Unit 4 Our World
单元话题满分范文
一、书面表达
1．假如你是Andy，你校Wildlife Protection Club正在招募新成员，请你根据提示，用英语写一封申请信。
1.八年级学生，乐于助人，喜爱冬季，可以堆雪人、打雪仗；
2.热爱大自然，想要更多地了解动物，保护它们；
3.人类砍伐森林导致自然灾害多发，动物处境危险，……
4.每周日下午可以参加活动，联系方式 0510—53574589 或者Andy@.
要求：
1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯，词数90词左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.必须包括所有要点，结构合理，字迹工整，并适当发挥；
3.不要出现学校和学生的真实姓名。
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join Wildlife Protection Club. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Andy
【答案】例文：
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join Wildlife Protection Club. My name is Andy. I’m an eighth grade student. I am ready to help others. I love winter because I can make snowmen and have snowball fights. I love nature. I want to know more about animals and protect them. Human deforestation leads to frequent natural disasters, and animals are in danger. So that their number is getting smaller and smaller. I can take part in activities every Sunday afternoon. My phone number is 0510—53574589 or my email address is Andy@.
Yours sincerely,
Andy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封申请信，为应用文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已经给出，需要细化，且可以适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达想要进入俱乐部的意愿；
第二步，介绍自己并说明想要加入俱乐部的原因；
第三步，留下自己的联系方式。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to...准备好做某事
②lead to导致
③take part in参加，加入
[高分句型]
①I love winter because I can make snowmen and have snowball fights. （原因状语从句）
②Human deforestation leads to frequent natural disasters, and animals are in danger. （并列句）
2．2021 年云南大象北迁事件引起了人们的广泛关注。大象无故迁徙，是人类破坏生态环境造成的后果。请你以李华的名义，根据提示用英语写一封80词左右的保护大象的倡议书。
提示：
1、大象是陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到80岁。
2、大象目前数量减少的原因。
3、应该如何保护它们？
参考词汇：哺乳动物 mammal，象牙 ivory
Dear schoolmates,
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【答案】例文：
Dear classmates,
Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.
As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.
I believe everyone’s contribution (贡献) can make a big difference.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇倡议书，属于书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍大象是陆地上最大的哺乳动物以及大象目前数量减少的原因；
第二步，给出保护大象的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①the number of……的数量
②because of因为
③as a result因此
④put up张贴
[高分句型]
①First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②I believe everyone’s contribution (贡献) can make a big difference.（believe后接省略引导词that的宾语从句）
3．动物是人类的朋友，我们应该善待动物。请根据下表中的提示“Let’s help animals”为题写一篇70词左右的英语短文，呼吁人们热爱动物，保护动物。开头已给出，但不计入字数。
动物数量减 少的原因 1. 人们捕杀（kill）动物，为了得到它们的肉或皮毛（fur）； 2. 人们乱砍滥伐（cut down）树木，夺走（take away）了它们赖以生存的家园。
保护动物的 措施和建议 1. 禁止捕杀动物； 2. 禁止乱砍滥伐树木： 3. ……
Let’s help animalsAnimals are our friends. We should be kind to them.
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【答案】写作范文：
Animals are our friends. We should be kind to them. But now people kill many of them for their meat or fur. People also cut down many trees and take away their homes. Many animals have no place to live in, so they are becoming fewer and fewer.
It is not right to kill animals. People should stop killing animals and cutting down trees. Our government should plant more and more trees. We also need to work hard to set up the nature park.
In a word, let’s find out what else we can do to save as many animals as possible.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍动物数量减少的原因
第二步，提出保护动物的建议；
第三步，呼吁大家行动起来保护动物。
[亮点词汇]
①cut down 砍倒
②take away 带走
③set up 建立
[高分句型]
①Many animals have no place to live in, so they are becoming fewer and fewer.（比较级+and+比较级）
②In a word, let’s find out what else we can do to save as many animals as possible.（宾语从句）
4．请以“Let’s Help Animals”为题写一篇70词左右的英语短文，呼吁人们保护动物。
要求提示：
（1）动物是人类的朋友，人们应该保护动物；
（2）分析某些动物灭绝的原因；
（3）提出保护动物的方法。
参考词汇：kill 杀死；cut down 砍伐
Let’s Help Animals
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【答案】例文：
Let’s Help Animals
Animals are our good friends. We should be friendly to them and protect them.
But now people kill too many of them for their meat or fur. People also cut down many trees and take away their homes. Animals have no place to live. So they are becoming fewer and fewer. It is not right to kill animals. People should stop killing animals and cutting down trees. In order to protect animals, more trees should be planted and some animals can be put in the zoo.
I hope everyone can try his or her best to protect animals.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料提示内容不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题：我们要保护动物；
第二步，讲述动物灭绝的原因；
第三步，提出自己的看法并呼吁大家一起保护动物。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to sb.对某人友好
②fewer and fewer越来越少
③cut down砍伐；削减
[高分句型]
①Animals have no place to live.（不定式作后置定语）
②In order to protect animals, more trees should be planted and some animals can be put in the zoo.（并列复合句；被动语态）
③I hope everyone can try his or her best to protect animals.（宾语从句）
5．大熊猫丫丫的“回家之旅”屡上热搜，又一次提高了人们对大熊猫保护工作的关注。假如你和你的同桌正在参加学校举办的以Giving pandas a good life为主题的英文手抄报评选。你的同桌负责手抄报的绘制，而你负责文本的撰写。请根据如下提示，完成一篇英语短文。
注意：
（1）短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数 80—100；标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Giving pandas a good life
What animal has 6 fingers and wears a black and white coat Yes, it’s the panda!
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【答案】例文
Giving pandas a good life
What animal has 6 fingers and wears a black and white coat Yes, it’s the panda! Pandas are so popular because they are cute and shy. They are also friendly to people. They like eating bamboo. It seems that they like sleeping all day if possible.
It is known that pandas are endangered. For one thing, many people cut down lots of trees so they may have terrible living conditions. For another, they may die of illnesses easily because many of them are out of protection.
I hope the government can build more natural panda homes. Also, it is necessary that everyone should treat them as our friends and protect their homes.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。以猜谜语的形式开头介绍熊猫；
第二步，从熊猫的个性、生活习惯、危险及措施等方面具体介绍；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受，提出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to对……友好
②It seems that似乎
③cut down砍伐，减少
④die of死于
[高分句型]
①Pandas are so popular because they are cute and shy.(because引导原因状语从句)
②I hope the government can build more natural panda homes.(宾语从句)
6．近几年来，校园安全事故时有发生。因此，我们中学生必须具备自我保护的意识和能力。假如你是李华，你的学校将以“How to protect ourselves”为主题的小视频录制比赛，请你写一篇英语演说稿。内容包括：
（1）谈谈同学们在生活中遇到的问题
（2）对如何保护自身安全提出三点建议
要求：字数80字左右，开头已给出。
These years, the safety of students is becoming a serious problem.
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【答案】
How to protect ourselves
These years, the safety of students is becoming a serious problem. I think it’s necessary for us to know how to protect ourselves from danger.
When the earthquake happens, we should hide under a strong desk or a table. Don’t stand near the window which may hurt you. Stay away from traffic accidents. We should follow traffic rules. Be careful while crossing the road. It’s also dangerous to play in the street. If you find house on fire, don’t be nervous. Just call 119 for help and try to get out of the burning house as quickly as possible.
All in all, we need to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍演说稿的目的；
第二步，介绍生活中常见的问题以及针对该问题提出一些建议；
第三步，总结全文 。
[亮点词汇]
①follow traffic rules遵守交通规则
②stay away from远离
③all in all总而言之
[高分句型]
①If you find house on fire, don’t be nervous.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②All in all, we need to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.（疑问词+不定式）
7．请根据下面表格中的信息，结合所学的相关内容，谈谈如何在地震中进行自我保护。短文包括表格内所有提示内容，可适当发挥。词数100左右。
How to protect ourselves in an earthquake
Indoors should stay under strong furniture; stay away …
shouldn’t run out of the room …
Outdoors should move to clear areas; get away from tall buildings…
shouldn’t stand under a tree...
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【答案】例文
Earthquakes are very terrible. It is very important for us to know some ways to protect ourselves from earthquakes.
If you are indoors, you should stay under strong furniture, such as a table. Stay away from windows or anything that may fall on you. You shouldn’t try to run out of the room or take a lift downstairs.
If you are outdoors, you should move to clear areas quickly. Get away from tall buildings. They may hurt you if they fall. You shouldn’t stand under a tree.
Don’t be afraid when an earthquake comes. Remember, the most important thing is to stay calm.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“How to protect ourselves in an earthquake ”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出对主题的介绍；
第二步，具体给出在地震中自我保护的建议；
第三步，建议不要害怕，保持冷静。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②stay away from远离
③take a lift搭电梯
④stay calm保持冷静
[高分句型]
①If you are indoors, you should stay under strong furniture, such as a table.（条件状语从句）
②Stay away from windows or anything that may fall on you.（定语从句）
8．自我保护既是一种意识，也是一种能力。为进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护的能力，学校将举行以安全为主题的征文活动。请你根据下列思维导图提示，以“How can we make ourselves safe ”为题，写一篇短文，谈谈中学生应该怎样注意自身安全。
写作要求：1. 要点齐全，语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范。
2. 短文不少于80词。开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。
How can we make ourselves safe
As middle school students, to learn how to make ourselves safe is very important. Here are some of my suggestions. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How can we make ourselves safe
As middle school students, to learn how to make ourselves safe is very important. Here are some of my suggestions.
First, when we cross the road, we should look left and right. Second, we are supposed to eat healthily and safely. Third, when we travel abroad, we should take care of our things and know the route well. Fourth, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Besides, if we are in danger, we must call 110 for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.
In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“How can we make ourselves safe ”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出自我保护的方法；
第二步，具体从交通、饮食、旅行、网上交友等方面给出建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①cross the road过马路
②be supposed to应该
③take care of照顾
④be in danger处于危险中
[高分句型]
①Third, when we travel abroad, we should take care of our things and know the route well.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Besides, if we are in danger, we must call 110 for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.（if引导的条件状语从句和so that引导的目的状语从句）
9．请以” Internet” 为题, 用英语写一篇短文, 谈谈你对互联网的看法。
参考词汇: more and more, fast and convenient, information, talk to different people, in trouble, use it correctly
要求:
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数80左右。
Internet
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【答案】例文
Internet
The Internet has become more and more important in our daily life. Through the Internet, I can learn news both at home and abroad and all kinds of other information as well. I can also send messages by email, make video calls, attend online courses, read different kinds of books and even learn foreign languages on my own. Besides, I can enjoy music, watch sports matches and play chess or other games. I can do some shopping online, too.What’s more, I can make more friends and discuss some questions with them. If I want to go on a trip, I will find a lot of useful information of the place with the help of Internet. My father works on the Internet. My mother uses the Internet to shop.
In a word, the Internet has made my life more colorful and convenient. But I should not spend too much time on it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章虽然没有给太多要点提示，但是给了参考词汇，注意使用另外需注意行文连贯，无语法和标点错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍网络在日常生活中的重要性；
第二步，介绍网络给我及身边的家人带来了哪些便利；
第三步，劝告大家网络虽然很方便，但也要注意适度使用。
[亮点词汇]
①at home and abroad国内外
②in a word简而言之
③all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①If I want to go on a trip, I will find a lot of useful information of the place with the help of Internet.（条件状语从句）
②But I should not spend too much time on it.（but表转折）
10．网络让人们的生活更精彩，交流越来越便捷。然而，网络的危害也显而易见，特别是手机、互联网让低头族越来越多。青少年沉迷网络游戏的情况也越来越严重。请结合自己的日常生活体验，谈谈你对网络的看法。 请以“The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet”为题，简要说明网络的优缺点。80个词左右。
The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet
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【答案】例文
The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet
Nowadays the Internet plays an important role in our life. Today I want to talk about whether the Internet is good or not.
For one thing, the Internet has a lot of advantages. With the help of Inernet, we can make friends with people from all over the world. We can learn about our favorite stars and listen to their songs on the Inernet. It’s wonderful. We can also shop online. It’s very easy and convenient. On the other hand, there are disadvantages. If we lose ourselves in the Internet, we will fail the exam. Besides, playing computer games on the Internet is bad for our health.
In my opinion, we should make good use of the Internet so that it can help us a lot.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述要点内容。重点写网络的优缺点；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己对网络的看法和期望。
[亮点词汇]
① plays an important role in在……中 扮演着重要角色
②want to do sth想要做某事
③talk about 讨论
④whether… or not是否
⑤For one thing一方面
⑥all over the world全世界
⑦On the other hand另一方面
⑧be bad for…对……有害
⑨In my opinion就我个人而言
⑩make good use of利用好
[高分句型]
①If we lose ourselves in the Internet, we will fail the exam. Besides, playing computer games on the Internet is bad for our health.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②In my opinion, we should make good use of the Internet so that it can help us a lot. （so that引导的目的状语从句）
11．如今，电脑被广泛使用。而中学生沉迷网络游戏的问题也越来越严重，这影响了学生的身心健康。请你写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 电脑带来的好处：查找信息、帮助学习、在网上看电影等；
2. 过度使用电脑的弊端：花太多时间上网玩游戏或聊天，影响健康与学习；
3. 你的看法。
注意：
1. 词数：80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含上面所提供的所有信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
4. 请在答卷规定范围内写作，超出范围的内容无效。
Computers are more and more useful in our lives.
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【答案】例文
Computers are more and more useful in our lives. We can see the movies, listen to music and chat with friends through computers. We can use the computer to learn, find useful information and broaden our horizons. So I think playing games properly can relax the mood.
Of course, there are also some shortcomings. Some students spend too much time playing computer games and have no time to do homework, which affects their study. It’s bad for your health, especially your eyes.
In my opinion, we should use the Internet in a correct way so that it can help us a lot. Everyone should be careful and use the computer safely. It is only used for learning or looking for useful information.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍电脑带来的好处；
第二步，介绍过度使用电脑的弊端；
第三步，表明自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①chat with与某人聊天
②too much太多
③be bad for对……有害
④In my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①Some students spend too much time playing computer games and have no time to do homework, which affects their study.（which引导的定语从句）
②In my opinion, we should use the Internet in a correct way so that it can help us a lot.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
