北京市部分区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语解析版试题分类汇编
书面表达
北京东城区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试题
第三节 书面表达(20分)
47. 假设你是红星中学的李华。请根据你的英国笔友Jim的邮件给他回信。
Dear Li Hua,
I have read a lot of stories about people of achievement recently. I am really impressed by them. Speaking of people of achievement, who is the person you admire most I want to know why you admire him/her most How does he/she influence you
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Jim
注意：1. 词数100字左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
北京市大兴区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试卷
第二节(共20分)
44. 假如你是红星中学学生李华，你的学校准备以“选秀类节目是否对公众有益”为题举行一场英文辩论赛。作为一名参赛选手，请你表达自己的主张，并对自己的主张进行论证。内容应包括：
1. 你是否支持选秀类节目；
2. 你支持或者反对的原因及依据。
参考词汇：talent show
注意：
1. 词数：100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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北京市丰台区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试题（A卷）
44. 假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你在学校英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖，请用英文写一封邮件感谢外教Jim对你的帮助，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾Jim对你的帮助；
3. 你的祝愿。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
北京市丰台区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试题（B卷）
49. 书面表达
假设你是高二(1)班学生李华。英语课上，老师请你们以“My Dream Job”为题，简要介绍自己理想的职业。请你按照以下要点准备发言稿：
What job you want to do
Why you want to do the job
What qualities you should have for the job
How you should prepare yourself for the job
注意：1. 发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好；
2. 词数不少于60。
My Dream Job
Good afternoon, everyone. __________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
北京市房山区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试卷
18．（20分）假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你校下周将要举办秋游活动，请给你校的交换生Jim写一封信，邀请他参加此次活动
（1）时间、地点、参加者；
（2）活动安排；
（3）询问意愿。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：autumn outgoing
Dear Jim，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
参考答案
北京东城区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试题
【答案】Dear Jim，
I am glad to receive your e-mail and talk about the greatest person that I admire most.
I admire Madam Curie the most, the greatest woman chemist in the world, who not only discovered radium, but also devoted her discovery to saving lots of injured soldiers during the First World War. Besides, Madam Curie was not interested in fame or wealth at all, although she won the Nobel Prize twice.
In my opinion, great persons should be selfless, generous and active, for which they can really influence us.
What qualities do you think a great person should have Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】这是一篇书面表达类应用文。要求考生向笔友Jim回一封邮件。谈论自己最崇拜的伟人、崇拜的原因及伟人是如何影响自己的。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：pleased→glad
钦佩；尊重：respect→admire
对……感兴趣：have an interest in/show interest in→be interested in
在我看来：as far as I am concerned→in my opinion
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：I admire Madam Curie the most, the greatest woman chemist in the world, who not only discovered radium, but also devoted her discovery to saving lots of injured soldiers during the First World War.
拓展句：I admire Madam Curie the most, the greatest woman chemist in the world, because not only did she discover radium, but also devoted her discovery to saving lots of injured soldiers during the First World War.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
I admire Madam Curie the most, the greatest woman chemist in the world, who not only discovered radium, but also devoted her discovery to saving lots of injured soldiers during the First World War. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
In my opinion, great persons should be selfless, generous and active, for which they can really influence us. (运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句)
北京市大兴区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试卷
【答案】One possible version:
Talent shows have been popular in China for many years. However, recently people start talking about whether talent shows are beneficial in general. I am personally against talent shows.
On the one hand, they give people false motivations and make them believe they can become famous and make money easily by attending the shows. In fact, only few can really succeed, and most people simply waste their time and energy in the process. On the other hand, talent shows are not fair to all the participants. Best performers are often kicked out, and the winners are often less talented. The audience feels sad and frustrated about it when seeing that happens.
To sum up, I am against talent shows in their current form and I think they need to be changed.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“选秀类节目是否对公众有益”为题写一篇文章，表达自己的主张，并讲述自己支持或反对的原因及依据。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有益的：beneficial→helpful/advantageous
使人相信：make sb. believe→convince sb. of…
参加/参与：attend→take part in/go in for
事实上：in fact→actually
总而言之：to sum up→all in all/in a word/in short
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：On the one hand, they give people false motivations and make them believe they can become famous and make money easily by attending the shows.
拓展句：On the one hand, they give people false motivations, which make them believe they can become famous and make money easily by attending the shows.
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, recently people start talking about whether talent shows are beneficial in general.（运用了whether引导宾语从句）
【高分句型2】The audience feels sad and frustrated about it when seeing that happens.（“when seeing that happens”为when引导时间状语从句的省略句）
北京市丰台区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试题（A卷）
【答案】Dear Jim,
How is everything going I am writing to express my heartfelt thanks to you because I’ve won the first prize in the English Speech Contest of our school. Your kind help has meant more than anything.
I remember vividly how you guided and encouraged me. During the preparation of the contest, you helped polish my draft many times and better my pronunciation with great patience.The public speaking skills you shared turned out really effective. More importantly, whenever I felt hesitant and unsure about myself, you were always there to back me up and boost my confidence. Without you, I couldn’t have made such an achievement.
Thank you for everything you have done for me and wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的感谢信。要求考生给外教写封信感谢其在英语学习中给自己的帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
衷心的：heartfelt→ sincere/genuine
耐心地：with patience → patiently
重要地：importantly → significantly
支持：back up→ support
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Without you, I couldn’t have made such an achievement.
拓展句：If it had not been for you, I couldn’t have made such an achievement.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to express my heartfelt thanks to you because I’ve won the first prize in the English Speech Contest of our school.（运用了because引导的状语从句）
【高分句型2】I remember vividly how you guided and encouraged me.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）
北京市丰台区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试题（B卷）
【答案】 Good afternoon, everyone. When I grow up, I want to be a journalist. I think working for a newspaper and reporting news from all over the world would be really exciting. Journalists have to be very enthusiastic, independent and good at communicating with people. I know there’s a long way to go to become a journalist. To get myself up to date with what’s happening around the world, I read papers, and watch the news on TV. I am trying to improve my speaking and writing skills. And of course, absorbing as much knowledge as possible at this stage in my life is what I must do. I know dreams are hard to follow, but I will work hard on my dream. Thank you!
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“My Dream Job”为题，简要介绍自己理想的职业。
【详解】1.词汇积累
全世界：all over the world→the whole world
擅长：be good at→be expert in
提高：improve→strengthen
困难的：hard→difficult
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Journalists have to be very enthusiastic, independent and good at communicating with people.
拓展句：Journalists, who must be good at communicating with people, have to be very enthusiastic and independent,
【点睛】【高分句型1】I think working for a newspaper and reporting news from all over the world would be really exciting.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】And of course, absorbing as much knowledge as possible at this stage in my life is what I must do.（运用了动名词作主语，what引导的表语从句）
北京市房山区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试卷
第二节
18．【分析】高分句型一：The Fragrant Hill is considered as the perfect destination，since it is famous for its red leaves in autumn.
翻译：香山被认为是一个完美的目的地，因为它以秋天的红叶而闻名。
分析：本句使用了since引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：Would you please let us know if you can attend？
翻译：如果你能参加，请告诉我们好吗？
分析：本句使用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I'm writing to tell you that our school will organize an autumn outgoing this Friday and we sincerely invite you to join us.
The Fragrant Hill is considered as the perfect destination，since it is famous for its red leaves in autumn.【高分句型一】Almost all teachers and students in our school will participate in this activity.We are scheduled to set off at the school gate at 8 a.m.and return to school around 4 p.m.（时间、参加者）We will climb the hill，and have a picnic at the top of the hill.（活动安排）
We do hope you are able to make it.Would you please let us know if you can attend？【高分句型二】We are looking forward to your reply.（询问意愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
