Module 12 Save our world 书面表达 专练（含解析）外研版版英语九年级上册

Module 12 Save our world 书面表达 专练（含解析）外研版版英语九年级上册
1．植树节期间，学校英语节将举行以“Protecting Trees”为主题的征文比赛，请根据以下两幅图，结合某些地方、某些人的做法写一篇文章，谈谈你的观点。
要求：
1)词数80—100；
2)包含图片中提到的信息，可适当拓展；
3)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息。
参考词汇：Tree Planting Day植树节
Protecting Trees
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2．根据图片提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的作文。
要求:1)结合图意,围绕出行方式、通讯工具及空气质量展开叙述,可适当发挥；
2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
Fifteen years ago Now
Great changes have taken place since I was born.
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3．说到垃圾分类，有些人还是有点懵。我们的习大大说："普遍推行垃圾分类制度，关系13亿多人生活环境改善，关系垃圾能不能减量化、资源化、无害化处理。"如果邀请你来进入自己所在社区，介绍垃圾分类的好处。请你根据下图所示，同时提出若干条可行的建议，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你的看法。词数80左右。
Hello, ladies and gentlemen! I'm so honored to be here. Sorting waste is meaningful to our daily life.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．为配合乐山市开展创建“全国文明城市”（build a national civilized city）活动，我校将举办以“How to Behave（表现）Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。假如你是Li Hong，请根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。
提示：
1.衣着整洁，不穿奇装异服（fancy dress）；
2.保持环境卫生，不乱扔垃圾；
3.待人说话有礼貌，“请；谢谢，对不起”，乐于助人；
4.遵守交通规则，不闯红灯（run the red light）
要求：
1.文章必须包括所给提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；
3.词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Behave Well
Leshan is building a national civilized city. As students, we should try our best to behave well.
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By Li Hong
5．生态旅游要求游客在旅游时不破坏当地的环境，越来越多的游客都开始有意识的帮助保护当地的自然环境，请你根据提示用英文来介绍生态旅游需要遵守的规则。
提示：（1)将垃圾带走。
（2)不要在森林里生火。
（3)只能走有标记的小路。
（4)不要污染河水。
（5)不要用刀在树上乱刻。
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6．我们生活的地球正面临着巨大的环境压力，如空气污染、水污染、固体废弃物污染、动物濒临灭绝等问题。因此，将环保行动渗透到日常生活是我们每个人的责任。请你选择其中的一个问题，自拟题目，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，谈谈引起此问题的原因，并倡导公众如何从点滴做起来解决问题，使我们的世界变得更美好。
1.首先请选择你要讨论的环境问题： _________
2.引起此问题的原因：_________
3.如何从生活的点滴做起来解决问题：_________
注意：1.词数不少于80词；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息
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7．近年来，环境污染问题已经成为全社会关注的焦点，越来越多的人开始意识到环境的重要性。作为二十一世纪的一名中学生，保护环境我们责无旁贷。请以 “Let’s Protect the Earth”为题，写一篇短文，让更多的人来参与拯救地球。
写作要求：1、词数80—100词；
2、文中不能出现真实的学校名称和姓名。
Let’s Protect the Earth
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8．（B）今年7月1日，上海市正式实施《上海市生活垃圾管理条例》，自此，垃圾分类引人热议。究其实质，垃圾分类反映的是我们对保护周围环境的一种态度。作为一名中学生，我们能为环境做些什么力所能及的事情呢？
请以“What can we do to protect the environment ”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：1. 条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 100词左右。
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9．习近平总书记提出"绿水青山就是金山银山", 这是中国生态文明建设的目标。保护环境, 从我做起。请结合自己的生活实际, 写出四种保护环境的具体做法及这样做的目的。
注意: 1. 行文连贯, 内容完整。
2. 字数80100词左右。
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息。（姓名、校名和地名）
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10．假定你是李华Li Hua，你的英国朋友Peter给你发来微信，想了解一下你的家乡自“十九大(the 19th National Congress of the Communist Party of China)”以来所发生的变化，请你用英文给他回复。
内容如下：
1.精准扶贫(targeted poverty reduction)效果良好：政府在教育上投入大量的资金;贫困户重建了新房子；
2.环境保护得到了明显改善；
3.未来一定更加美好。
参考词汇：great change, Many poor families, get effective help from（得到……很大帮助）replace(代替) environment, spend…on
写作要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数 100词左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。)
Dear Peter,
I’m glad that you are caring about the development of my hometown. Now I will tell you something about it.
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Please come to visit my hometown in the near future.
Yours,
Li Hua
11．今年5月5日是星期六，天气晴朗，你班组织了一次到公园开展义务劳动的活动。请你根据所提示的要点，用英语写一篇日记。
1. 上午8:00在校门口集合后骑自行车到人民公园；
2. 同学们有的浇树、淋花, 有的清扫路面，有的收集垃圾；
3. 同学们还告知人们保护环境的重要性，不少人也加入到我们的行列；
4. 大家虽然很累，但都很开心。
写作要求：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 注意日记的格式，内容须包括所有要点，但不要逐句翻译；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，但不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。
参考词汇：water（淋水、浇水），collect the rubbish（收集垃圾）
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参考答案：
1．例文：
Protecting Trees
As we know, trees are very important to humans. First of all, they benefit our health. They send out oxygen for us to breathe. We can’t live without trees. Also, trees can beautify our environment. In addition, trees can also prevent wind and fix sand. For the future of the earth and humans, we must try our best to protect trees. In my hometown, people used to cut down trees to make money. Some children scribbled on the tree. These behaviors seriously affect the growth of trees. We must make the laws. Don’t cut down trees at will. Don’t scribble on the tree. We must protect the trees. At the same time, we must plant as many trees as possible on Tree Planting Day. Only in this way can we live happily in the beautiful world.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文的说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据题目图片提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍树木在生活中的作用；
第二步，介绍人们乱砍滥伐的行为；
第三步，最后呼吁大家应该多植树，共同保护树木。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best to do尽全力做某事
② cut down砍倒
③ at the same time与此同时
[高分句型]
①Only in this way can we live happily in the beautiful world.（倒装句）
2． Great changes have taken place since I was born.
Fifteen years ago, most people rode bikes when travelling for a short distance. Because there weren’t many cars, the air was fresh. And people kept in touch with each other mainly by telephone.
Now, many people own cars as well as cellphones which are widely used to chat on QQ, do shopping, etc. Lives seem easier than before, but too many cars make traffic heavier, and air pollution is getting worse.
To live a better life, we still have a lot to do.
【详解】这篇作文要求我们以Great changes have taken place since I was born为题目，介绍15年来我们的社会发生的变化。题目中用图片的形式给我们展示了这些变化，从三个方面来介绍：出行方式、通讯工具和空前质量，我们应用正确的英语将图片的内容表达出来。写作时，需要注意文章的结构，这篇作文可以分段写，先介绍15年前人们的生活情况，另起一段介绍现在的情况。这样文章的结构比较清晰，层次比较清楚。注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译。英语的句子结构主要为主谓宾结构和主系表结构，写作时要从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型表达。通过审题可知，这篇作文应以一般过去时态和一般现在时态为主，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态。文章中使用一些较好的句型和短语，语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯，表达流畅，提升文章档次。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文主题明确，符合题目要求。内容完整、充实，包含了题目要求的所有信息。其次短文结构清晰，层次清楚，文章共分成两段，第一段介绍了过去人们的生活状态，从题目要求的三个方面进行了介绍。第二段介绍了现在的变化，跟第一段的内容对应。另外短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章第一段使用了一般过去时态，第二段用了一般现在时态，语法规范，谓语动词的形式变化也很准确。短文中还使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如Fifteen years ago, most people rode bikes when travelling for a short distance.中连词when后加现在分词形式作状语；Because there weren’t many cars, the air was fresh中使用了Because引导的原因状语从句；And people kept in touch with each other mainly by telephone、Now, many people own cars as well as cellphones which are widely used to chat on QQ, do shopping, etc.中短语keep in touch和as well as以及定语从句的使用等等。这些复合句和复杂句式提升了文章的档次，使文意连贯、流畅。
3．例文：
Hello, ladies and gentlemen! I'm so honored to be here. Sorting waste is meaningful to our daily life. I would like to share the ideas about how to do it with you all.
Sorting waste can save energy. It is necessary for us to reuse some of it, such as using the both sides of paper. Sorting waste can reduce pollution. We shouldn’t pour non-recyclable or harmful waste directly into the environment. Last but not least, to sort waste is to respect what the dustmen do for us.
I think sorting waste is the most helpful way to protect the environment. Actions speak louder than words. Let’s have a try.
【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求你根据所给图示，介绍垃圾分类的好处并提出一些可行的建议，谈谈自己的看法，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来对垃圾分类提出一些可行的建议；时态采用一般现在时为主；提出建议时，应详细具体，叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
4．例文
How to Behave Well
Leshan is building a national civilized city. As students, we should try our best to behave well.
We shouldn’t wear fancy dress, and it’s a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. We can help keep our city clean every day. Don’t throw litter about. We should be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. It’s good manners to say “Thank you”, “Sorry” and “Please” and so on. We should also obey traffic rules, and not run the red light. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we’d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.
If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.
By Li Hong
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“如何举止得体”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段根据提示内容介绍如何举止得体；最后一段表达自己的希望。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
5．(1) Take the rubbish away.
(2) Don’t make a fire in the forest.
(3) Only walk marked paths.
(4) Don’t pollute the river.
(5) Don’t carve on the tree with a knife.
【解析】略
6．例文
Air Pollution
The air is badly polluted. Here are some reasons. First, the factories that burn coal pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. Second, more and more people take cars to school or work. Third, some people smoke.
There are some methods to solve the problem. First of all, we should ask the factories to stop giving out black smoke into air. Next, we’d better ride bikes or walk instead of driving to school. The advantages of bike riding or walking are that it’s good for health and it doesn’t cost anything. If it’s far, I suggest we should take the bus. Besides, I think smokers shouldn’t smoke in public. What’s more, it’s a good idea to plant more trees and flowers. Planting trees not only makes air cleaner, but also makes our environment more beautiful. Finally, we need to recycle books and stop using paper napkins. That can help us cut down fewer and fewer trees.
I think everyone should play a part in solving the air pollution. I’m sure that our actions can make a difference and lead to a better future.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给问题，针对某个环境问题，自拟题目，介绍引起这个问题的原因，并倡导公众如何从点滴做起来解决问题。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时可分为三段式，第一段介绍引起此问题的原因；第二段介绍解决问题的方法；第三段呼吁大家都应该参与解决问题以及憧憬。行文时可适当发挥，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
7．例文：
Let’s Protect the Earth
As we know, we have only one earth. We should protect it. As students, what should we do
First, we should know and let more people know the importance of environmental protection. Second, in order to reduce air pollution, it is better to go to school by bus, by bike, on foot or other public transportation instead of using private cars. Third, there are four categories of waste: recyclable, harmful, dry and wet waste. We should learn how to sort garbage and use few plastic bags. At last, we should protect wild animals and do not eat them.
If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best to protect the earth.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“Let’s Protect the Earth”写一篇短文，让越来越多的人开始意识到环境的重要性，使更多的人来参与拯救地球。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，第一段进行总述，第二段讲述我们应该做什么来保护地球，第三段发出呼吁。写作时要运用不同的句式和连词，要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，使文章层次清晰，要注意涵盖所给提示，无单词拼写和语法错误。
8．例文：
What can we do to protect the environment
Protecting the environment is more and more important in our daily life. As students, there are many things we can do to protect the environment. We can plant more trees and protect birds and other small animals. We can develop good habits, such as do not litter, do not easily produce garbage, learn to classify waste treatment and refuse to use disposable items. We can read more books and articles on environmental protection, and achieve environmental protection everywhere and everything in our life. Besides doing this, we can also influence others, so that others also pay attention to environmental protection and attach importance to environmental protection.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目是一篇话题作文。要求以“What can we do to protect the environment ”为题，以初中生视角写我们能为环境做些什么力所能及的事情。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来提议，时态以一般现在时为主。要紧扣主题“保护环境”来行文，要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
9．例文
As we all know, environment is important for everyone. There is something we can do to protect it in our daily life.
First, we can turn off the light as well as other appliances when we are not using them. It can help us save the energy. Secondly, recycle the waste water, paper and other waste so that we can reuse them. We can turn the waste into useful things and make full use of them. It’s good for our planet to reduce so much waste stress. What’s more, when we go shopping, we had better use our bag instead of using the plastic bag. Finally, planting more trees is also a good way to make our world greener and fresher. More trees can reduce the air pollution.
In a word, let’s take action to protect the environment.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于话题写作。写作时要注意文章的要求。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式，第一大段说环境的重要性；第二大段陈述生活中我们可以做的4件事来保护环境；第三大段呼吁大家一起保护环境，结构清晰，段落分明。用第一人称来进行写作分析；时态采用一般现在时为主。
3.高分亮点：
短语：as we all know，turn off，turn … into，make full use of，What’s more，in a word。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句，there be句型，so that引导的目的状语从句。
10．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad that you are caring about the development of my hometown. Now I will tell you something about it.
Great changes have taken place since the19th National Congress of the Communist Party of China. Many poor families have got effective help from local government and have improved their life greatly. Many old houses are replaced by new tall buildings. Our government has spent more money on education in the past few years. More and more poor students have got money from our country.
The environment becomes better and better. The rivers were really dirty. The air has become really polluted. Luckily, everything has changed. The rivers are getting clearer and clearer. The air is fresher. The sky is filled with white and cleaner clouds.
I think if we pull together, our country will become better and better.
Please come to visit my hometown in the near future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求写一篇英语短文来阐述家乡的变化；要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态以现在完成时和一般现在时为主；可采用5段落格式，第一段：文章已给出；第二段：阐述在政府的帮助下，发生哪些变化；第三段：阐述环境的变化；第四段：表达美好愿望；第五段：欢迎对方来自己家乡。
11．One possible version:
Saturday May 5th,2019 Sunny/Fine
Today, all the students in our class went to the park to do some cleaning.
First, we met at the school gate at 8:00, and then we went to the People’s Park by bike. As soon as we got there, we began to work. Some watered the trees and flowers, and others swept the roads and collected the rubbish. At the same time, we told people it’s very important to protect the environment, and many people joined us.
Although everyone was tired today, we felt very happy because we did a meaningful job.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记，属于日记写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，简述今天发生的事情；
第二步，根据提示的要点，按照时间先后顺序讲述今天的活动行程，要列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发活动带来的感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①do some cleaning打扫卫生
②at the same time同时
[高分句型]
①As soon as we got there, we began to work.（as soon as引导时间状语从句）
②At the same time, we told people it’s very important to protect the environment, and many people joined us.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句，it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
③Although everyone was tired today, we felt very happy because we did a meaningful job.（although引导让步状语从句，because引导原因状语从句）
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