上海杨浦区2022-2020年中考英语二模试题-作文
一、话题作文
1．（2022·上海杨浦·统考二模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据以下情境写不少于60个词的论坛帖子及回复等，标点符号不占格。）
阅读D篇的论坛帖子中谈到了生活中发生的一些尴尬事件。假设你是Sandy，请在论坛中发帖，讲一个发生在自己身上的尴尬事件，并设想你的朋友Jill会如何与你互动，写下你们之间的一问一答。
注意：
1．文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息。
2．照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Sandy 25 October 9.00 p.m.
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Jill 25 October 9.05 p.m.
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Sandy 25 October 9.08 p.m.
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2．（2021·上海杨浦·统考二模）Write at least 60 words on the given “________ has changed me”. (以 _______ 改变了我为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
世间瞬息万变，凡事都在变化，都在发展，我们也在不断地调整、改变自己。某些人、事、经历改变着我们的心态、行为、价值观、思维方式、生活方式等。请结合题目和自己的经历，谈一谈自己的改变。
(注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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二、书信作文
3．（2020·上海杨浦·统考二模）Write a letter of at least 60 words based on the given situation. (根据所给情境，写一封不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格)
A friend of yours is studying at home and has asked you to recommend a learning tool. 你的一位朋友最近在家自学，想请你推荐一个学习工具。
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
say what the learning tool is (give it an interesting name)
describe the learning tool and its uses
tell the reason why you recommend it
Remember: the learning tool can be a reference book, a website, a program, an app, or whatever you use to help you with your study.
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参考答案：
1．例文：
Sandy 25 October 9.00 p.m.
On my first day of school, I found everything was strange. After school, I wanted to go to a toilet, but there were so many people that it was hard to find one for girls in the teaching buildings. So I hurried out of my school and suddenly find an empty toilet. No one was in the toilet. It was so strange. When I came out of the toilet, I knew the reason. It was a toilet for boys! My face turned red at once.
Jill 25 October 9.05 p.m.
Did someone see you run out of the wrong toilet
Sandy 25 October 9.08 p.m.
No. I was lucky. I fast ran away and no one knew what happened to me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为三段论坛帖子及对话，主要记叙生活中的尴尬事件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏后两段对话，且内容要与帖子相互呼应，符合逻辑，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描写帖子内容。首先表明尴尬事件发生的时间、地点，阐述起因；然后具体描述事件的发生过程，同时通过动作、心理活动等方面进行细节描写。
第二步，根据帖子中描写的事件结果“我走错厕所”，进行合理推测，提出疑问“有没有人看到走错厕所”。
第三步，回答提出的问题，表示“自己很幸运”。
[亮点词汇]
① on my first day of school 我第一天在学校
② hurried out of my school 匆忙赶出学校
③ at once 立刻，马上
④ happened to me 发生在我身上
[高分句型]
①I found everything was strange.（find后接宾语从句）
②I wanted to go to a toilet, but there were so many people that it was hard to find one for girls in the teaching buildings.（but连接两个并列句，so...that...引导结果状语从句）
③When I came out of the toilet, I knew the reason. （when引导时间状语从句）
2．例文
Difficulty has changed me
Last year, my father bought me a very thick book. The book has more than 500 pages. At the beginning, I felt a lot of pressure because I didn’t know when I would finish reading the book. But my father told me that I could do it as long as I worked hard. I began to realize that instead of being afraid of difficulties, I wanted to be brave. So I read two pages a day. I finally finished reading it this year. My father said he was proud of me.
At first, it was very difficult for me to finish reading the book. But when I finally overcame this difficulty, I realized that I had become brave.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇半命题作文。要求补充完整题目“________ has changed me”，再结合题目和自己的经历，谈一谈自己的改变。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可以从自己经历的困难、心理变化等方面讲述困难使自己变得更勇敢。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
3．例文：
Dear Mike,
I’ve learnt that you are studying at home now because of the virus. As for the learning tool, I want to recommend an American sitcom called Friends, which has been on for twenty-five years. It's a story of six young people. They came to New York City to find love, success, adventure and fun. Each of the characters had a different personality. However, they were able to overlook their differences and became good friends.
You can watch the series on the Internet. Watching English TV series such as Friends is really helpful to your English study. You can write down the words and phrases you don’t understand. Translate them and then imitate the pronunciation. And, to make it more fun, think about the life lessons you can learn from the show. Through watching the show, you can not only learn about American culture but also improve your conversational English.
I sincerely hope you can achieve success and keep healthy from the bottom of my heart.
Yours,
Tony
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应根据内容提示介绍一个学习工具，讲述工具的使用以及推荐的理由。
2.例文点评：例文主要用第二人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作，讲述工具的使用及推荐的理由叙述完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：because of；as for；want to；such as；write down; learn from; from the bottom of my heart。
句型：not only…but also…句型；which引导的定语从句；and表示并列的句子。
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