10：【好题精选】书面表达 -2023年九年级下学期英语专题
周周练（第一期）（江苏南通）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．云“百善孝为先”，自古以来“孝文化”承载着中华传统美德。“孝”字老在上，子在下，请结合自身经历，以 “Respecting the elders”为题写一篇短文。
注意：
90词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
内容中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
开头已写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：filial piety 孝顺 virtue 美德 responsibility 责任
Respecting the elders
Through the history, being filial and respectful to the elders has been a traditional virtue of the Chinese nation.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、材料作文
2．你的偶像是谁？你崇拜谁？不同的人有不同的选择。假如你是一位学生，请根据下表的文字提示，谈谈你校同学的偶像观，并适当发表自己的观点。写一篇英语短文。
过去的偶像： 歌星、影视明星 1. 明星看上去很时尚，年轻人总是会模仿； 2. 他们有音乐或表演的天赋，吸引年轻人的眼球； ……
如今的偶像： 科学家、医护人员等 1. 科学家的发明改变了人们的生活方式，提高了人们的生活水平； 2. 医生和护士拯救人们的生命，帮助人们治疗疾病，恢复健康； ……
你的观点 1. 日常生活中辛勤工作的人们也值得我们尊重和崇拜； ……
要求：
1. 文章必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，省略号部分作适当发挥。
2. 词数：90词左右。（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息。
参考词汇：idol偶像 performance 表演 Last week, our school did a survey about “Who is your idol ”. Here are our answers.
In the past, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．你们学校正在推选“阳光少年”，假如你是李雷，你想推荐Sandy，请根据以下信息写一封推荐信：
品 质 自信 不怕在众人面前演讲；……（再举一例）
勤奋 课后经常做额外的作业；……（再举一例）
乐于助人 经常帮助其他同学；……（再举一例）
最爱的颜色 红色和绿色 ……（自拟，分别说明两种颜色的含义）
注意：
1. 段落清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范；
2. 所写内容必须包含表格内所有信息，可适当发挥；
3. 词数90词左右；
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing to recommend Sandy as “The Sunshine Teenager” in our school.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think Sandy is the most suitable person for this award. I hope that you agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Lei
4．每个人心中都有一个崇拜的对象，有时候偶像对青少年影响很大，请根据以下信息提示，以“My favourite star”为题，写一篇关于易烊千玺的文章，词数90左右。
个人信息 出生于2000年11月28日，湖南西部
性格特征 活泼刻苦，从不放弃
演艺生涯 唱跳俱佳，从小就有舞蹈天赋
2019年第一次在电影《少年的你》(Better Days) 中露面， 很多人被他精湛的演技所震撼。
2021年被选为电影《长津湖》(The Battle at Lake Changjin) 主角， 电影界人对他高度评价，被认为是明日的超级巨星。
你的观点 ……(请自拟两点)
My favourite starEveryone has a hero in his heart and my favourite star is Yi Yangqianxi.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．2021年3月30日，教育部发布了《关于进一步加强中小学生睡眠管理工作的通知》，引起了家长、学校和社会的广泛关注和热烈讨论。你校英文广播站Our voice发起学生睡眠情况的专题调查，请以“We need a good sleep”为题，写一篇英文调查报告。
现状与原因 睡眠不足，……；作业负担重，……。
建议与希望 学校 减少作业；制定学校作息时间，……。
家长 督促按时就寝不熬夜；营造温馨舒适的就寝环境。
学生 ……（至少两点）
注意：
（1）要求语句通顺，意思连贯。
（2）词数100个左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。（3）参考词汇：督促(urge)
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．初中三年的学习生活即将结束，请你根据下表中内容要点提示，为学校英语俱乐部写一篇英语短文，为七年级新生在学习生活上提几点建议，并祝福他们在未来的学习生活中过得愉快。
一些建议 学习 1. 找到正确的学习方法，养成良好的学习习惯，比如……
2. 多阅读，了解传统文化和外国文化；
3. 学习中遇到难题时……
生活 1. 多做锻炼，保持健康；
2. 参加兴趣小组，花点时间在兴趣爱好上，因为……
3. 与同学友好相处，不要轻易生气，而是……
希望 ……
要求：
⑴表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2)必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
(3)词数；90词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Welcome to our school! In junior high school, life will be different from before. Here are some suggestions about the study and life for you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．今秋开学起，劳动课将正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。近期Simon所在的英语社团将组织一次以“Let’s enjoy doing housework”为题的英语演讲比赛，假如你是Simon，请根据以下问题提示写一篇演讲稿。
提示：1. Do you think it’s important to do housework Why (at least 2 reasons)
2. Have you ever done housework Please share an experience and your feelings about it.
3. What other kinds of skills would you like to learn Fixing, Cooking, Washing, Gardening, Decorating and so on. (Choose at least one and tell the reason)
注意：1.词数90词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2.讲稿需包括所有问题提示要点，可适当发挥，使讲稿连贯、通顺；
3.稿中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Let’s enjoy doing housework
Dear friends,
It’s my pleasure to say something about doing housework! _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Come on, let’s learn to do housework and enjoy doing it!
8．三年时光，如诗如歌。丰富多彩的校园活动给我们留下了美好的回忆。你曾参加过什么校园活动，有过怎样的经历，又有怎样的收获？请联系自身实际，在下列图示中任选一类或自选一类其他校园活动，用英语写一篇短文。
注意: 1. 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
School activities can make students’ life more colourful. In the past three years, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．劳动 (labor) 是日常生活不可或缺的部分。今年9月，义务教育劳动课程标准开始执行。请你以“labor”为话题，结合生活实际，谈谈参与劳动的重要性。列举你的劳动技能（至少两点）与劳动经历（至少一次），并向同学们发出积极参与劳动的倡议。
注意：
1. 词数90左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
We often hear of the sentence “Labor is a glorious (光荣的) thing.” _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、书信作文
10．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tony对“中国红”一词很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现，请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解。
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
含义 幸福，可以带来好运
使用场所及表达方式 婚礼，春节等，剪纸，中国结，红包，灯笼等
影响 深深地影响每一个中国人
提示词：剪纸 paper-cutting，中国结Chinese knot，红包red packet
Dear Tony,It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about China Red.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about China Red.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案：
1．例文：
Respecting the elders
Through the history, being filial and respectful to the elders has been a traditional virtue of the Chinese nation.
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.
Respecting the old and cherishing the young is a traditional Chinese virtue. I am proud of what I have done for my grandparents.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；要求我们关于“孝”这个这个主题，并联系实际，发表自己的观点。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称为主来叙述；时态采用一般过去时为主；紧贴题目要求和文章主旨；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。
2．例文
Last week, our school did a survey about “Who is your idol ”. Here are our answers.
In the past, we thought singers and movie stars were our idols. They always look so fashionable that young people like following them. Also, they have a gift for singing or acting which always attract young people’s eyes. What’s more, their performances are so relaxing that they make our life colorful.
But now we think scientists and medical workers are our idols. With the development of science and technology, our scientists’ inventions have changed people’s lifestyles and improve people’s living standard. Doctors and nurses save people’s lives, help them treat their illness and keep healthy. When our country and people are in trouble, they help people with wisdom, courage and hard work.
In my opinion, those who work hard in our daily life should be respected and admired. As students, we should learn from them and study hard to be a useful person to the country and society.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
② 时态：时态以一般现在时为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要用第一人称叙述，不要遗漏“提示信息”中我们偶像观的改变，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“上周，我们学校做了一项关于“谁是你的偶像”的调查。以下是我们的答案。在过去，”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“我们过去的偶像观；我们现在的偶像观；你的偶像观”几方面重点介绍偶像观变化的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“作为学生，我们应该向他们学习并且努力学习成为一个对国家和社会有用的人。”的强烈愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① so…that…如此……以至于……
② In my opinion依我看来
[高分句型]
① But now we think scientists and medical workers are our idols.（think后面跟的是一个宾语从句）
② Doctors and nurses save people's lives and help them get out of pain and back to health.（help sb do sth表示“帮着某人做某事”）
3．例文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to recommend Sandy as “The Sunshine Teenager” in our school.
Sandy is full of confidence and is never afraid of giving a speech in public and singing in class. Sandy is also so hard-working that she often does some extra exercises after class and asks teachers for some difficult questions to improve herself. Moreover, she is so helpful a girl that she is always willing to help the students who are absent from school with their lessons and help the teachers with their things. Sandy is good at using colors to express herself. She likes red best as red can help cheer herself up quickly when she is feeling blue. Green is also Sandy’s favorite color because she thinks wearing green can make herself look wiser.
I think Sandy is the most suitable person to be the sunshine teenager. I hope you will agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点均已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏；适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的，推荐Sandy当“阳光少年”；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从Sandy的品质方面和最喜欢的颜色两方面阐述Sandy能当选“阳光少年”的原因；
第三步，书写结语，推荐Sandy当“阳光少年”，希望能够同意。
[亮点词汇]
①give a speech in public 在公众面前演讲
②be willing to 愿意做某事
③be absent from 缺席
④cheer sb. up 使某人振奋起来
[高分句型]
①Moreover, she is so helpful a girl that she is always willing to help the students who are absent from school with their lessons and help the teachers with their things.(定语从句；so…that)
②She likes red best as red can help cheer herself up quickly when she is feeling blue.(as引导原因状语从句)
4．范文：
My favourite star
Everyone has a hero in his heart and my favourite star is Yi Yangqianxi. He was born on November 28, 2000 in the western part of Hunan. He is lively and hard-working. He never gives up easily.
He has many talents such as singing and dancing. When he was young, he had a gift for dancing.
In 2019, he made his first appearance in the film Better Days, many people were amazed by his amazing acting skills. Two years later, he was chosen to play the lead role of The Battle at Lake Changjin. He acts so well that many people in the film industry think highly of him. He is considered as tomorrow’s superstar.
I admire him not only for his success but also for his efforts in this area. I think he is the person who has influenced me most.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态结合“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据表格中的要点提示，详细介绍你最喜欢的明星——易烊千玺。可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，文章开头已给出，承接上文介绍易烊千玺的个人信息和性格特征；
第二步，详细介绍易烊千玺的演艺生涯；
第三步，书写结语。表达你的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①hard-working吃苦耐劳的
②give up放弃
③such as例如
④think highly of 高度评价
⑤be considered as被认为
[高分句型]
①When he was young, he had a gift for dancing.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②He acts so well that many people in the film industry think highly of him.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）
③I think he is the person who has influenced me most.（think后是省略引导词that的宾语从句；从句中包含who引导的定语从句）
5．例文
We need a good sleep
As we know, most of us students don’t have enough sleep. As a result some feel sleepy in class. That’s because we often have too much homework to do and we have to stay up late. On the other hand, some of us don’t have a good living habit, like being crazy about playing computer games at night, It’s also the reason why they don’t sleep well.
To solve the problems and improve our sleep, we should do something and have some charges. First, schools should make a particular timetable for sleep, and teachers should reduce our homework. We can be given talks about the knowledge of sleep. Second. our parents, should urge us to go to bed on time and not stay up late, They also can make us a warm and comfortable sleeping place Finally, as students, we should plan out time carefully and try to finish our homework at school. Moreover we can do some exercise in the day time, it can help us sleep well.
I hope all of us can have a good sleep and grow up healthily.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据表格提示要点，以“We need a good sleep”为题写一篇作文关于中小学需要更好的睡眠。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时行文；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时首先要涵盖要点，在叙述要点时可以使用一些过渡词，如first，second，finally，moreover等使文章更加通顺。最后确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
6．例文
Welcome to our school! In junior high school, life will be different from before. Here are some suggestions about the study and life for you.
Firstly, you will have more subjects to learn, so it is not easy to find good learning methods. Also, you should form good studying habits. In class, you need to listen to the teachers carefully; After class, you need to read more books. In this way, you can learn more about our traditional culture and foreign culture as well. When you have some problems with your study, go to your friends or teachers for help.
Secondly, to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. You can join some clubs in your spare time. It’s important for you to spend some time on your hobbies. That will make your school life more interesting and colourful. To get along well with your classmates, try to avoid getting angry. If you have a problem with some of them, talk about it. It’s wise not to keep it in your mind.
I hope you will have a wonderful school life.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据内容提示，为学校英语俱乐部写一篇英语短文。要包含所有要点，并适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文时态为一般现在时，主要采用第二人称来行文。写作可分为四段式：第一段总体介绍将为其提供一些建议；第二段具体介绍学习上的建议；第三段介绍生活上的建议；最后一段表示祝福。在写作时应该注意符合题意，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
7．Possible versions:
Let’s enjoy doing housework
Dear friends,
It’s my pleasure to say something about doing housework!
I think it’s important for us to do housework. Doing housework can not only teach us how to look after ourselves but also show our love to parents.
I would like to share my own story. One Sunday, I found my bedroom in a mess. So I decided to tidy it up. First, I made the bed and put away my clothes. Next, I swept the floor. Finally, I mopped it. When my parents came in, they were so surprised that they couldn’t help praising me. I felt glad as well as proud.
I also want to learn cooking so that I can make dinner for my parents and myself.
Come on, let’s learn to do housework and enjoy doing it!
【详解】题干解读：本文是提纲类作文，根据提示要点写一篇关于家务劳动的作文，题目是“Let’s enjoy doing housework”。
写作指导：本文应以第一人叙述，时态为一般现在时和一般过去时，叙述做家务的重要性和表达你想学哪种做家务的技能时采用一般现在时，描述做家务的经历时用一般过去时。作文开头和结尾已给出，重点写做家务的重要性，做家务的经历和想学哪种技能。叙述要完整，可适当补充，适当使用连词和副词，注意表达的顺序，保证条理清晰连贯通顺，无语法和单词拼写错误。
8．例文
School activities can make students’ life more colourful. In the past three years, I have got so much from different activities.
Last month, I went on a school trip to Sunshine Zoo with my classmate. The zoo is not far away from our school. We went there by bike. In the zoo, we saw many kinds of animals, such as tigers, lions, pandas, elephants and so on. Among all the animals, I liked monkeys best. They were clever and funny. They jumped around and made people laugh.
During the trip, my classmates and I learned a lot of amazing things about animals. We had a good time. We also knew it was important to protect the animals. It was such a nice trip that we hoped to visit Sunshine Zoo again.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己曾经参加过的一次校园活动。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。本文分为三段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段介绍自己的一次难忘经历；最后一段表达自己的感触。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
9．例文：
We often hear of the sentence “Labor is a glorious (光荣的) thing.” As a middle school student, I also have some labor skills. I can cook meals, clean my room, wash the dishes and so on.
Last weekend, I got up early and cooked noodles for my parents. First, I boiled some water. Then I put some noodles into the pot. About five or six minutes later, I placed them in the bowls and added some salt and oil. When my parents got up, they were surprised and praised me with a big smile. It was the first time I cooked for
them. I felt proud of myself because I could take care of my parents.
Labor is an important part of life. By laboring, we can build up our bodies. Laboring can not only teach students how to do things, but also cultivate their ability to take care of themselves.
Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence and teaches them how to look after themselves. As teenagers, we should take action and do more housework.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出自己的劳动技能、劳动经历以及劳动的重要性和对劳动的倡导等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
10．例文：
Dear Tony,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about China Red.
As we all know, China Red is one of the most popular colours in China, and it is deeply loved by people of all ages. The reason why Chinese people love red is that it stands for happiness and wealth. What’s more, it can bring people good luck. When the Spring Festival is coming, China Red will come into your eyes whenever and wherever you are. When you attend someone’s wedding, what impresses you most is the China Red. On these occasions, China Red is put into many things, such as paper cuttings, Chinese knots, red packets and lanterns, which can be used to expect a promising future. The China Red has deeply affected every Chinese. It is not only a colour but also a kind of Chinese spirit and culture.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about China Red.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封回信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助你的英国朋友Tony，了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，表明很高兴收到对方来信，然后回信告诉他关于“中国红”的事情；
第二步，从地位、含义、使用场所及表达方式和影响四个方面来介绍“中国红”；
第三步，结语已给出，希望回信能对他有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①stand for代表
②on these occasions在这些场合
③put into把……放进
④be used to do习惯于
[高分句型]
①The reason why Chinese people love red is that it stands for happiness and wealth. （that引导表语从句）
②On these occasions, China red is put into many things, such as paper cuttings, Chinese knots, red packets and lanterns, which can be used to expect a promising future. （which引导的非限制性定语从句）
