Unit 5 What are the shirts made of 写作 专练（含解析）人教新目标（Go for it）版 英语九年级全册
1．书面表达
随着网络技术的不断发展，人们传递情感的方式也在不断变化。假如你是王强，上周你就“使用纸质卡片还是电子卡片？”这个话题在班级展开了一项调查。请你给China Daily报社写一封信，介绍此次调查的结果并说说你的观点。
约30%的同学 (纸质卡片) 1. 手工制作，表达真情 2. 携带方便，便于保存 3. ……
约70%的同学 (电子卡片) 1. 信息量大，传递快捷 2. 节约纸张，利于环保 3. ……
你的看法 1. …… 2. ……(至少两条)
要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3. 词数：100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Editor，
I am writing to tell you about the survey I've made on “Using paper cards or e cards？” in our class.
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Yours sincerely,
Wang Qiang
2．用英语讲好中国故事！ 提升语言能力，传播中国声音。假设China Daily网站中的Culture版块中有一项“Tell a Chinese traditional story”征文活动。假如你是李华，请你以“My favorite Chinese traditional story”为题写一篇英语文章进行投稿。
提示：
1. 描述故事内容。
2. 故事带给你的影响和启发。
要求：
1.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，字数100词左右。
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3．中国结是一种传统的中国艺术形式，在明朝开始流行。参考所给词汇写一篇介绍中国结的文章。
要求：
1.70词左右；
2.注意字迹工整，语句通顺，句意完整。
参考词汇：Chinese Knots（中国结），the Ming Dynasty（明朝）， decorate（装饰）， thread（线）
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4．为了实践社会主义核心价值观，你校学生会决定举办以“文明礼仪伴我行”为主题的征文比赛。请你根据以下要点提示及要求，写一篇英语短文参赛。
要点提示：
1. 尊敬（respect）父母，帮助他们做家务；
2. 对人有礼貌，诚实友好，帮助他人；
3. 不在公共场合大声讲话，不乱扔垃圾；
4. 节约粮食，节约用水；
……
要求：
1. 短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻译），并在此基础上适当发挥；
2. 80词左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
As a middle school student, we should have good manners.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word, good manners can make a difference and lead to a better future.
5．随着中国经济的腾飞，越来越多的中国人意识到保护非物质文化遗产的重要性。请你以“Chinese Xuan Paper”为题，写一篇120词左右的英语文章，介绍中国宣纸。
参考词汇:稻草 rice straw；书画 calligraphy and painting；文人墨客 poets and writers；气味 smell；青檀qingtan；工序 procedure
place 安徽泾县
Materials used 竹子，青檀，稻草
How to make 手工制作，十八道工序，约一年时间
Be used for 最好的书画用纸
Features 植物的气味，深受文人墨客喜爱，久存不坏，越久越贵
More information 盛于唐朝……
【写作微技能:make an outline】
Chinese Xuan Paper is produced in Jing county, Anhui.
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6．假如你是王华。最近China Daily就“保护中国传统文化”这一话题面向社会征稿。请你用英语给编辑写一封信，谈谈你自己的想法。
注意：
1．文章必须包括图中两方面的内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇供选择使用；
2．文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3．词数：80~100；
4．文章的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
I’m writing to you to talk about my opinions about protecting the traditional Chinese culture. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang Hua
7．在上周的实践活动课上，你们班同学对网上购物这一现象进行了调查。你们在某小区抽取了100名年龄在15岁到65岁之间的受访者。下图是此次活动的统计结果。其中，20%的受访者从未有过网上购物的经历，26%的受访者表示经常在网上购物。
请你用两段话写一篇英语短文：第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容；第二段介绍你自己的购物习惯，并说明理由。
要求：1. 根据信息提示，把握要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名；
3. 词数不少于70。文章的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Last week, we asked 100 people between 15 and 65 about online shopping in the neighborhood. Here are the results._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．中国传统文化中蕴含着丰富的智慧与处世理念。古语有云: “单丝不成线, 独木不成林。”请你结合下图, 以Working with others 为题, 联系身边事例，写一篇约110词的英语短文，让外国朋友了解中国文化中“团结一致、齐心协力”这一理念。
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9．英语课中老师要求同学们对感兴趣的学习话题进行调查，你选定了“如何学习中国古诗词”这个主题。请你根据下面图表统计的调查结果，用英语写一份调查报告，介绍同学们学习中国古诗词的各种方法，并谈谈你的学习建议。
注意：
(1) 调查报告应包括所有要点；
(2) 词数80左右（调查报告的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
(3) 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Chinese poetry is a treasure and a symbol of Chinese culture. Good ways to learn Chinese poems can help us pass on Chinese culture. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．假如你是玲玲，远在美国的笔友Kevin对中国传统文化十分感兴趣。恰逢第十九届亚运会纪念币（Asian Games Coins）发布，颇具中国特色。你打算挑选其中一枚作为礼物赠予Kevin，并写一封110词的信介绍礼物及你的选择理由。
注意：文中不能出现真实的个人身份信息。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Kevin,
I’ve known that you’re always interested in Chinese traditional culture.
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Yours,
Lingling
参考答案：
1．Dear Editor，
I am writing to tell you about the survey I've made on “Using paper cards or e cards” in our class.
About 30% of the students prefer to use paper cards. First of all, they are made by hand and they can express people's true feelings. Second, they are easy to take and can be kept for long. Third, people can read them without computers.
However, around 70% of the students prefer to use e cards. For one thing, e cards can carry lots of information and people can send them quickly. For another, using e cards can save paper so that it's good for environmental protection. What's more, people can design the e cards as they like.
As for me, I think we should use e cards more because they can not only help people save money but also protect the earth.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Qiang
【详解】本文属于话题作文，介绍“使用纸质卡片还是电子卡片”的调查结果以及你的观点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如prefer, be made by, be good for, as for me, be easy to do, first of all, second, third, however, what’s more, for one thing, for another等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
2．例文：
My favorite Chinese traditional story
There are many traditional stories in China. Among all of the stories, I like YuGong moves the mountains best.
Once upon a time, there was an old man called YuGong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. YuGong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a god was so moved that he took the mountains away.
The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求以“我最喜爱的中国传统故事”为题写一篇英文征文，需按照提示内容进行写作。
2.写作指导：本文以第三人称进行写作，描述故事内容时采用一般过去时，表达感想时采用一般现在时。写作时可分为三段，第一段引出主题，第二段叙述故事内容，第三段陈述哲理启发。注意时态的变换和主谓一致，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
3．例文
The Chinese Knot is a traditional art form of China. It’s famous in China and has a long history. Every knot is made with a single rope or thread. Every knot is named by its specific form and meaning. People used it to record events. But now it’s mainly used as a decoration. It’s seen as a symbol of happiness and good luck. We can give it to friends as a gift or hang it in our houses. It has become more and more popular around the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作的中心话题已给出，考生应注意围绕中心话题去写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。介绍中国结。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍中国结是什么，由来，制作方法，它的象征意义。
第三步，书写结语。写出它的受欢迎程度。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional art form传统艺术形式
②is made 被制造
③more and more popular 越来越受欢迎
[高分句型]
① It has become more and more popular around the world.（现在完成时；比较级句型）
②But now it’s mainly used as a decoration. （被动语态）
4．例文：
As a middle school student, we should have good manners.
Firstly, it’s necessary for us to respect our parents, and we can help them do some housework. Secondly, we should be polite and friendly to others. Everyone should be honest. It’s good to help others when they are in trouble. It can also make ourselves happy. Thirdly, we should pay more attention to our behaviour in public. Don’t speak loudly, and never throw litter around. Last but not least, we should save food and water. Don’t take more food than we need and always remember to turn off the tap.
In a word, good manners can make a difference and lead to a better future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇参赛作文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻译），适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山，直接点题，短文已给出；
第二步，具体描述写作内容。从“对待父母和别人的态度、帮助他人、公共场合注意事项、不乱扔垃圾、节约等”几个方面重点介绍中国文明礼仪；
第三步，书写结语。表达文明礼仪的重要性，文章已给出。
[亮点词汇]
① firstly 首先
② help sb do sth 帮某人做某事
③ be polite to sb 对某人有礼貌
④ pay attention to ... 注意……
⑤ last but not least 最后但不是最不重要的
⑥ remember to do sth 记住去做某事
[高分句型]
① it’s necessary for us to respect our parents.（It’s + 形容词 + for sb to do sth. it形式主语句型）
② It’s good to help others when they are in trouble.（when引导时间状语从句）
③ Don’t speak loudly.（祈使句否定句）
5．Chinese Xuan Paper
Chinese Xuan Paper has a history over 1，000 years old. It became popular from Tang Dynasty. The best Chinese Xuan Paper is produced in Jing county，Anhui. It is made from bamboo，qingtan，rice straw and so on. It is the reason why people can smell pleasant smell of plants when using it. However，making Xuan Paper is not an easy job. It can't be made by machines but by hands only. Besides，it needs 18 procedures to make a perfect piece of Xuan Paper. So it's very common to take about one year to complete everything. Xuan Paper is the best paper for calligraphy and paintings so it is always loved by poets and writers both in the past and now. What's more，the calligraphy and paintings on Xuan Paper can be kept and remained for many thousand years but never be destroyed when time goes by. In a word，Chinese Xuan Paper is thought to be one of the greatest treasures in China. And Chinese Xuan Paper also shows the love that all Chinese people have for life and beauty.
【详解】1.通过浏览材料，知道本题目是要求写一篇说明文。2.说明文不同于一般的文学作品，它要求开门见山，第一个句子就可以直奔主题。如：Chinese Xuan Paper has a history over 1,000 years old. 接着就按照表格所给的信息有条理地介绍就行。例如：先介绍宣纸的产地“The best Chinese Xuan Paper is produced in Jing county, Anhui.”然后再介绍宣纸是由什么材料制成的“It is made from bamboo, qingtan, rice straw and so on.”接着介绍它的制作方式“It can't be made by machine but by hands only. Besides, it needs 18 procedures to make a perfect piece of Xuan Paper. So it's very common to take about one year to complete everything.”然后是用途及特点“Xuan Paper is the best paper for calligraphy and paintings so it is always loved by poets and writers both in the past and now. What's more, the calligraphy and paintings on Xuan Paper can be kept and remained for many thousand years but never be destroyed when time goes by.”最后如果你知道的更多，还可以添加更多有关宣纸信息。3.说明文常用一般现在时。
6．例文
Dear editor,
I’m writing to you to talk about my opinions about protecting the traditional Chinese culture. I think it’s necessary for us to protect and inherit it. Here are some reasons.
Firstly, as one of the ancient civilizations in the world, the traditional Chinese culture is foundation of the development of our country, and it can provide spiritual motivation for Chinese economy.
Secondly, it includes many inspiring and shocking events, through which we can learn some useful things to make our country develop more quickly.
Last but not least, it is an important part of Chinese history, and inheriting it may make us stronger and benefit our growth.
I hope Chinese government and citizens join in the campaign of protecting and inheriting traditional Chinese culture. We should make efforts to carry it forward. As a student, we should play a role in protecting the traditional Chinese culture.
Yours,
Wang Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按书信格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头；内容是根据所给的图片内容，就如何“保护中国传统文化”这一话题，用英语给编辑写一封信，谈谈自己的想法。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；首先要提出自己的看法；二、三、四三段给出自己的理由；最后一段是呼吁社会共同参与。
7．例文：
Last week, we asked 100 people between 15 and 65 about online shopping in the neighborhood. Here are the results. We found that 20% of the people do not shop online at all. 35% sometimes shop online, 26% do it often, and 19% always buy things online.
As for me, I often shop online. First, it makes my life much easier and more comfortable. For example, I can get nearly everything from the Internet, such as books, clothes, food and so on. Second, things on the Internet are usually cheaper than those in stores. What’s more, shopping online can save me much time. I don’t need to go to the stores. In a word, I really enjoy this way of shopping.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据图表信息，介绍对网上购物现象的调查和自己的购物习惯及理由，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍图表内容；
第二步，具体介绍自己的购物习惯及喜欢网购的理由。
[亮点词汇]
① not at all一点也不
② as for me对我来说
③ for example例如
④ such as例如
⑤ what’s more除此之外
⑥ in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
We found that 20% of the people do not shop online at all.（that引导的宾语从句）
8．例文：
Working With Others
In our daily life, there are more and more tasks that can’t be finished alone. We must learn to work with others.
In this picture, we can say that three people try to walk to the other side. But if they go alone, they will end up falling into the river and losing their lives. However, they choose to work together and pass through the broken way successfully. In the big earthquake in Wenchuan, Sichuan province, 2008, thousands of people lost their lives. Many people went there to give their hands. Although people still felt sad, their lives returned to normal quickly. Thanks to the cooperation.
Just like the old saying goes, many hands make light work. Let’s work together with others.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文，以“Working with others”为题参照图片中反映的信息并结合身边事例进行分析。写作时需包括图片中反映的信息，并适当拓展。
2.写作指导：本文以第一和第三人称为主，时态为一般现在时及一般过去时（列举事例用）；写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，引入话题；第二段介绍图片信息并结合事例分析；第三段总结全文；保证文章条理清晰，语句通顺。
9．例文：
Chinese poetry is a treasure and a symbol of Chinese culture. Good ways to learn Chinese poems can help us pass on Chinese culture.
To know how my classmates learn Chinese poems, I did a survey. There are forty students in my class. 10% of the students learn Chinese poems by asking the teacher for help. 20% of the students think memorizing poems is a good way to learn. They often spend ten to twenty minutes remembering them every day. About 30% of the students read poems loudly and it really helps. The others agree that studying with a group is the best way to learn Chinese poems.
In my opinion, we can try learning poems with a group because we can discuss the meaning of poems, share ideas, solve problems together and help each other.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求根据下面图表统计的调查结果，就“如何学习中国古诗词”写一份调查报告，介绍同学们学习中国古诗词的各种方法，并谈谈自己的学习建议。
2.写作指导：本文用一般现在时写作。书写时应按图表统计数字介绍同学学习中国古诗词的方法，最后阐述自己学习中国古诗词的建议。书写时要紧扣主题，文句表达力求语法准确、逻辑清楚，内容完整连贯。
10．例文
Dear Kevin,
I’ve known that you’re always interested in Chinese traditional culture. As you know, the 19th Asian Games will take place in Hangzhou in 2022, so the government published some Asian Games Coins, which are full of Chinese culture. I will choose one for you.
I will send you one with a man doing Chinese Kungfu. This coin is made of silver and it looks shiny. I think this coin is best for you to have a better understanding of Chinese culture. First of all, Chinese Kungfu has a long history in China and most of Chinese people can do it. Second, it can remind you to do exercise regularly to keep healthy. Last but not the least, I think Kungfu is loved by the people around the world, so I think it builds a bridge between China and other countries.
Hope you can like this coin. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Lingling
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是从题干中给出的纪念币里挑一个送给朋友，并介绍这个纪念币以及挑选理由，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主。第一段说明自己要送给他一个纪念币；第二段介绍自己挑选的是哪个纪念币以及挑选这个纪念币的理由；第三段表达希望。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
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