Unit6 解透单元写作
主题写作—灾害与希望
1.写作任务
假设你是李华，你的家乡发生了地震，于是你的好友Grace向你询问有关情况。你回信告诉她，这场地震造成了很大的损失。但在地震面前，人们团结一心，积极救援，最大限度地降低了损失。请根据以下要点，写一封信介绍有关情况：
（1）地震过后，所到之处一片废墟；
（2）面对灾难，我们并未失去信心，人们展开了积极救援；
（3）我们都对救援人员表示感谢。
注意：（1）词数80左右
（2）开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；
（3）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Grace,
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
2.写作思路
（1）一审：确定写作体裁和主题体裁：应用文——说明信
主题：向朋友介绍地震后的情况
（2）二定：确定时态和人称（与体裁和主题息息相关）
时态：一般过去时（地震已经发生）和一般现在时（对现在情况的评价）
人称：第一人称（I和we）为主，第二人称（you）和第三人称（they）为辅
（3）三明确
明确写作要点：告知地震的基本情况，表达悲伤的心情——具体介绍地震造成的破坏和人们的救援行动→表达对救援人员的感激之情
（4）四分段（与写作要点息息相关）
结合写作要点，主体分为三个段落，其中第二、三段作为文章的主要部分，详细叙述
3素材整理
（1）关键词语
cause, damage, death, lie in ruins, at an end, not all, a great number of, right away, bury, the dead, so...that...，too...to..., so can’t... too...
（2）完成句子
①这次地震造成了很大的破坏和许多人员伤亡。（cause）
It _____ much damage and many injuries and deaths.
②所到之处，我们看见一切都已经变成了废墟，好像
世界到了末日。（In ruins，at an end）
Wherever we went，we found everything ______ ______ ______. It seemed as if the world were______ ______ ______.
③并不是所有的东西都被毁了。（部分否定）
______ ______ were destroyed.
④许多人并没有丧失信心。(number)
______ ______ ______ people didn’t lose heart.
⑤他们立刻前来救援，救出了一些困在废墟中的人，并掩埋死者。（right away,bury）
They came to the rescue ______ ______, saved some people who were trapped under the ruins，and______ ______ ______.
⑥在灾难面前，他们非常愿意帮助那些处于困境中的人。（too...to...）
They were ______ willing ______ help those in trouble in the face of disasters.
⑦我们再怎么赞扬他们也不为过。(can’t...too...)
We ______ praise them ______ highly.
Keys：①caused ②lay in ruins；at an end ③Not all
④ A great number of ⑤ right away，buried the dead ⑥too,to
⑦can't，too
4.满分作文（连句成篇）
请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的文章。
Dear grace,
I’m sad to tell you something about the earthquake in my hometown that happened days ago. It caused much damage and many injuries and deaths.
Wherever we went, we found everything lay in ruins. It seemed as if the world were at an end. However, not all were destroyed and to our relief, a great number of people didn’t lose heart. They came to the rescue right away, saved some people who were trapped under the ruins, and buried the dead.
They were so kind and helpful that they were too willing to help those in trouble in the face of disasters, so we cant praise them too highly.
Best wishes.
Yours faithfully,
Li hua
5.佳作背诵
（1）佳作一
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter来信告诉你他的家乡刚刚发生了一场地震。这场地震不仅造成了很大的损失，也给 Peter留下了心理阴影。请根据以下要点，写一封信安慰他。
①不要独处，要将自己的感受说出来，与别人分享；
②多和家人、朋友或者同学联系，多与他们沟通；
③如果太过紧张或忧郁，可以求助于医生。
注意：①词数80左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I am sorry to hear that you just experienced an earthquake. I know you must be frightened and worried now. I have some advice that may help to lessen your fear and anxiety.
Firstly, you shouldn’t spend any time alone. You should share your feelings with others. Secondly, you can talk with your family, friends or classmates and let them know what you are thinking. Finally, if you feel too nervous or scared, you can turn to a doctor and ask for some treatment.
I hope you can recover from this disaster soon. I believe you can do it.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
（2）佳作二
（2019 山东曲阜师大附中高一月考）假设你是李华是一所国际学校广播站的英语播音员。为提高大家的防震意识，你校将举办一次地震演习。请你根据所提供的信息，用英语写一篇广播稿。
地震演习
时间 下周二上午 10：00 —11:00
参加人员 全体学生
要求 ①班主任先召开班会，对学生进行指导； ②各班学生记住自己的疏散路线，听到信号立即开始疏散； ③最后班主任带领学生到操场集合； ④各班抽出2名学生作为志愿者维持秩序。
注意：①词数80左右
②开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；
③可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：演习drill信号 signal集合 gather
Dear boys and girls,
Attention, please!
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That’s all. Thank you.
One possible version:
Dear boys and girls,
Attention, please!
An earthquake drill is to be held from 10: 00 am to 11: 00 am next Tuesday. All the students are required to take part n the drill. Class meetings should be held first to give the students some instructions on what to do when an earthquake occurs. It is important for students in each class to bear in mind your escape routes. On hearing the signal, students should escape immediately under the guidance of the class teacher All the students are to gather in the playground. Two student volunteers should be chosen from each class to keep order during the drill.
That’s all. Thank you
