牛津上海版七年级上学期期末复习 (名校期末真题)
期末必考单元话题满分范文20篇
一、话题作文
1．（2023上·上海宝山·七年级校考期末）Write at least 50 words on the topic “An unforgettable birthday”（以“一个难忘的生日”为题，写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
Birthdays in Life
In next month’s Champion Special, Lynn Zhou wants to invite students to write about an unforgettable birthday in their lives.
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【答案】例文
An unforgettable birthday
An unforgettable birthday in my life is my birthday party. On that day, I had a big birthday party with my friends. My parents cooked lots of delicious food and bought a big cake for us. My friends gave me many presents. We ate the food, sang some songs, danced and talked together. We also played a lot of games. We also went to the park together in the afternoon. We flew kites there, took pictures and so on. We had a good time that day.
I knew that my family and friends always brought happiness to me. I’ll never forget that day. I also want to thank my family and my friends for their dedication to me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：要求以“一个难忘的生日”为题进行写作，可适当发挥，注意语句连贯，表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表达难忘的生日是哪一次；
第二步，介绍在生日那天是如何度过的；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①fly kites放风筝
②take pictures拍照
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
I knew that my family and friends always brought happiness to me. (that引导的宾语从句)
2．（2022上·上海·七年级上海市西延安中学校考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “How to develop good habits “. （以 “如何养成好习惯” 为题写话, 词数不少于 60 个, 标点符号不占格。）
Questions for reference：
（1）What are your good habits
（2）How do you develop your good habits
（3）What do your good habits bring you
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【答案】例文
How to develop good habits
It’s very important for us to have good habits. Good habits lead to a better future. As teenagers, what should we do We should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary. It is a good habit to finish the schoolwork on time every day. We had better read some books to get more knowledge when we are free. Also, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food. It’s good for us to take exercise for three or four times a week. What’s more, we should get enough sleep, we should go to bed early and don’t stay up late. We should remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean. Exercise is fun and relaxing. It’s healthy for the mind and body. Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明写作意图，直接引出“好习惯的重要性”以及“养成好习惯的建议”；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，分点描述如何养成好习惯；
第三步，书写书面结语，表明好的习惯会带来什么。
[亮点词汇]
①lead to 导致；
②take notes 做笔记；
③stay up late熬夜
[高分句型]
①It is a good habit to finish the schoolwork on time every day.（It is +n. to do sth.句型的使用）；
②We had better read some books to get more knowledge when we are free.（had better do sth.建议句型的应用）
3．（2023上·上海宝山·七年级校考期末）《冠军月刊》下期话题：我的生日。请记录一个难忘的生日，投稿至编辑部。文章开头仅供参考。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文
My birthday is on August 11. We have a good birthday party. My mother makes a birthday cake for me. It’s big and tasty. My father gives me a football because I like playing football. Many friends come to my home. We are very happy. They give me a lot of presents and some birthday cards. We sing and dance. We eat food and fruit. We play games together. We have a good time.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：记录一个难忘的生日，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己生日的日期；
第二步，介绍生日这天是如何度过的；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
have a good time玩得愉快
[高分句型]
My father gives me a football because I like playing football.（because引导的原因状语从句）
4．（2022上·上海金山·七年级校联考期末）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “How to keep healthy” （根据所给的题目：“怎样保持健康”写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占词数。）（共6分）
Suggest questions:
Is health important
What should/shouldn’t we do if we want to stay healthy
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【答案】例文：
How to keep healthy
Health is important to us all. How to keep healthy Here are some ways to keep healthy.
First, we should have a healthy eating habit. Eat more fruit and vegetables, eat less meat. Don’t eat junk food. Drink more water every day. Second, we should do lots of exercise. Walking is good for us. Running also keeps us strong and helps us have a good memory. Doing sports an hour a day is good for us. Third, we should have enough sleep, at least 8 hours’ sleep at night. Remember not to drink coffee or tea before you go to bed. Don’t eat too much sugar or work too late, it will make you too tired.
In a word, we should have a healthy lifestyle.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“Suggest questions:”中关于“Is health important ”要点介绍，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山，直接点题。以“Health is important to us all.”来引出主题内容“Here are some ways to keep healthy.”，引起下文；
第二步，具体描述写作内容。从“好的饮食习惯、锻炼、足够睡眠等”几个方面重点介绍如何保持健康；
第三步，书写结语。总结全文，表达“我们应该有一个健康的生活习惯”。
[亮点词汇]
① keep healthy 保持健康
② do exercise 锻炼
③ be good for ... 对……有好处
④ at least 至少
⑤ in a word 总之
[高分句型]
①How to keep healthy （疑问词 + 不定式句型）
②Eat more fruit and vegetables, eat less meat.（祈使句）
③Walking is good for us. （动名词作主语）
④Remember not to drink coffee or tea before you go to bed.（before引导时间状语从句）
5．（2022上·上海嘉定·七年级统考期末）Write at least 50 words on the topic “A Small Change I made”
在你的生活中，你有做出过什么样的小改变吗？是什么原因促使你做出了这样的改变？这个小改变又给你带来了怎样的影响呢？请以“我做出的一个小改变”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短语，标点符号不占格。（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following sentence patterns are for reference only （以下句型仅供参考）：
It is/was … for me…
It/Doing sth. makes my life…
I decided to…
【答案】例文：
A Small Change I made
I didn’t like sports, so running was very difficult for me. I decided to change this bad habit. I start running every morning. Slowly, I’m very good at running. Now I like playing basketball very much. If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. Doing sports makes us very healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示以“A Small Change I made”为题，写一篇作文介绍你的小改变。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的小改变；
第二步，具体阐述是什么原因促使你做出了这样的改变；
第三步，介绍这个小改变给你带来了怎样的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth决定做某事
②be good at擅长
③like doing sth喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. （if引导的条件状语从句）
②Doing sports makes us very healthy.（动名词作主语）
6．（2022上·上海浦东新·七年级统考期末）Write a composition with at least50 words about the topic “My school life”（以“我的学校生活”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短文，要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格。）
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following questions are for reference（以下问题仅供参考）
1. Is your school life enjoyable
2. What changes would you like to see in your school
3. What do you think of these changes
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【答案】例文：
My school life
My school life is enjoyable,I like it very much.Although I must do much homework every day,I am happy.I want to see some changes in my school,such as having more P.E. lessons a week and having more activities.These changes can make our school life more colorful.
【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求以“My school life”为题，写一篇短文，可以根据所给问题的提示书写。
2、例文分析：例文采用一段式；时态主要以一般现在时为主；例文写出了想要看到学校的改变以及认为这些改变怎么样；结构清晰；逻辑性强。
3、高分亮点：
短语：do much homework；want to do sth；such as；make our school life more colorful。
句型：Although I must do much homework every day,I am happy；These changes can make our school life more colorful。
【分析】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如do much homework；want to do sth；such as；make our school life more colorful等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
7．（2020上·上海浦东新·七年级校考期末）Writing
Write at least60 words about“ How to stay healthy”.(以“怎样保持健康”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
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【答案】How to stay healthy
It's important to stay healthy because without good health, people nearly can do nothing. I think there are several ways to stay healthy. First, good healthy eating habit is very important. we should eat three healthy meals every day instead of junk food. We'd better eat slowly. Second, we should have good habits, such as, having enough sleep so don't stay up too late, wash our hands in time, brush our teeth at least twice every day, drink enough water, don't smoke and so on. Last but not least, it's very important to laugh every day.
【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求我们以How to stay healthy为题，介绍生活中如何保持健康。“健康”这一话题非常贴近学生们的日常生活，教材中接触过的与此有关的词汇、短语和句型也比较多，学生们对此比较熟悉，因此写起来非常得心应手。审题可知，短文应分为两部分：首先引导健康话题，点明健康的重要性；接下来具体介绍生活中应如果保持健康，这是文章的主体部分。短文应用一般现在时态、第一人称来叙述。
2. 例文分析：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整、充实，叙述清晰、条理。短文开门见山，先点明了健康的重要性，然后引入主题“如何保持健康”；接下来进行了具体的介绍，用First, Second, Last but not least分成了三个部分，使表达很有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。以简单句结构为主，穿插了并列句、宾语从句和复合句，还使用了非谓语动词。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：stay healthy；eating habit；instead of；such as；stay up；in time；at least；and so on；Last but not least。
句型：It's important to stay healthy because without good health, people nearly can do nothing.；I think there are several ways to stay healthy.；Second, we should have good habits, such as, having enough sleep so don't stay up too late, wash our hands in time, brush our teeth at least twice every day, drink enough water, don't smoke and so on.。
8．（2019·上海·七年级校考期末）Writing (作文) ：
以“My Favourite Food (我最喜爱的食物)”为题写一篇短文。
要求：意思明确，内容连贯，不少于60词，标点符号不计入总词数。
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【答案】例文
My Favourite Food
They are many kinds of food in our country. For me, my favourite food is noodles. Because I think they are very delicious. And I can add some vegetables in it. I can make them have different tastes. For example, I like egg and tomato noodles. I often add eggs and tomatoes in it. What’s more, they are easy to make. Noodles are healthy food. They are good for my health. I think we should eat something healthy.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于记叙文，也是话题作文，话题是“My Favourite Food”。本文时态主要是一般现在时。本文首先介绍喜欢吃什么食物，然后说明喜欢吃这种食物的原因。要认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，根据主题列出提纲要点。
2. 例文分析：例文作者首先介绍了喜欢吃的食物，然后说明喜欢吃这种食物的原因。最后做一总结。本文文体，时态，人称，使用正确，表达条理清楚连贯，书写规范，没有单词拼写、语法等错误，是一篇较好的例文。
3. 高分亮点：
短语和连词的使用：many kinds of，What’s more，for example ，be good for等。
原因状语从句：For me, my favourite food is noodles. Because I think they are very delicious.
宾语从句：I think we should eat something healthy.
【分析】书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
9．（2020上·上海浦东新·七年级统考期末）Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic habits “My habits”. (请以“我的习惯”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 10%
Use the following suggestions: (使用以下提供的建议：)
a. Do you have good habits or bad habits List three examples.
b. What do these habits bring you
c. Do you want to change these or improve (提升) these How
【答案】My habits
I have a lot of good habits.For example,I usually get up early and do morning exercises.I hardly ever eat junk food.I eat a lot of vegetables every day.I also like eating fruit.After school I often play basketball.I’m very healthy because these good habits.But I sometimes stay up late for games.I feel sleepy the next day.I’ll go to bed before 10:00 every night.My healthy lifestyle helps me study better.
【详解】题干解读：文章主要介绍自己的一些习惯。
例文分析：文章主要用第一人称，用一般现在时态，注意了非谓语动词的正确使用，介绍了自己的好习惯和坏习惯。
高分亮点：
短语：do morning exercises做早操，like doing喜欢做某事，stay up late熬夜
二、材料作文
10．（2022上·上海徐汇·七年级上海市徐汇中学校联考期末）Write a short passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A New Year Party”.（以《一场新年派对》为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）新年马上就要来临了，你和你的同学们正在策划一场新年派对。你们准备在派对上吃些什么呢？又准备做些什么活动呢？并谈谈你对这场派对有怎样的期待。
注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文：
A New Year Party
Chinese New Year is coming soon. My classmates and I are making a plan for the New Year party. In the afternoon, we will order some pizza, fried chicken, hamburgers and drinks from fast food restaurants. After eating, we will enjoy the talent show. Students and teachers from all grades have to give performances, like singing, dancing or stand-up comedy. We will also play games, and the winners can get some prizes. I think the New Year party will be successful and we will have a good time on that day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：题干所给提示内容不得遗漏，可适当发挥，注意无单词拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己正在和同学准备新年派对；
第二步，介绍派对的食物以及活动内容；
第三步，总结表达自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①order 订购
②give performances 演出
[高分句型]
I think the New Year party will be successful and we will have a good time on that day.（宾语从句）
11．（2023上·上海浦东新·七年级校考期末）Write a passage in at least 50 words on the topic “Signs around us”. (根据题目“我们身边的标志”写一篇不少于50词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
Suggested questions：
1. Where can you find signs
2. What do different signs tell us
3. What do you think of signs
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【答案】例文：
Signs around us
Signs are everywhere around. We can find them in a park, in the countryside, on a road and at school. There are many different kinds of signs. For example, warning signs tell us things we must not do. All these signs are important to us. When we are in the streets, we can see a lot of public signs. They have different meanings and different colors. It’s very important to know their meanings because they tell us what to do and what not to do.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在哪里能看到标志以及这些标志告诉我们什么。
第二步，表达自己对这些标志的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①many different kinds of 许多不同种类
②be important to对……重要
③different meanings不同的意思
[高分句型]
①For example, warning signs tell us things we must not do. (省略that或which的定语从句)
②It’s very important to know their meanings because they tell us what to do and what not to do. (because引导的原因状语从句)
12．（2022上·上海宝山·七年级校联考期末）Write at least 50 words on the topic “My Birthday Party”. (以“我的生日聚会”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文，注意：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use the following points as a reference. ( 以下内容仅供参考)
1. When did you have your birthday party？
2. Who did you invite
3. What did you do at your birthday party
4. How did you feel on that day
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【答案】例文：
My Birthday Party
Last Sunday was my 13th birthday. I invited a lot of my friends to my birthday party. They bought a very big cake for me. I made a wish and blew the candles. We sang “Happy Birthday” song together and shared the cake. After that, some of us danced happily, some of us played interesting games. We all enjoyed ourselves.
What a nice birthday party!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，是一篇记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括生日派对的具体时间以及举行的一些活动等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍生日派对举行的具体时间以及多少岁生日；
第二步，具体介绍在生日派对上都做什么了；
第三步，最后总结生日派对很好。
[亮点词汇]
① a lot of很多
② buy sth for sb为某人买某物
③ make a wish许愿
[高分句型]
① We sang “Happy Birthday” song together and shared the cake.（and连接的并列句）
13．（2022上·上海杨浦·七年级统考期末）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A/An ________ trip”（写一篇名为“一次……的旅行” 的短文，字数不少于 60 字，标点符号不占空格。）
The following questions are for reference: When and where did you go on a trip What did you do there
What did you think of the trip
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【答案】例文
An interesting trip
Last month, I went to Xi’an with my classmates.
On the first day, we visited some museums and we saw a lot of Chinese traditional paintings. They were wonderful. In the evening we had some special food. It was delicious. The next day, we went to some famous places in Xi’an, such as the bell tower and the drum tower. Of course, we took a lot of photos.
I think it was an interesting trip because I learned a lot about Chinese history.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：首先把题目补充完整，讲述自己这次旅行的经历。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己去旅行的时间地点；
第二步，具体讲述旅行中的所见所闻等；
第三步，收尾，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②Chinese traditional paintings中国传统绘画
[高分句型]
①On the first day, we visited some museums and we saw a lot of Chinese traditional paintings.（and连接并列句）
②I think it was an interesting trip because I learned a lot about Chinese history.（because引导原因状语从句）
14．（2022上·上海闵行·七年级统考期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic“How to help homeless animals”（请以“怎么帮助无家可归的动物”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as reference(以下问题提供参考)
1.Why are animals homeless
2.What do you think of homeless animals
3.What can you do to help them (give at least two examples)
How to help homeless animals
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【答案】例文
How to help homeless animals
Nowadays more and more animals are losing their home. Why are animals homeless Because people cut down trees so that animals have no places to live. Another reason is the pollution. The pollution of the environment makes it impossible for animals to live normally.
I think these homeless animals are very poor. Animals and people are friends. So we should do something to protect them. First, we can set up some organizations to adopt homeless animals. Second, we should call on people to stop cutting down trees. Last but not least, we should stop polluting.
Let’s take action now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍动物无家可归的原因；
第二步，介绍自己的看法以及如何帮助无家可归的动物的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①cut down 砍倒
②set up 设立
③call on 呼吁
④take action 采取行动
[高分句型]
①Because people cut down trees so that animals have no places to live（so that引导目的状语从句）
②The pollution of the environment makes it impossible for animals to live normally.（动词不定式作宾语）
15．（2020上·上海虹口·七年级校考期末）Write at least 50 words on the topic ‘A change to my bad habit '.（请以《我的坏习惯的改变》”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文，要求意思明确、内容连贯，标点符号不计字数）
（注意：作文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following questions are provided as a reference（以下问题可供参考）
1. What bad habit did you have in the past
2. How did you change your bad habit (List at least two ways)
A change to my bad habit
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【答案】例文
A change to my bad habit
I used to have a bad habit. I often play computer games, so I got a bad grade.
Later, my mother told me that if I could pass the final exam, she would take me to the Great Wall. From then on, I knew I had to change my bad habits. When I wanted to play games, I took out a book and read.
Now I don't play computer games any more. I study much harder. I believe I can get a better grade.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求介绍自己的坏习惯的改变，属于记叙文写作。作者首先明确自己的坏习惯I often play computer games，然后介绍坏习惯在妈妈和自己的努力下改变了，最后表达希望I believe I can get a better grade。
2.例文分析：本文是“总分总”结构，用第一人称展开讲述了，时态以一般过去时为主；内容充实，描述细致，表达流畅，结构完整，是一篇优秀的习作。
3.高分亮点：
高分短语：used to do, play computer games, the Great Wall, from then on, have to, take out, want to do.
高分句型：
1). I often play computer games, so I got a bad grade.（原因状语从句）
2). Later, my mother told me that if I could pass the final exam, she would take me to the Great Wall.（复杂宾语从句结构）
3). When I wanted to play games, I took out a book and read.（时间状语从句）
【分析】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。例文最后连用两个比较级句子I study much harder. I believe I can get a better grade.写出了变化和希望。
16．（2020上·上海浦东新·七年级统考期末）Writing.
Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic“How to be a healthy kid”.（以“怎样成为身体健康的孩子”为题写一篇不少于50字的短文，标点符号不占格）：
（注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息,，否则不予评分。）
Use the following points as a reference. （以下提示仅供参考）
* Is it important to be healthy Why
* What exercise do you do to keep yourself healthy
* What do you eat to keep yourself healthy
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【答案】例文
How to be a healthy kid
Health is very important to us. Everyone wants to keep healthy.We should have good eating habits to keep healthy. A saying goes that an apple a day makes a doctor away. Eating more fruit is good for us.
Of course, exercise is also important in our life. I often take a walk after dinner. What’s more, to keep fit, I eat more vegetables, less fat and sugar. Besides, drinking more water is very good for us.
All in all, having a healthy diet is really important for us.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以“How to be a healthy kid”为题，根据提示内容写一篇短文。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.例文分析：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语： be good for，take a walk ，what’s more，all in all。
句型：We shoud have good eating habits to keep healthy.为了保持健康，们应该有良好的饮食习惯。情态动词should后接动词原形， eating habits “饮食习惯”，to keep healthy，表目的。
A saying goes that an apple a day makes a doctor away.谚语说“一天一苹果，医生远离我。”宾语从句含有谚语。
17．（2022上·上海浦东新·七年级校考期末）Writing.（作文）
Please write at least 60 words on the topic “A wonderful New Year’s Day”.我们迎来了新的一年2023年。你和你的同学们或者你的家人有没有一起庆祝新年的到来？在元旦那天你们组织了哪些有趣的活动？你们品尝了哪些美味的食物？你们过得开心吗？请以“精彩的元旦”为主题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文，要求内容连贯，语句通顺，标点符号不占格。
Phrases for reference (以下短语仅供参考):
play games watch cartoons take photos
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【答案】A wonderful New Year’s Day
January 1st is New Year’s Day. It is a great day for all the people. So my classmates and I celebrated the important day at my home. We sang some songs, danced and played games. My parents prepared all kinds of food for us, such as fried chicken, hamburgers, apples and so on .We watched cartoons and enjoyed the food. We took many photos. All my classmates had a good time.
【分析】本篇为材料作文，要求按照提示完成一篇你如何和同学或家人庆祝元旦的短文，讲述那天你们组织什么活动、品尝了哪些美味的食物、你们过得开心吗。要求短文要包含所有提示信息，适当发挥，语言连贯，逻辑清晰。
【详解】1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要用第一人称的方式讲述如何与同学庆祝元旦，讲述过去的事情，用一般过去时；书写时要注意用全所给材料，文句通顺，内容完整。
2.例文分析：本例文结构严谨，层次分明。开篇紧扣主题，介绍在元旦日和同学的聚会以庆祝这个重要的日子，接下来介绍聚会的活动，品尝的食物，最后以“同学都过得很开心”总结全文。文章布局合理，内容完整连贯。
3.高分亮点：本篇例文短语丰富，文句简短。用短语sing some songs, dance and play games；watch cartoons and enjoy the food.；take many photos等描述聚会的活动；用have a good time总结全文，行文通畅，内容完整。
【分析】本篇材料作文书写前要认真审题，确定用第一人称、一般过去时；书写时要紧扣题干提示的问题“组织什么活动、品尝了哪些美味的食物、你们过得开心吗”展开。
18．（2020上·上海·七年级校考期末）Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic "The neighbourhood we live in"（以“我们居住的小区”为题写一篇短文，词数不少于50个）:
Suggested questions:
1. Where is the neighbourhood you live in？
2. What's in your neighbourhood？
3. What do people usually do in the neighbourhood？
4. What do you think of your neighbourhood
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【答案】The neighbourhood we live in
Our neighbourhood is in the southwest of Shanghai. It's not only big but also beautiful. There are ten blocks in it. There are many trees and flowers in it, too. People in our neighbourhood are all very kind and friendly. They often take a walk in the neighbourhood. Children like playing games in it. There is a supermarket near our neighborhood, so it's very convenient to go shopping. Everybody in our neighbourhood likes it very much.
【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求我们以The neighbourhood we live in为题，介绍自己生活的小区。题目中给出了四个问题，这四个问题也是引导学生写作的一个提纲。审题可知，短文应包括以下内容：首先介绍自己居住的小区在哪里；接下来描述一下自己的小区；然后介绍小区里的人；最后是自己对这个小区的评价。短文应使用一般现在时态，人称是第一、三人称。
2. 例文分析：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了自己生活的小区。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整、充实，叙述清晰、明了。作者从题目中给出的四个问题出发，以问题为指导，组织语言，串联成文。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，单词形式准确，语法规范。语言得体，句式结构以简单句为主，穿插使用了一些较好的句型，如there be句型、并列句结构、非谓语动词等。整篇文章叙述流畅，文意连贯。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：in the southwest of；not only…but also；take a walk；play games；go shopping。
句型：It's not only big but also beautiful.； There are ten blocks in it. There are many trees and flowers in it, too.；There is a supermarket near our neighbourhood, so it's very convenient to go shopping。
19．（2019·上海浦东新·七年级校考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic ‘A/An ______ birthday party' （以"A/An______birthday party" ） 为题， 写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格．
【答案】例文
An unforgetful birthday party
Last Sunday was my 12th birthday． I asked my good friends to come to my house． （高分句型一）Everyone gave a present to me． There were books，pens， cards and two model planes in my living room． I was very happy to get them． My mother bought me a big birthday cake． I put it on the table． After singing the song "Happy birthday to you"， we ate the cake． （高分句型二）（生日宴会上的活动）
We had a good time! It was an unforgetful birthday party． （点题，感受）
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇需要补充题目的作文，写作时首先要注意什么样的聚会。文章需要用到一般过去时态来叙述这个聚会。。最后要写文章的结尾，表示自己的观点。
2.例文分析：这是一篇比较优秀的范文。文章的内容完整，结构清晰，表述准确，语言恰当。文中用到了第一人称和一般过去时态。
3.高分亮点：
短语：ask sb. to do sth.；gave a present to me；bought me a big birthday cake。
句型：Everyone gave a present to me; After singing the song "Happy birthday to you"， we ate the cake．
20．（2020上·上海·七年级校考期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic "To be a healthy child".（以“做一个健康的孩子”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格）
Suggested questions:
What did you use to do
What were unhealthy and healthy in your past life
What will you do for being a healthy child
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【答案】例文
To be a healthy child
It is important to keep healthy. If you want to be a healthy child, you should follow these rules: you should do enough exercise every day. You should drink at least 8 glasses of water everyday. You should eat plenty of vegetables and fruit because they are good to your health. You should have enough rest as well. Thus, you can be a healthy child.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇命题作文，以“做一个健康的孩子”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文,根据文中的提示：你过去什么样；在你过去生活中什么是健康不健康的；成为一个健康的孩子你讲怎么做？
2.例文分析：本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第二人称，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：keep healthy；want to be a healthy child,；follow these rules:；do enough exercise ；plenty of vegetables。
句型：文中多次用到should+动词原形，表示建议；It is important to do sth.；You should eat plenty of vegetables and fruit because they are good to your health. You should have enough rest as well. Thus, you can be a healthy child.
