children.
3．After we got there, we had a talk with the children and taught them to sing and dance.
4．At the same time, we also taught the children the ways to read good books.
5．From this voluntary activity, I realize how poor the orphans are, and they all need love.
6．Meanwhile, I also learn how to take care of others.
7．Besides, I made many friends there. And I hope you can take part in the voluntary activities as well.
【完整作品】
My Voluntary Work Experience
Last Saturday, I went to the orphanage with my classmates to be a volunteer. Before we left for the orphanage, we bought some gifts for the children. After we got there, we had a talk with the children and taught them to sing and dance. At the same time, we also taught them the ways to read good books. From this voluntary activity, I realize how poor the orphans are, and they all need love. Meanwhile，I also learn how to take care of others. Besides, I made many friends there. And I hope you can take part in the voluntary activities as well.
Unit 2
【写作操练】
1．Everything is going on well in our family.
2．Please don’t worry, Father.
3．In the mid-term exam, I am good at some subjects, such as Maths and Physics.
4．But I also have some problems with certain subjects, especially Chinese and English.
5．With the help of my teachers and classmates, I am sure I can catch up with other classmates.
6．I miss you very much. I hope everything is going on well with you as well.
【完整作品】
Dear Dad,
How are you these days Everything is going on well in our family. Please don’t worry, Father. In the mid-term exam, I am good at some subjects, such as Maths and Physics. But I also have some problems with certain subjects, especially Chinese and English. With the help of my teachers and classmates, I am sure I can catch up with other classmates in a short time. I miss you very much. I hope everything is going on well with you as well.
Do write to me if you have time.
Yours,
Wang Hai
