2024外研版高中英语选择性必修第二册同步
Part 4 Writing
书评
写作题目
根据下列要点提示,写一篇关于马克·吐温及其作品《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》的评论。
1.马克·吐温(Mark Twain),美国作家。他出生于密西西比河(the Mississippi River)河畔的小城镇。
2.他的代表作之一是《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》(The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn)。该作品讲述了白人小孩Huckleberry Finn从家中逃走,和黑奴Jim在密西西比河流浪的故事。
3.Huckleberry Finn遇见的人物涵盖了社会各个阶层(a walk of life),因此这部小说生动地反映了当时的社会现状。
4.《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》被称为美国文学史上最伟大的作品之一。
注意:词数80左右。
思路点拨
主题 关于马克·吐温及其作品《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》的评论 体裁 议论文
布局 第一段:简要介绍马克·吐温 第二段:概括介绍其代表作《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》 第三段:对《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》的评价
人称 第三人称 时态 以一般现在时为主
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.代表作,杰作
2. adj.各种各样的
3. n.结论
4. 长大
答案 1.masterpiece 2.varied 3.conclusion
4.grow up
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:简要介绍马克·吐温
(1)马克·吐温是一位美国作家。他在密西西比河河畔的小城镇长大。
Mark Twain is an American writer. He on the banks of the Mississippi River.
第二段:概括介绍其代表作《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》
(2)他最伟大的代表作之一是《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》。
is The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn.
(3)这部小说讲述了白人小孩Huckleberry Finn离开家,和名叫Jim的黑奴四处流浪的故事。
The novel tells the story of a white child Huckleberry Finn who with a black slave named Jim.
(4)Huckleberry Finn遇见的人物涵盖了社会各个阶层。
The people Huckleberry Finn encountered covered of the society.
第三段:对《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》的评价
(5)这部小说生动地反映了当时的社会现状。
The novel the social scene at that time.
(6)总之,《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》被视为美国文学史上最伟大的作品之一。
, The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn has one of the greatest works in the history of American literature.
答案 (1)grew up in a small town
(2)One of his greatest masterpieces
(3)was away from home and wandered around
(4)varied walks of life
(5)vividly reflects
(6)In conclusion;been considered
2.句式升级
(7)用动词-ing形式作状语改写句(1)
(8)用定语从句合并句(2)和句(3)
(9)用连词because合并句(4)和句(5)
答案 (7)Mark Twain is an American writer, growing up in a small town on the banks of the Mississippi River.
(8)One of his greatest masterpieces is The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, which tells the story of a white child Huckleberry Finn who was away from home and wandered around with a black slave named Jim.
(9)The novel vividly reflects the social scene at that time because the people Huckleberry Finn encountered covered varied walks of life of the society.
连句成篇
参考范文
Mark Twain is an American writer, growing up in a small town on the banks of the Mississippi River.
One of his greatest masterpieces is The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, which tells the story of a white child Huckleberry Finn who was away from home and wandered around with a black slave named Jim. The novel vividly reflects the social scene at that time because the people Huckleberry Finn encountered covered varied walks of life of the society.
In conclusion, The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn has been considered one of the greatest works in the history of American literature.
写作积累
(一)增色词汇
1.整体介绍:theme;background;inspiring;popularity;widely;worthy;recommend;best-seller
2.总结:be considered as; be regarded as; fall in love with; be worth reading; have a great effect on
(二)精彩句型
1.介绍书的内容的常用句式
①The new book is written/published by...
这本新书是由……写/出版的。
②This month, I finished reading the book, which describes...
这个月,我看完了这本书,该书描述了……
2.对书的评价的常用句式
①The book...has been considered the greatest work in...
……(书名)这本书被认为是在……(时间)最伟大的作品。
②The writer aims to convey the message that...throughout the book.
在整本书中作者力求传递这样一种信息,那就是……
③The book is well worth reading, as it carries the main idea that...
这本书很值得一读,因为它传达的主要思想是……
④As I have expected, I find the novel to be enjoyable and informative.
正如我所期待的,我发现这本小说令人愉快并且使人长见识。
实战演练
《圣诞颂歌》(A Christmas Carol)是英国小说家查尔斯·狄更斯(Charles Dickens)写的一部著名小说。请根据下列要点写一篇关于《圣诞颂歌》的英语书评。
1.斯克鲁奇(Scrooge)是个爱财如命的吝啬鬼,他从来不关心身边的人。然而平安夜出现的三个精灵把他带到了过去、现在和未来,让他领悟到圣诞节的意义,并开始了新的生活;
2.小说以幽默的语言和深刻的含义博得读者的喜爱;
3.这本书极大地影响了西方人对圣诞节的认识和过节的方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
读后续写
写作题目
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Emily White was born seventeen years ago with so many birth problems in her body. Some of her organs, bones and muscles were out of shape. No one expected her to survive. She did make it but with her strange body figure, everyone could recognize her, even from a distance.
In Emily White’s hometown, there was a yearly outdoor performance in the school auditorium(礼堂). It had been performed for so many years and actually had become one of the most important events of the Christmas season for many of the town’s people. Many people tried out each year for it but so many were turned away. It could only include the most excellent people in the field.
Emily had a beautiful singing voice. Last year she went to Mrs. Owens—her music teacher—to ask to join in the performance. Without letting her sing, Mrs. Owens took a look at Emily’s body and said, “Child, you just don’t fit. Everyone would stare at you and that would make you uncomfortable. It would make them uncomfortable, too.”
Without singing a single note, Emily was sent back through the door of the choral(合唱队的) room. Hurt and upset, she decided never to try out again. But Mrs. Owens then retired.
This year, there came a new music teacher, Mr. Butler. He heard about Emily and suggested that she have a try.
Emily didn’t want to be rejected again, so she hesitated a little about it. As Emily struggled, the door was pushed open and Mr. Butler called, “Emily, you’re next.” Although kind of nervous, Emily did as Mr. Butler told her to do. Mr. Butler sat by the piano to accompany Emily. When Emily finished her testing performance, she thanked Mr. Butler and knew the result would be posted on the door of the choral room the next day.
Emily couldn’t sleep that night. She was suffering from the feelings that she didn’t fit and the great need to be accepted. By the next morning, her stomach was even in pain because of stress.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Paragraph 1:
The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room.
Paragraph 2:
Finally, the day of the performance came.
文本分析
初识文本
重点词汇
1.out of shape变形的;不健康,身体不好
2.make it幸免于难,渡过难关
3.recognize v.认出
4.performance n.表演
5.try out for...参加……选拔(或试演)
6.turn away把……拒之门外
7.reject vt.拒绝接受,不予考虑
8.hesitate vi.犹豫,迟疑不决
9.struggle vi.挣扎
10.suffer from...因……受苦
11.in pain感到疼痛
障碍词汇
accompany vt.为……伴奏
长难句
原句 She did make it but with her strange body figure, everyone could recognize her, even from a distance.
分析 该句是一个并列复合句,but连接两个并列分句。第二个分句中with her strange body figure作原因状语。
译文 她的确活了下来,但由于她奇怪的体形,每个人甚至从远处都能认出她。
故事要素
深研文本
预测情节发展
第一段:第二天,Emily焦虑地看合唱室门上的名单(首句信息)→Emily被选上→Emily心情复杂,兴奋之余流露出不自信→Mr. Butler对Emily说了一番话,引导Emily接下来坚定信心,刻苦训练
第二段:终于到了演出那天(首句信息)→Emily走上表演舞台后观众因她的外表而产生不好的反应→Emily不受影响,全身心投入表演→Emily演出成功,观众的态度发生转变→Emily战胜自己,完成蜕变
遣词造句
1.在横线上填入适当的单词
(1)to one’s 让某人惊讶的是
(2) adj.神秘的
(3)remain 保持冷静
(4)with all one’s 全心全意地
(5)come 遇到
(6)be used sth.习惯于某事
(7) one’s breath 屏息
(8)break 突然开始
答案 (1)surprise (2)mysterious
(3)calm (4) heart (5)across (6)to
(7)hold (8)into
2.完成句子
(9)她喜出望外,但又心存疑虑。
She was but .
(10)她使劲拍了一下自己的手,却发现自己并不是在做梦。
She hit her hand hard she wasn’t dreaming.
(11)然后Mr. Butler带着笑容从房间里走了出来。
Then Mr. Butler walked out of the room .
(12)Emily深受鼓舞,坚定地点点头,保证为演出努力练习。
Emily was , and she and promised to practice hard for the performance.
(13)她一出现在舞台上,迎接她的是轻蔑的目光。
appearing on the stage, she was scornful eyes.
(14)观众爆发出雷鸣般的掌声。
The audience thunderous applause.
(15)Mr. Butler被感动了,他给了Emily一个大大的拥抱。
Mr. Butler was moved,and he gave Emily .
(16)那时,他知道Emily已经战胜了她自己。
Then he knew that Emily had .
答案 (9)overjoyed;doubtful
(10)only to find
(11)with a smile
(12)greatly encouraged;nodded determinedly
(13)Upon/On;greeted with
(14)broke into
(15)a big hug
(16)overcome herself
3.句式升级
(17)用形容词作状语合并句(9)和句(10)
.
(18)用倒装句改写句(11)
.
(19)用过去分词作状语改写句(12)
.
(20)用so...that...结构改写句(15)
.
(21)用it强调句强调时间状语改写句(16)
.
答案 (17)Overjoyed but doubtful, she hit her hand hard only to find she wasn’t dreaming
(18)Then out of the room walked Mr.Butler with a smile
(19)Greatly encouraged, Emily nodded determinedly and promised to practice hard for the performance
(20)Mr. Butler was so moved that he gave Emily a big hug
(21)It was then that he knew that Emily had overcome herself
连句成篇
Paragraph 1:
The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room.
Paragraph 2:
Finally, the day of the performance came.
参考范文
Paragraph 1:
The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room. To her surprise, on top of the list was her name! Overjoyed but doubtful, she hit her hand hard only to find she wasn’t dreaming. Then out of the room walked Mr. Butler with a smile. “Emily, we had another good news for you,” he said in a mysterious voice. “We choose you to be the lead singer. Do you believe in yourself ” Greatly encouraged, Emily nodded determinedly and promised to practice hard for the performance.
Paragraph 2:
Finally, the day of the performance came. Upon appearing on the stage, she was greeted with scornful eyes. But remaining calm, she began to sing with all her heart. Who knew how many such situations she had come across She was really used to it. When she finished her song, there was a moment of silence, as if the world was holding its breath. Suddenly, the audience broke into thunderous applause. Mr. Butler was so moved that he gave her a big hug. It was then that he knew that Emily had overcome herself.
写作积累
与“神态描写”相关的表达
1.脸上激动的表情:an expression of excitement on one’s face
2.坚定的眼神:a determined look
3.满足的微笑/神情:a smile/look of satisfaction
4.灿烂的微笑:a brilliant smile
5.拉着长脸:pull a long face
6.怒视某人:glare at sb.
7.极度愤怒的一眼:a look of burning anger
8.因愤怒而颤抖:tremble with anger
9.一丝微笑浮上她的脸庞。A smile floated on her face.
10.她眼含泪水。Her eyes were filled with tears.
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
A Christmas Carol is a novel written by Charles Dickens.
It tells the story of mean Scrooge who regards money as important as his own life. On Christmas Eve, three spirits show Scrooge how happy he was in the past,how greedy he is now and how he regrets what he has done in the future. Then he understands that money is not the only thing that is worth reserving. Love and care are important,too.
After the novel came out, it enjoyed great popularity among readers with its humorous language and profound meaning. The novel plays a critical role in redefining the importance of Christmas and the way of celebrating the holiday.
1.重点词汇
①sth. be worth doing某事值得做
②come out出版,发行;开花
③popularity n.流行,普及,受欢迎
④profound adj.深远的;理解深刻的
2.亮点句型
①On Christmas Eve, three spirits show Scrooge how happy he was in the past,how greedy he is now and how he regrets what he has done in the future. (三个how引导三个并列的宾语从句,作show的宾语;what引导宾语从句,作regrets的宾语) 在平安夜,三个精灵向斯克鲁奇展示了他过去是多么幸福,现在是多么贪婪以及未来他对自己所做的事情是多么后悔。
②Then he understands that money is not the only thing that is worth reserving.(第一个that引导宾语从句;第二个that引导定语从句)然后他就明白了钱不是唯一值得保留的东西。
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