牛津深圳版七年级上册Module 1 My life Unit 1 作文范文

一、话题写作
假设你是Alice,Jessica是你新认识的法国朋友。请根据表格中的有关信息,给Jessica写一封回信。
年龄 14岁
家人及其职业 爸爸:警察 妈妈:医生
性格 活泼、乐于助人
爱好 运动、旅游、拍照
经历及愿望 当过志愿者;希望能游历中国,品尝美食
写作要求:
短文必须包含以上表格提示的所有内容,可适当发挥;
2. 50词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
【思路点拨】 第一步: 审题: 人称_________ 时态_________ 第二步: 列提纲。 第1层: 介绍姓名及年龄及个人情况; 参考句型: ① It takes sb. some time to do sth. ② sb.spend some time doing/on sth. 第2层: 介绍家人及其职业。 (建议适当使用并列句) 第3层: 介绍自己的性格。 (建议适当使用复合句) 第4层: 介绍自己的爱好。 参考句型: ① I have many hobbies like… 或者I have many hobbies, such as.…. ② Of all my hobbies,I like…. 第5层: 介绍自己的经历及愿望。参考句型: ① I used to do sth. as.… ② I have ever been to …. ③ I hope… ④ I think.…. 第三步: 列出主要短语和句型。 离……不远 not far away from 走路上学 walk to school / go to school on foot 习惯于做某事 get used to doing sth. 在所有的爱好当中 of all the hobbies 最喜欢做某事 like doing most。 长大 grow up 环游中国 traveling around China 中等身材 medium height 第四步: 运用and,or,so,while,then等连接词将以上要点连成文章,并注意句型多样化。
Dear Jessica,
I'm very glad to receive your letter. I'm also very excited to have you as my pen pal. Now it's my turn to introduce myself.
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Yours,
Alice
Dear Jessica,
I'm very glad to receive your letter. I'm also very excited to have you as my pen pal. Now it's my turn to introduce myself.
I'm fourteen years old and I’m a middle school student. Mys school is not far away from my home. It takes about half an hour to walk to my school. My father is a policeman and my mother is a doctor. I'm a lovely girl who is always ready to help others. I have lots of hobbies like doing sports, taking photos and traveling. Of all my hobbies, I like traveling most because I want to learn new things and have fun. I have been to many countries and I used to work as a volunteer. I think these experiences can help me a lot. I hope to travel around China and eat good food one day.
Yours,
Alice

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