书面表达15篇
（2023秋人教九上英语期中复习专项突破）
1．（2022秋·山东威海·九年级统考期中）最近你和父母针对“青少年该不该在周末与朋友外出”这一问题进行了讨论，双方发表了不同的观点。请根据下面的要求，以“Should Teenagers Go out with Friends on Weekends ”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1. 所写内容需包括父母的想法和你的想法至少各两条，并说明理由；
2. 词数100左右；
3. 字迹工整，内容完整连贯，语言准确规范；
4. 作文中不要出现真实校名和姓名；
5. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Should Teenagers Go out With Friends on Weekends
Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with friends on weekends. ___________________________________________________________________________________
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【参考答案】
Should Teenagers Go out with Friends on Weekends
Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with friends on weekends.
My parents think that teenagers should stay at home on weekends. They should go over their lessons. And they could have enough time to have a good sleep. On weekdays, we are busy and don’t have enough sleep. They also think teenagers should help parents do some housework on weekends. Housework isn’t only for parents. We children should share it.
In my opinion, we teenagers should be allowed to go out with friends for fun on weekends, so that we can relax ourselves. When we are together, we can talk everything we like. And we can also share ideas with each other. What’s more, we can take some exercise together to keep fit. Doing sports is very important for us. I like soccer. So I usually spend two hours playing soccer with my friends. After sports, I often feel tired, but I am more relaxed.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括父母的观点和你自己的观点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；父母的观点通常是反方，而自己的观点当然是正方；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍最近你和父母针对“青少年该不该在周末与朋友外出”这一问题进行了讨论，从而引出话题；
第二步，陈述父母的观点，不允许外出的理由至少两点，逐一陈述，适当拓展；
第三步，表达自己的观点，周末与朋友外出的理由，可以做的事情。
［亮点词汇］
① go over 复习
② what’s more 另外
［高分句型］
① They also think teenagers should help parents do some housework on weekends.（宾语从句）
② Doing sports is very important for us.（动名词作主语）
2．（2022秋·山东枣庄·九年级统考期中）苏州，丝绸的故乡，以生产蚕丝被 (silk quilt) 而闻名。请你根据下面表格的内容写一篇介绍苏州蚕丝被的文章，90词左右。开头已给出。
What the product is silk quilts
What it is made of silk
What it is made by factory workers
Where it is made Suzhou
What it can do keep you warm and comfortable
Why it is special made of real silk that is soft, light and comfortable; also decorated with beautiful patterns
Suzhou is famous for its silk quilts.____________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】
Suzhou, is famous for its silk quilts. These quilts are made of real silk. They are made by skillful workers in many silk factories in the city. They are made in Suzhou. The silk quilts are used to keep people warm and comfortable in bed. They are known to be very comfortable because they are light and soft. In addition, they look beautiful as they are decorated with beautiful patterns. Many people from all over the world come to Suzhou to visit the silk factories and buy not only the silk quilts but also many other silk products.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏图表信息中“提示问题”的六个方面的阐述，适当发挥。
【写作步骤】
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“苏州因蚕丝被而闻名”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照图表提示的六个问题——产品名称、产品来源、产地、产品制作人、产品特点、产品用途均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“全世界各地的人来买蚕丝被及相关产品”的美好。
【亮点词汇】
①skillful works有手艺的工人
②look beautiful看起来漂亮
③all over the world全世界
【高分句型】
① These quilts are made of real silk. (被动语态)
②Many people from all over the world come to Suzhou to visit the silk factories and buy not only the silk quilts but also many other silk products. (not only...but also...的用法)
3．（2022秋·河南洛阳·九年级统考期中）为了让学生更快地适应九年级的学习生活，学校将在这个星期组织学习交流活动。请根据以下表格提示，以“How to Learn Wisely ”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的建议。
Tips Listen to teachers carefully in class.
Review the notes before exams.
Do homework actively after class.
…
要求：
1）参考表格内容；可适当发挥；
2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
4）词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How to Learn Wisely
Hello, everyone! All of us want to learn wisely and get good grades._________________________________
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【参考答案】
How to Learn Wisely
Hello, everyone! All of us want to learn wisely and get good grades. But how can we do that
First, we should listen to our teachers carefully in class. And it’s a good idea to take notes at the same time. After class, we must do our homework actively. Before exams, we’d better review the notes. It’s also necessary to keep on studying hard and never give up. Last but not least, we need to relax ourselves from time to time. We can spend some time doing sports or listening to music.
I’m sure we’ll learn wisely and get good grades. Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，按照提示要点分别给出如何明智地学习的建议，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表达祝愿并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①at the same time与此同时
②last but not least最后但同样重要的
③from time to time时不时地
④spend some time doing sth花时间做某事
[高分句型]
①And it’s a good idea to take notes at the same time.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
②I’m sure we’ll learn wisely and get good grades.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
4．（2022秋·湖北襄阳·九年级统考期中）每个人在成长过程中会经历无数次的改变。如：一本书，一部电影，一席话，或一次经历……都会改变你的认知，兴趣爱好，甚至性格等等，它们会让你进步成长。请记叙一次你的变化经历。
包括以下要点：
1. 你的变化是什么？
2. 你是如何改变的？
3. 这次变化对你产生的影响或你有何感悟？
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
【参考答案】
My three-year middle school life is coming to an pared with what I was three years ago, I have changed a lot and my biggest change is that I am not a shy girl anymore.
When I came to this school, I was quite shy and I was afraid to talk to others. As a result I was always alone and I always felt sad. It changed until I got a letter from my classmate, Nancy. She told me to walk out of my own world. I tried to get over my shyness, talked with her a lot and later I had more friends.
Seeing my change, I am so happy and be more confident in myself. I believe I will get better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中提出的三个主要问题，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我的近况”来引出下文中对材料中三个问题的回答；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“变化、原因和感悟”三方面入手，重点介绍自己的变化；
③第三步，书写结语。表达对未来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①come to an end 结束
②compared with 与……相比
③not...anymore不再……
④be afraid to do sth.害怕做某事
[高分句型]
①Compared with what I was three years ago, I have changed a lot and my biggest change is that I am not a shy girl anymore.（that引导的表语从句）
②When I came to this school, I was quite shy and I was afraid to talk to others. （when引导的时间状语从句）
5．（2022秋·贵州毕节·九年级统考期中）国家颁布了“双减”政策，即减作业，减培训等，极大地保证了中小学生的身心健康。各学校也采取了一系列有利于学生健康成长的措施。请以“Changes in My School Life”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
1.你的变化（睡眠、课外活动、学习、作业、体育锻炼……）；
2.你的感受。
要求：
1.语言通顺、表达清楚、语法正确、书写规范；
2.所写短文必须包括以上所有要点，并作适当发挥，使短文通顺、流畅；
3.不少于80词。标题和首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Changes in My School Life
Because of the Double Reduction policy, every school has taken action to give more time to students so that they can have more free time to relax and exercise. ___________________________________________________
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【参考答案】
Changes in My School Life
Because of the Double Reduction policy, every school has taken action to give more time to students so that they can have more free time to relax and exercise. Let me tell you some changes
Great changes have taken place in my school since the beginning of last term. On the one hand, I can go to school at 7:30 a.m. now, but in the past, I had to arrive at school at 7:00 a.m. On the other hand, now I have enough sleep. I don’t have to stay up late at night. I can go to bed early. What’s more, I have less homework, but in the past I had much homework every day. Now I have more free time to relax myself and do what I like to do. Finally, I have a lot of time to do sports and do some after-school activities every day. It not only makes me strong and healthy, but also makes my life colorful.
All in all, these are my changes in my school life. I love these changes!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示信息介绍自“双减”政策后自己学校生活的变化，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，从不同的方面介绍自己学校生活的变化；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②on the one hand...on the other hand一方面……另一方面
③stay up late熬夜到很晚
④all in all总的来说
[高分句型]
①Now I have more free time to relax myself and do what I like to do.(what引导的宾语从句)
②It not only makes me strong and healthy, but also makes my life colorful.(not only...but also结构)
6．（2022秋·山东济宁·九年级统考期中）某英文报社现就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How Can We Keep a Good Relationship with Our Parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文参加此次活动。
提示：
1. 你的父母规矩太多，不理解你，过于强调学习成绩等；
2. 你对这些问题的看法；
3. 你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
要求：
1. 文章需包括提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，条理清楚；
3. 80词左右。
How Can We Keep a Good Relationship with Our Parents
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【参考答案】
How Can We Keep a Good Relationship with Our Parents
In my opinion, there are many rules at home. I’m never allowed to go out with my friends. I’m not allowed to choose my own clothes, either. And my parents pay much attention to my exam results. I don’t think they understand me.
I think I should be allowed to make my own decisions. However, I try my best to understand my parents. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me much pressure, I know that it is because they really care about me and want me to enter a good university.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I should study hard and listen to them. I always tell them my trouble. I also help them do some chores.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“如何与父母保持良好关系”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①In my opinion在我看来
②pay much attention to非常注意
③study hard努力学习
[高分句型]
①I think I should be allowed to make my own decisions.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me much pressure, I know that it is because they really care about me and want me to enter a good university.（although引导的让步状语从句）
7．（2021秋·湖北孝感·九年级统考期中）学校最近就“一个朋友的标准”做了一次问卷调查，在学生们心目中，调查情况大致如下。
请你用英语为你们学校的校报写一篇短文，描述一下调查情况并谈谈你对朋友的理解。
注意：
1）词数：100左右（开头已给出的内容不计入总词数）；
2）内容必须包括上图中的要点，可适当发挥；
3）文章条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺；
4）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
Recently, we have made a survey in our school on what a friend should be like. ________________________
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【参考答案】
Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like. Some students prefer their friends should be beautiful or handsome, and also wear neatly. Some students think that their friends should work hard at their lessons and have good grades at their lessons. Some students hope their friends should be good at singing and dancing, and also they should be fond of sports. Other students agree that their friends should be not only lively, kind and helpful but also honest. Good friends should trust each other and share joys. I think to be honest is the most important for us all.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据调查情况，用英语为你们学校的校报写一篇短文，描述一下调查情况并谈谈你对朋友的理解。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先点题，表明学校做了一个关于好朋友应该是什么样的调查；
第二步，具体阐述一个好朋友应该是什么样的；
第三步，总结，表明自己对一个好朋友的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①work hard努力学习
②be good at擅长……
③be fond of喜欢……
④not only...but also不仅……而且
[高分句型]
①Other students agree that their friends should be not only lively, kind and helpful but also honest.（“that”引导的宾语从句；not only...but also“不仅……而且”）
②I think to be honest is the most important for us all.（“I think”后是宾语从句；动词不定式作主语）
8．（2022秋·湖北黄冈·九年级统考期中）中华文化渊源流长，博大精深，展现出了独特的魅力。假如你是魏华，你的外国笔友Mary非常喜欢中国，想对中国文化有进一步的了解。请你从以下几个方面，给她写一封电子邮件，向她介绍中国的文化特色。
提示：
1. Clothes: Tang costume, cheongsam（旗袍）...
2. 名胜古迹（places of interest）: Tian’anmen Square, the Great Wall ...
3. Foods: dumplings, mooncakes, zongzi ...
4. Opera: Beijing Opera ...
5. Festivals: the Spring Festival, the Mid-Autumn Festival
6. Others: ...
写作要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的校名，人名等个人信息；
2. 根据上面提示，至少要写两个方面的内容（可适当发挥）；
3. 90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
How is it going __________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours,
Wei hua
【参考答案】
Dear Mary,
How is it going I know you always want to know more about Chinese culture. I’m writing to tell you something about it .
There are too many things we Chinese people are proud of. There are serveral kinds of traditional clothes in China, such as Tang costume and cheongsam. Chinese foods are famous all over the world. Special foods like dumplings, mooncakes and zongzi are not only delicious but also meaningful. They are closely connected with special festivals such as the Spring Festival, the Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival. And there are lots of places of interest in China. If you come to China, I suggest you visit Tian’anmen Square, the Great Wall and so on. Also, you can enjoy Beijing opera.
I’m looking forward to your email.
Yours,
Wei hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的。给出中华文化这个主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“衣服、名胜古迹、食物、其他”等方面具体介绍中华文化；
第三步，书写结语。期待对方的来信。
[亮点词汇]
①be proud of自豪
②all over the world全世界
③not only delicious but also meaningful不仅美味而且有意义
[高分句型]
①I’m writing to tell you something about it .（现在进行时）
②If you come to China, I suggest you visit Tian’anmen Square, the Great Wall and so on .（if引导的条件状语从句）
9．（2022秋·河南洛阳·九年级统考期中）假如你是李华，本学期你们学校将与社区共同举办“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”系列活动。下周六主题为“品民俗话端午”，你打算邀请你的笔友Paul一起参加。请用英语写一封100词左右的电子邮件，告诉他活动的时间、地点、活动安排以及需要做什么准备。
1.要点：
1) When and where will the activity be held
2) What will you do in the activity
3) What do you advise Paul to prepare for it
2.要求：
1)100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2)要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3)条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
Dear Paul,
How is it going I’m writing to invite you to take part in our activity to welcome Dragon Boat Festival. ____
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I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Paul,
How is it going I’m writing to invite you to take part in our activity to welcome Dragon Boat Festival.
It is one of the most important festivals in China. So, in order to celebrate it, we are going to hold an activity on our school playground next Saturday morning. I’m sure you will enjoy it if you come.
I can’t wait to tell you about the interesting activities. At the beginning, we will learn some knowledge about Qu Yuan. It is well known that Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated in memory of Qu Yuan. Then, we will make Zongzi together as it’s the symbol of this festival. What’s more, we will have a chance to watch the dragon boat models and you can take photos to record the exciting moments. Therefore, you can take your camera. Last but not least, according to the weather report, it will be sunny that day so you’d better wear a cap.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中需要做的准备，注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出将举办端午节活动并邀请Paul参加；
第二步，具体介绍活动相关内容，围绕“举办时间、地点、活动安排”等展开；
第三步，告知对方需要做的准备。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②in memory of纪念
③the symbol of……的象征
④what’s more除以之外还
⑤take photos照相
⑥according to根据
[高分句型]
①I’m sure you will enjoy it if you come.（if引导状语从句）
②It is well known that Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated in memory of Qu Yuan.（that引导主语从句）
10．（2022秋·河南驻马店·九年级统考期中）假如你是韩雪，上个月你参加了几次学校的英语角活动。请你根据以下要点和要求把参加活动的情况用英语写一封电子邮件告诉你的笔友Linda。
1.要点：
1）活动时间及地点：每周五下午，学校图书馆；
2）参加人员：一些学生和教师；
3）活动内容：阅读英语报纸，练习口语，学唱英语歌曲；
4）感受：口语有所提高，不怕在课堂上讲英语了……
2.要求：词数100左右，电子邮件的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
How is it going these days I’m glad you’re interested in our English Corner.
I’d like to tell you something about it. ________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】
Dear Linda,
How is it going these days I’m glad you’re interested in our English Corner. I’d like to tell you something about it.
I went to the English Corner several times last month. The English Corner activities are held in the school library every Friday afternoon. Many students and some teachers take part in it. Some of us read English newspapers. Some practice oral English. The teachers also teach us some beautiful English songs. Since I took part in the English Corner, my oral English has improved a lot. Now I’m not afraid of speaking English in class anymore. I often put up my hand to answer the teacher’s questions. And I find it easy to learn English well.
Yours,
Han Xue
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据要点提示介绍参加活动的情况，可适当增添细节，注意要点齐全，语句连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，从活动时间、地点、参加人员及活动内容等方面具体介绍该活动；
第三步，表达自己对该活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②be afraid of doing sth害怕做某事
③not ... anymore不再
[高分句型]
①Since I took part in the English Corner, my oral English has improved a lot.（since引导的时间状语从句）
②And I find it easy to learn English well.（it作形式宾语）
11．（2022秋·湖北黄冈·九年级校联考期中）假设你是李华，你的外国网友Mary在网上看到几幅中国剪纸（Chinese paper cutting），Mary对此很感兴趣，给你发来邮件询问有关中国剪纸的信息，请你根据下面的提示给她回复一封电子邮件。
提示：
1. Long history; about 2,000 years
2. Very popular; in many parts of China
3. Different shapes: birds, flowers, animals
4. Where do people put Chinese paper cutting
要求：
1. 电子邮件需包括所给提示，可适当发挥；
2. 80—100词，格式、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
I’m so glad that you want to know about Chinese paper cutting. Now I’ll tell you something about it._______
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Mary,
I’m so glad that you want to know about Chinese paper cutting. Now I’ll tell you something about it.
Chinese paper cutting has a long history of over 2,000 years. It can be seen in many parts of China. Many people, no matter young or old, are fond of it. People, especially in northern part of China, do well in making paper cutting. They cut paper into different shapes, like birds, animals, flowers and so on. I think Chinese paper cutting is not only beautiful but also very useful. People usually put it on doors or windows when they celebrate something happy, like the Spring Festival.
More and more people are interested in it. I hope you’ll come to China to know more about Chinese paper cutting one day.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是电子邮件；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”；
③题材：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开头已给出；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“历史、流行度、种类”等多方面分别展开；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①a long history of over 2,000 years两千多年的历史
②not only ...but also 不仅……而且
[高分句型]
①It can be seen in many parts of China. （被动语态）
②Many people, no matter young or old, are fond of it. （插入语来补充说明）
12．（2022秋·山东菏泽·九年级统考期中）为迎接党的二十大的召开，某英文报刊环保专栏近期正在举办英语征文竞赛，其主题是赞美家乡。假设你是李明，居住在中国北方一个美丽的村庄。请你根据下面的图片及要点提示，写一篇以“My beautiful hometown”为题的短文投稿。
要点提示：
1.过去的家乡：山、河流、垃圾……
2.现在的家乡：青山、绿水、空气、花……
3.你的感想
写作要求：
1.文中必须包含所有提示要点，并适当发挥；
2.100词左右，文中不得出现真实人名、地名等相关信息。
My beautiful hometown
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】
My beautiful hometown
My hometown is a beautiful village in the north of China. There have been a lot of changes in my hometown.
In the past, it was very small. Because there was a small river across the village, the traffic was not convenient. There were no trees on the mountains. The rubbish was everywhere. The air pollution was very serious.
But now, the government built a bridge over the river and people walked out of the mountains. People are getting richer and richer. Trees, flowers and birds are everywhere. The river is clear. The sky is blue. The air is fresh. Near the village, the government also built a large park which is a good place for people to relax.
Thanks to the government and the hard-working neighbors, my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful. I love my hometown. We are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中给出的三个要点，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我美丽的家乡”来引出下文中对三个要点的描述；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“过去、现在和感想”三方面入手，重点介绍自己的家乡；
③第三步，书写结语。表达对家乡的爱。
[亮点词汇]
①in the past 在过去
②thanks to 幸亏
③so as to 为了
[高分句型]
①Because there was a small river across the village, the traffic was not convenient. （because引导的原因状语从句）
②Near the village, the government also built a large park which is a good place for people to relax.（which引导的定语从句）
13．（2022秋·江苏淮安·九年级统考期中）梁启超先生曾经告诉我们“少年强则国强”，为了充分发挥优秀少年的榜样和引领作用，现《学英语》杂志社正开展“最美少年”评选活动，你班决定推选Millie参加本次评选，请根据下表用英文写一封推荐信。
性格 有条理：她所有东西井然有序。
勤奋：花许多时间帮助我们的班级事务。
谦虚：……
喜好 喜欢阅读，因为可以给她的身心带来安宁；
画画有天赋，因为画画使她放松，让她的生活更有趣。
事迹 无论何时有余钱，她捐给有需要的人；
经常帮助缺课同学的学业。
梦想 ……
注意：
（1）词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）内容必须包括表格中的要点，可适当发挥，使短文完整、流畅。
（3）文章中不得出现学校名以及同学老师的真实姓名。
Dear Sir or Madam,
We are writing to recommend Millie in our class as “The Most Beautiful Youth” in our school.____________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
We think Millie is the most suitable person for this award. We hope that you agree with us.
Yours sincerely,
Cindy
【参考答案】
Dear Sir or Madam，
We are writing to recommend Millie in our class as “The Most Beautiful Youth” in our school. Millie is well-organized, so all her things are put in order. She is hard-working. She often spends a lot of time helping us with class affairs. She is modest. She never shows off when she gets good grades. Millie likes reading because it brings her peace of mind and body. She has a talent for drawing because it relaxes her and makes her life more interesting. Whenever she has extra money, she always gives it to someone who needs it. She often helps absent classmates with their studies. Her motto is “Helping others is helping yourself.” She wants to be a scientist in the future.
We think Millie is the most suitable person for this award. We hope that you agree with us.
Yours sincerely,
Cindy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表明写作意图；
第二步，介绍Millie的性格、爱好、梦想等内容；
第三步，书写结语，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①well-organized整洁的
②show off炫耀
③talent天分
[高分句型]
①Whenever she has extra money, she always gave it to someone who needs it.（定语从句）
②Millie likes reading because it brings her peace of mind and body.（原因状语从句）
14．（2022秋·山东枣庄·九年级统考期中）走在快速发展道路上的中国，正在世界悄然崛起。正所谓“少年强则国强”，国家需要我们新一代努力学习。假设你是Lin Tao，你的好友Bob很想知道你是如何变得越来越好的，请从学习、生活、健康等方面向你的朋友Bob介绍一下你这几年的变化。
要求：
(1) 学习、生活、健康等至少三方面，要点齐全，句型合理。
(2) 词数100左右，书写工整,可适当发挥。
Dear Bob，
Long time no see. How are you going these days
I know that you are taller and taller now. I have also changed a lot.__________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Lin Tao
【参考答案】
Dear Bob,
Long time no see. How are you going these days
I know that you are taller and taller now. I have also changed a lot.
After entering Grade Nine, many changes have taken place in my study. I used to play sports after school, but now I don’t have time to do it anymore. I’m really busy with my lessons. With the help of my English teacher, I have made much progress in English, which I used to be weak at.
Besides, I’m more outgoing than I used to be. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of people. But now I can give a speech in public. I’ve also made many friends.
What’s more, I’ve had a healthy diet. I eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food every day. I also run for 15 minutes every morning, which makes my body stronger.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Lin Tao
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：这是一篇书信作文，为应用文；
② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”、“现在完成时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：文中涉及多个时态，注意区分；写作内容重点突出变化（变好）。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学习方面的变化；
第二步，介绍生活方面的变化；
第三步，介绍健康方面的变化。
[亮点词汇]
① used to 过去常常
② am busy with 忙于
③ with the help of 在……帮助之下
④ made much progress in 取得很大进步
⑤ in public 当众
[高分句型]
With the help of my English teacher, I have made much progress in English, which I used to be weak at.（定语从句）
15．（2022秋·浙江金华·九年级校联考期中）当前，随着网络的发展，许多学生沉溺于智能手机（smartphones）。针对这一现象，学校将组织开展一次“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇演讲稿参加学校的“英语活动周”活动。
Behaviors (行为) spend much time playing games, feel sleepy in class
Disadvantages be bad for eyes, be harmful to study
Suggestions keep away from smart phones, communicate with families more, ...
要求：
(1) 字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部要点，适当发挥；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称；
(3) 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Girls and boys,
With the development of the Internet, plenty of students have smart phones. ___________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【参考答案】
Girls and boys,
With the development of the Internet, plenty of students have smart phones. They often spend so much time in playing games that they feel very tired during the day. Some students don’t finish their homework on time and some even sleep in class. Besides, smart phones do harm to our health and study. Some students’ eyesight is becoming poorer and poorer.
To avoid these disadvantages, I think we should make some changes. First of all, we should keep away from smart phones and work hard. Besides, stay with our family or friends if we are free and talk with them about our daily life, feelings and so on. Finally, take an active part in all kinds of activities which can make you full of energy, such as playing basketball singing songs.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学生使用手机做的事情；
第二步，介绍这样做的坏处；
第三步，最后给出一些建议。
[亮点词汇]
①on time准时
②make some changes做出改变
③keep away from远离
④take an active part in积极参加
[高分句型]
①To avoid these disadvantages, I think we should make some changes.（不定式表目的）
②Besides, stay with our family or friends if we are free and talk with them about our daily life, feelings and so on（条件状语从句）
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1．（2022秋·山东威海·九年级统考期中）最近你和父母针对“青少年该不该在周末与朋友外出”这一问题进行了讨论，双方发表了不同的观点。请根据下面的要求，以“Should Teenagers Go out with Friends on Weekends ”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1. 所写内容需包括父母的想法和你的想法至少各两条，并说明理由；
2. 词数100左右；
3. 字迹工整，内容完整连贯，语言准确规范；
4. 作文中不要出现真实校名和姓名；
5. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Should Teenagers Go out With Friends on Weekends
Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with friends on weekends. ___________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2022秋·山东枣庄·九年级统考期中）苏州，丝绸的故乡，以生产蚕丝被 (silk quilt) 而闻名。请你根据下面表格的内容写一篇介绍苏州蚕丝被的文章，90词左右。开头已给出。
What the product is silk quilts
What it is made of silk
What it is made by factory workers
Where it is made Suzhou
What it can do keep you warm and comfortable
Why it is special made of real silk that is soft, light and comfortable; also decorated with beautiful patterns
Suzhou is famous for its silk quilts.____________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2022秋·河南洛阳·九年级统考期中）为了让学生更快地适应九年级的学习生活，学校将在这个星期组织学习交流活动。请根据以下表格提示，以“How to Learn Wisely ”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的建议。
Tips Listen to teachers carefully in class.
Review the notes before exams.
Do homework actively after class.
…
要求：
1）参考表格内容；可适当发挥；
2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
4）词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How to Learn Wisely
Hello, everyone! All of us want to learn wisely and get good grades._________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（2022秋·湖北襄阳·九年级统考期中）每个人在成长过程中会经历无数次的改变。如：一本书，一部电影，一席话，或一次经历……都会改变你的认知，兴趣爱好，甚至性格等等，它们会让你进步成长。请记叙一次你的变化经历。
包括以下要点：
1. 你的变化是什么？
2. 你是如何改变的？
3. 这次变化对你产生的影响或你有何感悟？
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
5．（2022秋·贵州毕节·九年级统考期中）国家颁布了“双减”政策，即减作业，减培训等，极大地保证了中小学生的身心健康。各学校也采取了一系列有利于学生健康成长的措施。请以“Changes in My School Life”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
1.你的变化（睡眠、课外活动、学习、作业、体育锻炼……）；
2.你的感受。
要求：
1.语言通顺、表达清楚、语法正确、书写规范；
2.所写短文必须包括以上所有要点，并作适当发挥，使短文通顺、流畅；
3.不少于80词。标题和首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Changes in My School Life
Because of the Double Reduction policy, every school has taken action to give more time to students so that they can have more free time to relax and exercise. ___________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．（2022秋·山东济宁·九年级统考期中）某英文报社现就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How Can We Keep a Good Relationship with Our Parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文参加此次活动。
提示：
1. 你的父母规矩太多，不理解你，过于强调学习成绩等；
2. 你对这些问题的看法；
3. 你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
要求：
1. 文章需包括提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，条理清楚；
3. 80词左右。
How Can We Keep a Good Relationship with Our Parents
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（2021秋·湖北孝感·九年级统考期中）学校最近就“一个朋友的标准”做了一次问卷调查，在学生们心目中，调查情况大致如下。
请你用英语为你们学校的校报写一篇短文，描述一下调查情况并谈谈你对朋友的理解。
注意：
1）词数：100左右（开头已给出的内容不计入总词数）；
2）内容必须包括上图中的要点，可适当发挥；
3）文章条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺；
4）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
Recently, we have made a survey in our school on what a friend should be like. ________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（2022秋·湖北黄冈·九年级统考期中）中华文化渊源流长，博大精深，展现出了独特的魅力。假如你是魏华，你的外国笔友Mary非常喜欢中国，想对中国文化有进一步的了解。请你从以下几个方面，给她写一封电子邮件，向她介绍中国的文化特色。
提示：
1. Clothes: Tang costume, cheongsam（旗袍）...
2. 名胜古迹（places of interest）: Tian’anmen Square, the Great Wall ...
3. Foods: dumplings, mooncakes, zongzi ...
4. Opera: Beijing Opera ...
5. Festivals: the Spring Festival, the Mid-Autumn Festival
6. Others: ...
写作要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的校名，人名等个人信息；
2. 根据上面提示，至少要写两个方面的内容（可适当发挥）；
3. 90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
How is it going __________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours,
Wei hua
9．（2022秋·河南洛阳·九年级统考期中）假如你是李华，本学期你们学校将与社区共同举办“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”系列活动。下周六主题为“品民俗话端午”，你打算邀请你的笔友Paul一起参加。请用英语写一封100词左右的电子邮件，告诉他活动的时间、地点、活动安排以及需要做什么准备。
1.要点：
1) When and where will the activity be held
2) What will you do in the activity
3) What do you advise Paul to prepare for it
2.要求：
1)100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2)要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3)条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
Dear Paul,
How is it going I’m writing to invite you to take part in our activity to welcome Dragon Boat Festival. ____
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I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2022秋·河南驻马店·九年级统考期中）假如你是韩雪，上个月你参加了几次学校的英语角活动。请你根据以下要点和要求把参加活动的情况用英语写一封电子邮件告诉你的笔友Linda。
1.要点：
1）活动时间及地点：每周五下午，学校图书馆；
2）参加人员：一些学生和教师；
3）活动内容：阅读英语报纸，练习口语，学唱英语歌曲；
4）感受：口语有所提高，不怕在课堂上讲英语了……
2.要求：词数100左右，电子邮件的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
How is it going these days I’m glad you’re interested in our English Corner.
I’d like to tell you something about it. ________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．（2022秋·湖北黄冈·九年级校联考期中）假设你是李华，你的外国网友Mary在网上看到几幅中国剪纸（Chinese paper cutting），Mary对此很感兴趣，给你发来邮件询问有关中国剪纸的信息，请你根据下面的提示给她回复一封电子邮件。
提示：
1. Long history; about 2,000 years
2. Very popular; in many parts of China
3. Different shapes: birds, flowers, animals
4. Where do people put Chinese paper cutting
要求：
1. 电子邮件需包括所给提示，可适当发挥；
2. 80—100词，格式、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
I’m so glad that you want to know about Chinese paper cutting. Now I’ll tell you something about it._______
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Best wishes!
Li Hua
12．（2022秋·山东菏泽·九年级统考期中）为迎接党的二十大的召开，某英文报刊环保专栏近期正在举办英语征文竞赛，其主题是赞美家乡。假设你是李明，居住在中国北方一个美丽的村庄。请你根据下面的图片及要点提示，写一篇以“My beautiful hometown”为题的短文投稿。
要点提示：
1.过去的家乡：山、河流、垃圾……
2.现在的家乡：青山、绿水、空气、花……
3.你的感想
写作要求：
1.文中必须包含所有提示要点，并适当发挥；
2.100词左右，文中不得出现真实人名、地名等相关信息。
My beautiful hometown
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13．（2022秋·江苏淮安·九年级统考期中）梁启超先生曾经告诉我们“少年强则国强”，为了充分发挥优秀少年的榜样和引领作用，现《学英语》杂志社正开展“最美少年”评选活动，你班决定推选Millie参加本次评选，请根据下表用英文写一封推荐信。
性格 有条理：她所有东西井然有序。
勤奋：花许多时间帮助我们的班级事务。
谦虚：……
喜好 喜欢阅读，因为可以给她的身心带来安宁；
画画有天赋，因为画画使她放松，让她的生活更有趣。
事迹 无论何时有余钱，她捐给有需要的人；
经常帮助缺课同学的学业。
梦想 ……
注意：
（1）词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）内容必须包括表格中的要点，可适当发挥，使短文完整、流畅。
（3）文章中不得出现学校名以及同学老师的真实姓名。
Dear Sir or Madam,
We are writing to recommend Millie in our class as “The Most Beautiful Youth” in our school.____________
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We think Millie is the most suitable person for this award. We hope that you agree with us.
Yours sincerely,
Cindy
14．（2022秋·山东枣庄·九年级统考期中）走在快速发展道路上的中国，正在世界悄然崛起。正所谓“少年强则国强”，国家需要我们新一代努力学习。假设你是Lin Tao，你的好友Bob很想知道你是如何变得越来越好的，请从学习、生活、健康等方面向你的朋友Bob介绍一下你这几年的变化。
要求：
(1) 学习、生活、健康等至少三方面，要点齐全，句型合理。
(2) 词数100左右，书写工整,可适当发挥。
Dear Bob，
Long time no see. How are you going these days
I know that you are taller and taller now. I have also changed a lot.__________________________________
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Yours,
Lin Tao
15．（2022秋·浙江金华·九年级校联考期中）当前，随着网络的发展，许多学生沉溺于智能手机（smartphones）。针对这一现象，学校将组织开展一次“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇演讲稿参加学校的“英语活动周”活动。
Behaviors (行为) spend much time playing games, feel sleepy in class
Disadvantages be bad for eyes, be harmful to study
Suggestions keep away from smart phones, communicate with families more, ...
要求：
(1) 字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部要点，适当发挥；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称；
(3) 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Girls and boys,
With the development of the Internet, plenty of students have smart phones. ___________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
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