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2023-2024学年高三上学期期末考试（一模）英语试题分类汇编
写作
2024届上海市虹口区高三上学期一模英语试卷
VI. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生赵磊，你们班最近与国际伙伴校的同学们共同开展了一个团
队项目， 但目前的合作效果并不理想。项目负责人 Mr. Johnson 请你负责在中方同学的范围内调查原因。你发 现有些同学对团队中的角色分配不满意，有些同学觉得团队沟通存在问题。请给 Mr. Johnson 写 一封邮件，内容必须包括：
1. 简述同学们的反馈；
2. 向 Mr. Johnson 提出改进建议并说明理由。
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2024届上海市崇明区高三上学期一模英语试卷
VI. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
76. 假设你是明启中学高三学生徐晶，学校最近就如何组织好每天上午30分钟的大课间活动征求全校学生的意见。你给负责的王老师写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
有关组织大课间活动的建议；
你的理由。
注意：不要在邮件中提及你的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。
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2024届上海市金山区高三上学期一模英语试题
VI. Guided Writing
76．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。学校将举办运动会，你班拟从以下三个方案中选其一参加开幕式的节目表演：中国传统乐器演奏（如古筝、二胡等等）；中国传统服饰秀（如汉服、旗袍等等）和中国传统才艺展示（如民族舞、武术等等）。现征求全班同学意见。给班主任写封邮件，内容须包括：
1. 你的选择；
2. 你的理由。
（文中不要出现真实姓名和学校名称）
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2024届上海市奉贤区高三上学期一模英语试题
VI. Guided Writing
Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学学生李华，你校正在举行青少年模拟政协(Model CPPCC) 提案征集活动，其中一项提案是将中国传统节日重阳节(The Double Ninth Festival) 设为国定假日请就该提案写一封信给模拟政协主席，内容需包含:
1.你是否支持此提案;
2.你支持或反对此提案的理由
2024届上海市黄埔区高三上学期一模英语试题
VI. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明。你校英语社团公众号正在举行主题为“我的2023”的征文活动，写一篇文章投稿。在文中，你必须：
1. 描述一件你今年亲身经历且让你有所成长的事情；
2. 说明这件事对你的意义。
答案：
2024届上海市虹口区高三上学期一模英语试卷
56．
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I have investigated the reasons behind the lack of effectiveness in our team project with our international partner school, as requested. Feedback from my Chinese classmates suggests two main issues.
Firstly, some students are dissatisfied with the role allocation within the team. They feel that roles were not assigned based on individual strengths and abilities, leading to reduced motivation and productivity.
Secondly, there are communication problems within the team. Language barriers and cultural differences make it challenging to express ideas and understand each other’s perspectives.
To improve the situation, I recommend two actions. Firstly, conduct a thorough evaluation to reallocate roles based on each student’s expertise and skills. This will ensure that everyone feels valued and can contribute effectively. Secondly, organize team-building activities and workshops on cross-cultural communication to enhance understanding among team members.
Implementing these suggestions should address the current challenges we face. Thank you for considering my recommendations. I look forward to your guidance on how to proceed.
Sincerely,
Zhao Lei
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你们班最近与国际伙伴校的同学们共同开展了一个团队项目，但目前的合作效果并不理想。项目负责人Mr. Johnson请你负责在中方同学的范围内调查原因，要求考生给Mr. Johnson写一封邮件汇报调查结果和提出改进建议。
【详解】1. 词汇激活
表明：suggest→show
首先：firstly→to begin with
改进：improve→promote
确保：ensure→make sure
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secondly, organize team-building activities and workshops on cross-cultural communication to enhance understanding among team members.
拓展句：Secondly, organize team-building activities and workshops on cross-cultural communication, which can enhance understanding among team members.
【点睛】[高分句型1]They feel that roles were not assigned based on individual strengths and abilities, leading to reduced motivation and productivity.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]This will ensure that everyone feels valued and can contribute effectively.(that引导的宾语从句)
2024届上海市崇明区高三上学期一模英语试卷
76．One possible version:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Xu Jing, a senior student. I am writing to share some suggestions regarding how to organize our daily 30-minute mid-morning break activities.
I suggest incorporating a variety of activities during the break time. This could include physical activities like sports, dance or yoga sessions, as well as creative activities such as art workshops or music clubs. Providing diverse options would cater to different interests and allow students to choose activities that they enjoy and find beneficial. In addition, it would be great to involve student clubs and organizations in organizing these activities. This not only offers opportunities for student leadership and teamwork, but it also ensures a wider range of options and promotes a sense of belonging among students.
I believe implementing these suggestions would make our mid-morning break more enjoyable and productive. Thank you for taking the time to consider my suggestions.
Sincerely,
Xu Jing
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给负责征求如何组织好每天上午30分钟大课间活动意见的王老师写一封电子邮件，需陈述个人对于组织大课间活动的建议，并提供相应的理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
关于：regarding→concerning/with regard to
各种各样的：a variety of→various/a wide range of
选择：choose→pick/select
确保：ensure→guarantee/secure
促进：promote→advance/facilitate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I suggest incorporating a variety of activities during the break time.
拓展句：It is suggested that a variety of activities during the break time should be incorporated.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Providing diverse options would cater to different interests and allow students to choose activities that they enjoy and find beneficial. (运用了动名词短语作主语、that引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I believe implementing these suggestions would make our mid-morning break more enjoyable and productive. (运用了that引导宾语从句并被省略、动名词短语作从句的主语)
2024届上海市金山区高三上学期一模英语试题
76．Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my opinion on the upcoming opening ceremony performance for our school's sports meet. I suggest that our class participate in the Chinese traditional instrument performance, such as playing guzheng or erhu.
Firstly, this choice will allow us to showcase our cultural heritage and appreciation for traditional Chinese music. Instruments like guzheng and erhu are emblematic of Chinese culture, and their unique sound and music have been popular around the world for generations. Secondly, the instrument performance will also provide a unique and exciting break from the usual sports-related activities.
In conclusion, I believe that our class participating in the Chinese traditional instrument performance will not only enrich the cultural diversity of the opening ceremony but also present a unique opportunity for us to share our cultural identity with the rest of the school. Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。学校将举办运动会，你班拟从以下三个方案中选其一参加开幕式的节目表演：中国传统乐器演奏（如古筝、二胡等等）；中国传统服饰秀（如汉服、旗袍等等）和中国传统才艺展示（如民族舞、武术等等）。现征求全班同学意见。给班主任写封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→convey
建议：suggest→recommend
机会：opportunity→chance
总之：in conclusion→in short
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Instruments like guzheng and erhu are emblematic of Chinese culture, and their unique sound and music have been popular around the world for generations.
拓展句：Not only are instruments like guzheng and erhu emblematic of Chinese culture, but also their unique sound and music have been popular around the world for generations.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I suggest that our class participate in the Chinese traditional instrument performance, such as playing the guzheng or erhu. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] In conclusion, I believe that our class participating in the Chinese traditional instrument performance will not only enrich the cultural diversity of the opening ceremony but also present a unique opportunity for us to share our cultural identity with the rest of the school. (运用了not only…but also…句型)
2024届上海市奉贤区高三上学期一模英语试题
【参考例文】
Dear Chairman of the Model CPPCC,
I am writing to express my support for the proposal of designating the Double Ninth Festival as a national holiday. As a student of Mingqi High School, I believe that this traditional Chinese festival holds significant cultural value and deserves more recognition and celebration.
Firstly, by establishing the Double Ninth Festival as a national holiday, we can preserve and promote our rich cultural heritage. This festival, also known as the Chongyang Festival, is not only a time for family reunions but also an to honor and respect the elderly. By granting it national holiday status, we can encourage families and communities to carry out traditional customs, such as visiting elders, climbing mountains, and appreciating chrysanthemums. This will contribute to the preservation and passing down of our traditional values to future generations.
Secondly, recognizing the Double Ninth Festival as a national holiday can enhance social harmony and cohesion. In today's fast-paced and modern society, many people are occupied with work and personal commitments, often neglecting the importance of spending quality time with family and showing filial piety to the elderly. Designating this festival as a holiday will create opportunities for people to pause, reflect, and reconnect with their roots. This can help strengthen family bonds, foster a sense of unity within communities, and ultimately contribute to a harmonious society.
In conclusion, I wholeheartedly support the proposal to make the Double Ninth Festival a national holiday. It is an excellent initiative to preserve our cultural heritage and promote traditional values while fostering social harmony. I urge the Model CPPCC to give due consideration to this proposal and make a collective effort to honor and celebrate our traditional festivals.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
写作框架：
1.开头：表达对将重阳节设为国定假日的支持，并介绍自己的身份和背景。
2.主体段落1：强调重阳节的文化价值和传统习俗，以及为何应该保护和传承这一节日。
3.主体段落2：阐述重阳节作为国定假日能够增进社会和谐和凝聚力的原因。
4.结尾：重申对将重阳节设为国定假日的支持，呼吁模拟全国政协认真考虑这一建议。
写作思路：
1.开头可以简要介绍自己的身份和支持的立场，例如作为一名学生或拥趸传统文化的人。
2.在主体段落1中，可以提到重阳节的历史渊源和突出的传统习俗，如探望长辈、登高赏菊等，强调这是重阳节需要被保护和传承的文化价值。
3.主体段落2可以从现代社会缺乏与家人团聚和孝敬长辈的机会出发，阐述将重阳节设为国定假日有助于提升社会和谐和家庭凝聚力，可以列举相关的调研或事实论证支持。
4.结尾部分再次表达对此建议的支持，强调重阳节作为国定假日的重要性，并号召政协委员对此做出深入考虑。
整篇文章应清晰表达对将重阳节设为国定假日的支持，并结合相关论据和例子来加强说服力。文章语言要简洁明了，抓住核心论点，切忌概念混淆或累赘的叙述。最后，要以积极热情的口吻呼吁政协委员认真考虑这一提议，突出其重要性和对社会的潜在影响。
2024届上海市黄埔区高三上学期一模英语试题
【参考例文】
As a senior student at Mingqi High School, I have had numerous experiences this year that have contributed to my personal growth. However, there is one particular event that stands out above the rest.
Earlier this year, I participated in a volunteering program organized by our school. We visited a local orphanage and spent time with the children there. This experience had a profound impact on me. Interacting with those children who lacked the love and care of a family made me realize the importance of compassion and empathy.
The time spent at the orphanage taught me valuable life lessons. It taught me to appreciate what I have and not take it for granted. It also made me more aware of the inequalities in society and ignited a desire within me to contribute towards creating a more inclusive and compassionate world.
This experience has had a significant meaning in my life. It has helped me develop a sense of gratitude and compassion towards others. It has also motivated me to actively engage in community service and make a positive difference in the lives of those less fortunate.
In conclusion, the volunteering experience at the orphanage in 2023 has been a transformative journey for me. It has shaped my perspective on life and instilled in me the values of empathy and kindness. I am grateful for this opportunity to grow as an individual and contribute to making the world a better place.
文章写作框架：
引言：介绍你是明启中学高三学生李明，并提到英语社团公众号的征文活动主题为“我的2023”。
描述亲身经历：详细描述一件今年你亲身经历的事情，可以是参加一个活动、面对一个挑战或者经历了一次改变。描述事件的背景、过程和结果，让读者能够了解你的经历。
说明对你的意义：解释这个经历对你的意义和影响。讨论它如何帮助你成长和发展，并具体提到它如何改变你的思维、观点或价值观。
强调价值观与行动：强调这个经历对你的人生观和价值观的影响，以及你打算如何在未来将这些观点付诸行动。例如，你可能会谈论如何更加关心他人，积极参与社区服务，或者促进社会公正和平等。
总结：总结你的经历和对它的评价。再次强调这个经历对你的成长和意义，并表达对未来的期望。
写作思路：
选择一个具体的经历：选择一件你今年经历的事情，确保它对你的成长产生了积极的影响。
详细描写经历：用具体的细节和描述来展现这个经历，让读者能够感受到你所经历的情境和感受。
分析经历的意义：解释这个经历对你的成长和发展有何意义，如何改变了你的思维和观点。
强调行动计划：表达你在未来打算如何将这个经历的价值观付诸实践，以及你对未来的期望和目标。
使用连词和过渡语：使用适当的连词和过渡语来连接句子和段落，使文章更加流畅和连贯。
审查和修改：仔细检查文章中的语法错误和拼写错误，并进行必要的修改和润色。
按照这个框架和写作思路，你可以展开描述你今年的亲身经历并说明其对你的意义。记得用清晰的语言和具体的细节来让读者能够深入理解你的故事，并通过合适的结构和过渡词使文章更具可读性。
